~deewangi~ MAANEET FF thread 5 - Page 85

geet 👏

they both are deewana towards eachother they can never go apart maan is body and geet is the soul

awesome yaar

Wow our litle geet to badi samjhdar hai

Am geving geet big bow for trust maan more than her self wooow very lovely part

mushki...r going to update khamoshi...!!!

pls do yaar...!!

we r eagerly waiting for its update...!!!

main phir se tumhe tang karne a gaye

part 42 pe comment nahi karon gi



papa ji

13th day pooja was completed. All the 13 days Maan stayed out there outside the door.


part 43



On 15th day Maan told to geet to get ready for school while he freshened up in the vanity van parked at the portico of the Handa hawali. Geet got dressed & came out to meet Rano. She kissed Rano who looked really lost.

Geet - mama main school javon?
Rano - umm
brij interfered - oye koi zarorat nahi


Geet snapped back - mujhe school jana hain
brij - kaha na nahi jana

Brij - tumhari TC ki baat kar li hain humne school main
Geet snorted her nose took her bag & ran towards the door & bumped on Maan.
Brij stretched his hand to hold her hand, Maan held it mid air.
She hugged Maan & cried - mujhe school nahi jane de rahen. o aya apna hero.

Brij - oye chod meri bahen ko
Maan twisted his hand & kicked him still holding on to Geet with the other hand.

Rano suddenly heard them all shouting at Maan to stop.
Rano screamed - Maan
he stopped at once & looked at her in anger

Rano - BRIJ chodo use. Maan drop Geet to school.
Maan was still fuming
Rano - NOW

I won't let u go anywhere. He said it firmly.
Geet - I love u a lot

Rajender - every thing will be taken care off, you don't have to worry
Rano felt something was surely fishy now
Rajender - we have spoken to the lawyer & rahul about it.
Rano - nahi veerji uss sab ki zaroorat nahi hain
Rajenders voice becomes harsh - we are going to HP now, its not an option
the servants come down with 5 big suitcases with their belongings
Rano to darji - darji hum yanhi rahna chaten hain
darji - how can we leave u alone here?
Rano - nahi we will manage, unhone sab kuch kar rakha hai, yah ghar bhi tho
Rajender - I have already sold this hawali

sorry yaar but is tension me bhi mujhe song yaad a rha he old he but gold he so bardast karo

hmm…
aap andar se kuchh aur
bahar se kuchh aur nazar aate hain
bakhuda shakl se to
chor nazar aate hain
umr guzri hai saari chori mein
saare sukh chain band
jurm ki tijori mein.......................

aap ka to lagta hai bas yahi sapna
ram ram japna paraaya maal apna
aap ka to lagta hai bas yahi sapna
ram ram japna paraaya maal apna

Rano was shocked, she fell down on the floor regretting signing those papers admist of all confusion on the 4th day. She felt they are upto something really nasty, she cried - bej di
Rajender - business ka aapko fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi, I will stay here & take care of it.
Every thing started to become clear to Rano they wanted the money, she definitely didn't want her children to be caught between this dirty money game. Before she could say anything, thai ji guided her out of the hawali.
Brij - jaldi karna padega, warna woh kamina kuch kar sakta hain
Rano slapped Brij - mind ur words
Brij got irritated but darji held him back - Maan kuch nahi kar sakta, yeh humara ghar ki baat hain
Rajender - lets make it fast, we will pick Geet from her school
Rano tried her level best to stay back..she rushed inside & cried looking at papaji's photo.



part 44

Rano's legs were rooted the ground, she immediately picked the phone & called Maan.
Maan - mama
Brij snatched the phone & slammed it - chachi challo abhi
Rano - main ne kanhi ahi jana

Brij to the driver - oye gadi kyun rok di?
Driver - shahab us car ne rasta roka huwa hain
Brij actually panicked - Maan he whispered looking at Rajender.


jis ka mujhe tha intezaar
jis ke liye dil tha beqaraar
wo ghadi aa gayi aa gayi...............................

Darji - yah humare ghar ka malla hain, tum insab main mat pato
Rajender - we are not going to take this nonsense of yours. We are doing our best to take care mohinder's family
Rano - no they are behind our money she spat
Rajender - wat our we going to gain Rano, every thing is in geets name, we just don't want it to go to wrong hands until she is able to take care of herself.
Maan - NO ..nothing is in geets name.
Rajender smiles wickedly - We will be taking care of it until she is 18
Maan - its in my name

Maan continued punching like an Armageddon - her husband...get it ..I am her husband. Aur usse mujh se koi dur nahi kar sakta khud woh bhi nahi. Woh sirf meri hain, Maan ki Geet.

Rano cried & hugged her. Rano was not able to explain the cruelty her own blood is wanting to cause her. She couldn't say anything she sobbed. He drove the car to his house & told nakul to get the luggage upstairs. As they walked in Daadi was surprised. Maan held geets hand tightly.
Daadi - yeh sab kya hain Maan
Rano hugged Daadi & whispered Rajender's mean intentions so that Geet couldn't hear them.
Daadi got some water for them. Maan stood their clutching her wrist hard & harder
Daadi - beta chodo usse
Maan - nahi, yeh meri hain
Daadi was little uncomfortable with those raw words she looked at Rano with a sorry face.
Maan - she is my wife & she will stay with me
Daadi was totally shocked & guilty , she thought Maan was going into her sons path.
Daadi was getting angry now - Maan leave her alone.
Maan hugged her madly - I won't leave her, they will take her away from me. He suddenly became a small boy fearing to lose his most pierced possession.




Daadi knocked the door - Maan yah sab galat hain. Don't do any thing to her. Plz Maan
Rano kept her hand on daadi's shoulder - she is safest in his arms. Woh bas dara huwa hain. Woh usse kuch nahi karega.

Daadi & Rano settled down in the hall. Waiting for Maan to calm down. Rano told Daadi about their wedding & how their fondness for each other has increased ever since.

Loved da update
I'm so glad Geet told her uncle wer to go

wow Geet's trust in Maan is so deep..

Loved the update...tx

part 45

Daadi - beta before u take any decision I want u to know every thing about Maan
Rano rested her hand on daadi's hand that rested on her lap - I know one thing that Maan loves her more than self. I don't want to know anything else & nothing else matters. mami g tusi great ho



this is for u
Rano knocked at the door. He didn't respond.
Rano - beta subha se tum dono ne kuch nahi khaya
Maan - mujhe bhook nahi hain
Daadi - Geet ko to bhook lagi hogi na
he got up at once & opened the door & went out & locked the door from out side. His eyes was red & swollen. Daadi tried to go in he blocked the door - woh so rahi hain
Rano - aacha tum tho dinner kar lo
Maan - nahi mujhe bhook nahi hain
Geet felt cold with no Maan around a sudden chillness. She got up & started crying feeling scared mama😭 mama..😭
Maan ran at once to her. Hugged her - kya huwa tumhe? Kya huwa?
She was still scared & crying with her eyes closed
Rano - new place she would have got scared. Usse aapne bed main sone ki aadat hain. Rano could not control the her tears as she said those words reminded of their dream house being sold ruthlessly.
Maan roared - I will get her place back tomorrow itself, he took his phone & went out to call his contacts to get the hawali back.

Maan having his dinner coolly - Geet mere saat hi rahegi
Geet looked at him, not that she minded but she was seeing him voicing it.
Daadi - yanha pe jagah kanha hain beta?
He held her hand - yeh mera room main rahegi, aur mama aapke room main
Daadi - lekin beta
he got up mid of his dinner & smashing the glass on the floor - kaha na mere saat rahegi tho bus rahegi. he shot a fuming look to every one & walked away.

Geet took his dinner plate & went to him. He was looking outside the window. She slowly fed him. He ate it quietly. She came back with a smile - dehko mama pura finish kardiya
Daadi - beta aap kyun nahi kahte Maan se
Geet - nahi Daadi I can't say anything that would hurt him.
Rano - but u both can't be living together already?
Geet - if he wants it that way it will be that way.

Maan - nahi mama iss bar main kisi ki baat nahi sunuga
Rano - lekin log kya kahenge?
Maan - I don't care wat anyone says
Rano - lekin woh abhi bachi hain
Maan - lekin main koi bacha nahi, I know my limits

4 body guards will be with her all the time he added.
Daadi & Rano looked at him in shock. Geet was feeling excited thinking about the body guard concept. She hugged him & kissed him - maza aayega na.

Rajender came forward & softly & lovingly - Geet beta hum hain aapke thau ji
she kept quiet
Rajender - we came to get u home, give u back wat Maan has taken away from u
oops he spoke the wrong words
she shot a stern look to all of them - I don't talk to strangers

Rajender - beta he has taken all ur papaji's hard earned money. He sold ur hawali too..
Maan just reached there, but held back his steps to see Geet actually was quiet listening to them.