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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Nice Update Mulan
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
keep it up

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

wow!!!!!!AMAZING PART!!!!!!!! BUT TOO SHORT!!!!!!

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Naina

@sumonetolub

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

great job on this part......so shes finally falling for him.......and its great to know she wants the marriage to work........naina

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umaima

@cutiepie12

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

😳ufffffff ur last line jus blew me away...👏

awwww it ws such a cute update....i jus love mayur....deir feelings for each other r soo pure....yet nupur is not understanding it....i jus love her fears n hesitation towards mayank😳

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

wow superb part

just loved it😊

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

ok so u were shy on this..😡🤣..stupid girl!..😡🤣

btw i would confess that i read the last part in clg, on ur notebook,..sorry!..😆😆

but the update was wonderful, and the song is one of my all time favorites..and the whole scene was very heart warming and very soothing..loved it!..very sweet, and cute update..just like u..😳🤗

and stops thanking me!..main ne kia kiya?...😲😡..

love u sweet..🤗..cont. soon..🤗

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-CreativeSoul-

@-CreativeSoul-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

wow that was such an awsome part

i loved how u wrote it

really like ur writting style

cont soon

love

tanzeel

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Hey Mulan beautifully written part ... well executed and I am loving the story, Mayank and Nupur both need to put some efforts to make the marriage work ... waiting to see how Gunjan and Samrat come together ...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Mulan.. Sweety... I am so sorry that I didn't comment on the past 5 parts.. but I am totally in love with this story.. and Iktara... such a beautiful song.. and you did full justice to the song, the story.. and yes MN too..

Beautiful Update !!

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sanaya khan

@.Sanayaa.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

wow..!!

luks like m the last person to comment😆

i HATE YU I HATE YU I HATE YU 😡there is no sajan scene's why??!! its like its a mayur FF but i luv yu for those romantic scene's muahzzz..!! but i srsly enjoyed the scene's with the lovely song i cud imagine it in my head and i think nupur ashud go more more more closer 😍

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