a poem on ArSh-until i met you....

hi guys....how r u all?...i wrote a poem on arsh. This is the first time i have written a poem...i myself is not a fan of poetry these are just random thoughts....my whole physics lecture was free so decided to use my some of my brain....and here is the result enjoy.

Shilpa's POV

UNTIL I MET YOU

I was all alone

until I met you...

was strong and could stand alone

until I met you...

I felt the need of no one by my side

until you came and stood by my side

I felt i was strong enough

until you came and became my weakness

I felt that I can walk alone on any path alone

until my path betrayed me and lead me to you

But after the day when you came along

I was walking on the beach alone

I felt that the need not to be alone

I felt the need to have someone by my side

I felt that I was not strong enough

To fight with the game of love

And then as I raised my eye

I saw you with your bright smile

As it stretched upon my face too

I realized all my needs vanish

When you took my hand into your's

And walked with me across the shore

I thought that love didn't exist

until you became my reason to live

I was all alone

until I met you....

P.S:so guys how was it??? good bad?...plz do comment...and hit the button...it will really inspire me and help me improve..

thanks 😃

sooo amazing,...

beautifully written...

gr88 job dear......

thnx for the pm.........

Originally posted by: salinashah

hey awsome yaar

i really like this kind of peoms u have written

well do write more

love u

salina

Originally posted by: MeetPremeer

awesome dear
i myself am not a big fan of poetry
but just loved urs