FF (M&G):Close Yet So Far(2)-[Note Pg.142]

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#651

Awesomeeeeeeee update
Loved it
Gr8 part
OMG Haha That was hilariousss..lolz
Maan used to..... when he was 13?
OMG HAHA🤣
Awh adi ppinky going out..lolz
Loved the maaneet scene awhh at the end
lolz dadi is funny haha
continue soon
Loved the update
Thank u

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#652

That was awesum part

Loved it

Dadi was awesum

She really embrass Maan lik anythg hehehehe

Geet n Dadi

Maan peed heheheheh

Bechara Maan

Phas gaya

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saim

@amzu32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#653

nice update...childhood story 🤣

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soniaz121

@soniaz121

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#654

amazing and plastic bed sheets omg 🤣

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#655

loved da update

do continue

it was amazing

update soon

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#656

wonderful update!love in the air!plz update soon

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#657

loved it...

daadi is so cool....😎

maan doesnt stand a chance in front of the 2 ladies...😆

adi n pinky to chupe rustam nikle....😆

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#658

loved the update...................embarassing msk abt his childhood not gud geet..............

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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#659

awwww that was awesome....really loved it

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MaansMishti

@MaansMishti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#660

Wow I havent read this FF for just 2 weeks and so much has happend 😆. Love how Maan and Geet's relationship is forming slowly....the rat scene was hilarious 🤣. And wow the talk Maan and Geet had in his cabin was so funny.....I didnt kno Geet was this open in her relationship but then I read wat wud happen once theyre married....bechara Maan 😆....has to go thru so much bcuz of Geet LOL. And wow loved how u brought in someone for Arjun as well....I love his character way better than the show....I can so imagine the Arjun from the show as this gay Arjun cuz he always seems gay to me in the show anyways 😉🤣. But why Yash yaar....cant imagine him like this ahaha.....why cudnt it have been Manav...he wudve pakka been the perfect guy for Arjun 😳. BTW wat happend at the store...u kinda left it hanging in the middle....did Arjun ask Yash out or wat?! LOL And OMG Adi and Pinky already go out?! 😲 WAT? HOW? SINCE WHEN? 😆.....tht was totally unexpected BUT I love it 😃!! I cant believe Adi has been doing this behind Maan's back event though he's dead scared of him 😆 and AHAHA loved Adi's pick-up line he used on Pinky....tht was so cute and like Pinky said the best pick-up line I have ever heard 😉. WOW Maan and Geet romancing in the house already 😲.....chi chi babaji no sharam at all 😆. Oh btw loved the song Maan was singing to find her....so cute 😊. PLZ jaldi update the next part....so wanna find out wat happens next!

P.S. I dont kno if I told u before but I love ur Geet....she's so funny and weird at the same time! Just when I think she cant get and more weirder...there she goes and does something unexpected 😆.....I love the way ur write this FF with spontaneity!! 👏