Mayank&Nupur:Tumhe Haq hai#2 -Part 31 Pg 139

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Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

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great you finally updated!.....i really liked this chapter....though im confused as to what mayank is feeling at the end of the chapter....i hope hes finally softening up to nupur......i liked the picture scene and the sanu conversation.....will wait for the next update!.....naina

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

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edited...

And yes i edited today because if i delay it more i might not be able to edit for a few days...

Firstly Sajjal that was one the most beautiful update u ever written. U have written many parts but some parts touch ur heart... and i can proudly say this was one of them... I'm just in awe right now... seriously Sajjal mind blowing update... 👏

As per the story i'm extremely happy the way they got married and the red veil was just the cherry on the top... 😳

I'm worried for Gunjan, is something wrong with her or the baby?

& finally i got the fight... i loved start of the fight but the last part was a bit painful. It feels like Mayank has become heart less... Hope he soon realize his feelings... but i loved the small cute scene in the temple at least there is some progress....

For the SG track... This is a MN-SG ff so it would be necessary ...

Awesome update Sajjal loved it to bits... My absolute favorite part till now...😳'

-Laiba

Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago

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AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: princez_94
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Laiba....you are on a reserving spree😆😆

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

tht was really nice part congrats for your new thread

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.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: AmyArTiMayUr

Laiba....you are on a reserving spree😆😆

Excuse me...😲 I feel so hurt... Jab apne he aise baat kehte hai...😭

Okay enough nautanki... In fact not this time Amina... For maybe the first time i reserved and edited on the same day...😆😃 lekin zyada khush matt hona this may be the first and last time... 😆

THH ke second thread ki khushi mein, meine aaj he unres kar diya hai...😳

-Laiba

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SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

So happy u decided to continue this story!!🤗

Congrats on the new thread.

Wow!!! Amazing! !

As usual, I loved everything in this part. The first part with Nupur running from the court and not wanting to lie to Dadi...shows the state the poor girl is in. I loved their temple wedding and of course, the red veil!!! I guess it was waiting for the Bahu who really loved the Eldest son! The photo part was nice too...

SG-looks like some complication in her pregnancy and only one can be saved...I hope things go alright for them.

Gunjan- totally understandable why she would react that way.

Dadi - is superb! She stays in character at all points (I mean walking slowly and all)

Sam - He is really the bestest friend one can have...always there for Nupur no matter what she does. Loved how he was trying to irritate her..LOL

Mayur part at end - Mayank was kind of mean. I understand he was cheated in a way but he shouldn't be this mean.

The photoframe part...guess it symbolizes how Mayank still loves Piya (I still hate them as a couple..can't help it) but is moving on slowly. He remembers Nupur and is stroking the picture..I hope he becomes nicer to her soon. This was my fav part beside the veil one.

Continue soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago