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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ppl😊.......ok so as i am miserably caught up with too many irritating things right now, i am absolutely not able to reply to all ur comments but i have read each every one of it and i am so so so happy that the response is good. U KNOW WHAT???? ur CRITICISM IS WELCOME too, since it'll only make me do better, so u all can bash me when my update is not upto mark😉😆, well enjoy the update for now😊



chapter 22

geet is still wondering how to speak to him. should she tell him the truth or not??? she thinks for a while and

decides to irritate him. maan was watching her keenly.

geet: aapse matlab???
maan: geet it's 1.20 in the night. dont u think you should be at home right now???
geet: arey wah, meri life hai aur meri marzi. aap kyun fikar kar rahe hain???
maan: tum har baath pe jagda karne ki shock hai kya???
geet: maine kab jagda kiya???
maan: tu abhi kya kar rahi ho???
geet: main tho aapki sawaalon ki jawaab de rahi hun.....
maan: jawaab???
geet: aur nahi tho kya???
maan: geet tum mere sawaalon ke jawaab nahin balki ulta mujhe hi sawaal pooch rahi ho.
geet: nahin, main aapko jawaab de rahi thi....
maan: kya???
geet: haan
maan: iska matlab ki tumhaare sawaal hi jawaab the???
geet: maine aisa tho nahi kahan.
maan: geet tum paagal ho gayi ho
geet: kya??? aapne mujhe paagal kahan???
maan: kyun tumhe sunayi nahin di???
geet: paagal main nahin, aap hai.
maan: geet main tumhara boss hun, sambhalke baath karo.
geet: par maine abhi tak office join nahin kiya hai.....
maan: par monday tho join karogi.....
geet: tho???
maan: tho tumhe mujhse baath karne pehle, sochna padega.....
geet: oh hello??? is galat faimli main math raho ki main har baar sochkar aapse baath karungi
maan: kya???
geet: haan bilkul,.....aap maan sir sirf office main hai, baahar nahin!!!
maan: geet...
geet: maan.......
maan: geet tum had paar kar rahi ho
geet: arey wah, yeh tho na insaafi hai....
maan: nainsaafi???
geet: haan bilkul......aap tho khule aam mujhe geet pukaarthe hain tho main bhi aapko office ke baahar maan hi

pukarungi. samjhe aap???

maan gets irritated and puts a finger on her lips, with a piercing gaze into her eyes and says....

maan: chup, bilkul chup!!! kitna bug bug karthi ho geet??? tum tho shataabdhi express se bhi fast bolthi ho.....

geet feels a shock wave thru her body by his touch. she just stops blabbering and looks into his eyes searching.

silent prevails for a long time, before maan realises there closeness and steps back taking his hands back and

turns sideways. geet too comes back to reality and straightens her dupatta. they both think something and turn

towards each other, but they stop abruptly....finally maan speaks

maan: ab chalein ya yahin raat guzaarne ka iraada hai tumhaara???

geet nods for a no. maan grins at her, he locks his car, while geet gets back to the driver seat and opens the door

for maan to get in. maan comes and sits beside her in the car. geet looks at him for approval and he nods. she

starts th car and they leave. silence prevailed again enveloping the dark night. finally geet speaks up...

geet: waise aap yahan? is waqt kaise???

maan who was busy looking outside the window, turns to look at her when she speaks.

maan: jab maine tumse yahin sawaal kiya tha tho tumne tho ulta mujhe hi sawaal poocha tha.
geet: woh main.......
maan: koi baath nahin, tum nahin bathaana chahthi tho main tumhe force nahin karunga. waise main office se ghar

jaa raha tha aur tyre puncture ho gaya, iss waqt tho koi mechanic nahin milega aur driver bhi chutti par hai.

he says that turns towards thw window again??? geet was surprised to hear that he was in office till now.

geet: aap office main kya kar raha the maan??

maan twitches at his name and turns to her,

maan: office main log kaam karthe hai geet, tho main bhi wahin kar raha tha!!!
geet(lookin forward): kaam??? itni der tak???
maan: tumhe koi problem hai usme???
geet: mujhe kya problem ho sakthi hai??? main tho sirf yeh kehna chahthi ki normal insaan 6 se 8 baje tak ghar

pahuch jaathe hain.
maan(adjusting his position so he faced geet completly and annoyed): tho tum yeh kehna chahthe ho ki main normal

nahin hun???
geet(giving a fake smile): maine aisa thodi na kahaan....
maan: waise dekha jaaye tho normal log is waqt apne ghar so rahe hothe hai. tumhaari tarah, bhooth banke nahin

ghoomthe.
geet(with her punjabi look): tho aap yeh kehan chahthe hai ki main bhooth hun???
maan: bilkul.....tumne sahi socha hai...
geet: maan aap jaanthe bhi hai ki main iss waqt yahan kya kar rahi hun???
maan: geet tum bataogi tab mujhe patha chalegana??? mujhe kya sapna aaya hoga ki tum kya kya karthe ho din

bhar???
geet(pulls the break, the car halts, she turns completely towards maan): excuse me??? main apne doston ke saath

dinner ke liye gayi thi, samjhe(pinning her index finger to maan's chest).
maan(unaware of the close proximity bw them, leans forward): kis kushi main???
geet: mujhe naukri mili haina iss liye.....ab kush???
maan: haan bilkul........ab main keh saktha hun ki tum bhooth nahin ho.
geet: thats better

geet turns, starts the car and drives towards KM. maan looks towards the window, with a winning smile. finally he

was successful in knowing as to what geet was doing at this hour??? geet hardly realised that she invariably had

fallen for his plot and blurted out the truth....a few minutes passed and they finally reached maan's home. geet

stops the car and looks at him. maan too looks at her.

geet: aapka ghar aagaya.....
maan: jaantha hun. geet mujhe lagtha hai ki aaj raat tumhe yahin rukhna chahiye. bahut der ho gayi hai ur

tumhaare ghar main bhi sab so chuke honge.
geet: thanks par mujhe gghar jaana hoga warna kal bhai ko problem ho jayegi....
maan: brij ko kya problem hoga???
geet: woh bas aise hi
maan: geet main brij ko phone karke batha dunga tum aaj yahin rukh jao.
geet: maine kahan na ki brij bhai ko problem ho jayegi....
maan: usse koi problem nahi hogi
geet: aap, bhai ko behthar jaanthe hai ya main???
maan(scratching his head): ofcourse tum ,par problem kya hai???
geet(annoyed, yells ta maan): its personal.....

maan steps out of the car in anger. he dint expect her to shout at him like that. geet closes her eyes realising her

mistake. she too steps down from the car and walks to him.

precap: will she or wont she???


link to next chapter

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1595304&TPN=123&#40518882


no, how was it????? hope u enjoyed it...plz plz plz comment and hit the like button. and this time i am gonna update only if the number of likes is over 90😉😆......


yeah, u all can call me selfish!!!!! i send PM to around 120 ppl and all i get back is 40 odd comments and 60 to 70 odd likes. absolutely not done😉.....so this time i want to see how u all will react if i threaten since i have let u all on a "CLIFFHANGER".......ENJOY!!!!! THANKS😊


if u want me to pm u, plz add me as ur buddy!!! thanks😊

Edited by samaira39 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
OMG geet spend the night at KM.. she should she should she should!!!!
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d update...
plz let her stay in KM😍..
it would be fun to see smthing like dis..
update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
grrrrrrrrr u to literally left us at "CLIFFHANGER"..
i pressed like button and also post
my commant baki ke 89 ka to pataa nahi 😕
lovely update as usual
cont soooon
thnx for d PM 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweety abt LIKING some of the people use mobile for internet and hense they cannot press the like botton abt those who can and still dont are lazy haha . . . . coming to the update it was lovely but but but bujt but but a cliff hanger but its not a bad one i mean i am not pulling my hair out thinking what will happen . . . so yes is not a cliff hanger for me until i pull my hair out . . . coz i have a faint idea she will tell him . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update loved it ......
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part...loved it......continue soon............
...n thnx 4 the pm........
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update samaira......
i guess geet will stay at maan's place
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

sweety abt LIKING some of the people use mobile for internet and hense they cannot press the like botton abt those who can and still dont are lazy haha . . . . coming to the update it was lovely but but but bujt but but a cliff hanger but its not a bad one i mean i am not pulling my hair out thinking what will happen . . . so yes is not a cliff hanger for me until i pull my hair out . . . coz i have a faint idea she will tell him . . .


yeah i am aware that my ff is kinda predictable and many here might have already guessed what geet would do but this time i can assure you of just one thing "surprise"......so i guess u will have to wait😊 and abt the liking part......it's ut POV and u r right, i agree😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
not fair yu left us with cliff hanger yu better update soonnnnnnnnnn i hope she stay love there cat
& mouse super amazing
updatepls cont soonnnnnn
thanks pm

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