FF(M&G)'Two broken hearts fall in love' ~THREAD 1~

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: smj1977

hey don't mind

but I have doen a few corrections they are in red and my quotes are in magenta

hope you don't mind,

you wrote well👏👏👏

nice FF👏👏👏

stick to English if you are not comfortable with Hindi

and add me to your pm list

hey no i dont mind. thx for correcting me. i thought by using hindi it would give it a more nicer effect and emphasis.

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Interesting!😊

Can you please add me to the PM list?😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

recap:

He gets out of the yacht'and watches it burn down and sink'.it was like he was watching what was happening in his heart play right in front of him.

Maan: Love makes you feel like your in paradise. But that lasts only for a few seconds. Soon you realize your sinking real low'down a dark abyss. Tonight I have realized loves true nature. Never will I fall in love again. Never'.. (Maan just walks away from the scene).

Part 3:

"Their first encounter"

4 years later'(Maan was 22 when Sameera broke his heart and now he is 26 years old).

Maan is out in a forest. Near the ocean aswell. When he needs to get away from life and reality he comes here. Surrounded by mother nature. He was chopping wood getting his anger and frustration out of the poor wood. He has no idea why he felt mad and frustrated. His life has been feeling like this for 4 years now. He has become a huge business tycoon'but still under that hard core tough guy look something is missing. He is not happy.

Girl: Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!

Maan snapped out of his thought something about that scream about that word sounded familiar. It was a sound of pain.

At first Maan thought his mind was playing a trick on him'trying to remind him of his past, which he has tried to forget.

But his heart did not want to accept that'

He decides to check it out'

He is near the ocean now'he sees a small figure of a girl'almost like a shadow'and it appears to be slowly disappearing'

Maan without thinking without having any reason runs into the water. After a minute of searching he pops out of the water with the girl in his arms.

(imagine that its night time though...😆)

Maan just stood their mezmorized by the big brown eyes that was looking at him in shock. But there was more to these eyes than just shock'there was pain. Something he had felt 4 years ago'something he still feels and has to live with everyday.

He snaps out of his thought and carries the girl out of the water.

He puts the girl on the ground and starts to boil in anger.

Maan: What the hell were you trying to do?

Girl: ummm

Maan: you didn't answer my question

Girl: leave me alone (she tries to run into the ocean again')

Maan: Stop trying to kill yourself

Girl: Who r you? And why do you care what happens to me when not even the so-called love of my life gives a damn about me'?

Maan: I do not care what your personal problems are, but that does not mean you can get to kill yourself! Everybody has problems' you think you are the only one that has problems???

Girl: Why are you screaming and give me a lecture. I don't even know you. Why don't you just leave me alone. Please let me end my pain'please'

Maan: You are not going to kill yourself. People are going to think I may have killed you. If you want to die so much go die somewhere else.

That's all it took for Geet to shatter into a million pieces again. Not even a stranger has mercy on her or cares for her. Who was she kidding. her own family and the love of her life does not care for her than how will a stranger care for her. All Geet ever wanted was to be loved by at least someone in this world'Why did she always have to be and feel alone.

As these ran through her thoughts she slowly looses consciousness.

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Maan: What am i doing. I don't even know the girl's name but i am still helping her.

Previous Part ~ Burning the memories

Next part~How did i get myself into this mess

If you like the update hit the like button. And leave nice and long comments😊

Edited by zeynab111 - 14 years ago

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

nice update

waiting 4 more maaneet

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

too good..........................update regularly.............................😊

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

love the update .

do continue plz

thx.

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Nickname : Zee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: manashi
too good..........................update regularly.............................😊

thx yaar. i can't promise, but i will try my best too update regularly. i know the feeling i read a lot of ff's aswell.

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Awe poor maan turned into an angry young man and awe poor geet trying to kill herself but maan to the rescue lol anyways great update and ooh maans already starting to help her out 😊