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Posted: 14 years ago
awesooome...
superb...
fab...
wonderful...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Varsha, Sorry took so long to read it but it was worth the wait.
I loved it and can't wait for the update.
Please update soon, I'm really eager to read further 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved n i think vikas is only vicky
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Posted: 14 years ago
Varsha, loved the update, read both the parts today, sorry for the delay sweetheart but I loved it. I'm so glad that you got Sasha exposed in front of Maan and loved the terrace pe sone ka scene. 😊
Waiting for the next update 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Varshu read the 15th part too and loved it, please update soon. We miss you please come back soon 🤗
Don't forget to PM me, you forgot for the last two parts 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
sasaha ki sazaa dekh ke mann ko thandak mil gayee..!!!
vicky ki bhi enrty.wowww
jaldi jaldi aa jaa...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ sakshi.ekansh: thank u sakshi..
@ geet06: haan yar.. maan ke siblings ki list khatham hi nahi hoti.. thank u..
@ Tama: thank u so much yar...luvd ur pictorial way.. thanks once again
@ maneet-56: thank u
@ spee: thank u so much.. luvd ajab maan ki gazab geet dialogue of yours,, thanks yar
@ deeps: thank u
@ shivikasavvy: thank u
@ priti: thanks priti
@ Dee: thank u so much for reading all the updates and luvd ur comments..sorry Dee.. ll definitely pm u.. i thought i pmd u all the parts..sorry once again
@ hinal: thanks yar
@ aash: thanks aash
PS: sorry for delay in commenting for ur replies... was out of station for a month...luvd reading all ur comments..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Varsha di when are u going to update?? Me waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Varsha di when are u going to update?? Me waiting...

sakshi i need time..10 - 15 days time chahiye...
pms mein swim kar rahi thee ithne din...phir sabke os ss n ff mein...
guests at home.. ll update asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks all for liking and commenting..comments and criticism are always welcome...guys sorry for late update and here is another update.. short update..
Maan and geet return to Khuraana mansion after sasha s sorry party and dadima introduces geet to vikas uff Vicky…maan s brother….

And geet is irritated and she calls maan and his family as bhool bhooliya family..

Geet goes n changes….while maan is resting on the bed.

She comes and finds maan lost in thoughts…she goes near to him..

Geet – maan

Maan – hmmm….geet…kuch chahiye tumhe

Geet – aapko hamesha aisey kyun laagtha hai ki jab bhi main aapka naam pukaaru toh mujhe kuch chahiye hotha hai

Maan – wo..geet….mera woh mathlab nahi tha…

Geet – toh kya mathlab tha Mr. khuraana sahab ka

Maan still lost…

Geet – maan….

She has never seen maan this way…she notices that something is troubling maan and he is not ready to open up his feelings…

Geet goes near maan and kisses his forehead.

Geet – maan….kya baath hai…

Tears come in maan s eyes..he hugs geet…geet reciprocates the hug..

Geet – aisa kya hua hai maan…maine aapko pehle aisey kabhi nahi dekha

Maan – geet…main apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paa raha hoon…..sasha ne tumhare saath kya kya kiiya aur maine tumhari baathoin par vishwas nahi kiya jab tum aur adi kuch kehna chahthey they…

Geet gently moves away and looks at maan…she makes him lie on the bed..

Geet – bus ithni sii baath

Maan – yeh baath mujhe ander hi ander khaaye jaa rahi hai…kii..maine…maan singh khuraana ne galaath ka saath diya…

Geet – aapne jo bhi kiiya ismein aapki koi gaalthi nahi hai…aap kudh ko dosh math dijiye maan…aapne jo bhi kiya anjaane mein kiiya…ismein aapki koi galthi nahi..

She kisses him on his left eye..

Geet – aapse aacha humsafar mujhe apni poori zindagii mein koi nahi mil saktha hai maan

She then kisses him on his right eye..

Geet – meri baghwan se hamesha yehi dua rahegi kii aap mujhe har janam mein milley…

She then kisses him on his cheeks…

Geet – aapke bina mera kuch nahi………meri zindagii hi aap hain…aap par shuru and aap par khatham..

Maan is lost in her thoughts…maan holds geet s hands very tightly….

She kisses him on his lips…and then both are lost in each other …

Next day morning….

Maan wakes up early and sees geet sleeping with her arms around him.. He admires her and then gently kisses on her forehead..

At breakfast table

Vicky comes and has breakfast along with maan geet annie and dadima…

Annie – mein late ho rahi hoon…lot of stuffs needed to be done in this new business..main chali..she leaves…

Maan – mujhe bhi office ke liye nikaalna hai…

Vicky – mujhe college ke liye late ho raha hai…lekin bro toh mujhe car challane denge nahi aur driver aaj chooti mein hai

Maan – Vicky chalo main tumhe college drop kar detha hoon…

Maan n Vicky leave….they both reach college..maan drops Vicky at the college. Vicky bids gud bye to maan n leaves from there..

When maan was about to leave..he sees rajji coming..he gets out of the car..

Rajji – jijaji..aap yahan…

Maan – wo main…

Rajji – array haan main toh bhool hi gaayee thee…aap toh is college ke trustee hain..

Maan – tum pareshaan sii lag rahi ho

Rajji – paatha hai jijaji..yahan pe ek naya banda aaya hai...kya naam hai uska..woh vikas..kya paatha...wo na nak mein dum kar rakha hai...

Maan – baath kuch jyaada badi hai kya..tum kaho toh

Rajji – arrrey nahi jijaji...aap fikaar math karo...ussey toh main dekh loongi acchi tarah se...

Vicky returns home in the evening...

Geet – vicky..tumhara din kaise gaaya aaj college mein

Vicky – poochoin math bhabhi…paatha nahi..ek ladki hai..nak mein dum kar rakha hai usne….paatha nahi kya samajhthi hai apne aap ko…

Geet – aisa kya kiya usne

Vicky – har baath mein ladaai…..jaise ladaai karna uska janam sidh adhikaar hai…choti choti cheez mein…..

Maan enters…

Maan – kya baath ho rahi hain devar aur bhabhi ke beech

Vicky is embarrassed

Geet – wo bhabhi aur devar ki beech ki baath hai…

She goes in front of maan and says…aap zaara side ho jaaiye toh….

Vicky sees this and giggles..

Maan – aaj tumhari bhabhi ko kya gaaya hai…

He goes to his room and changes…

Vicky and geet left alone

Vicky – thank god bhabhi… u saved me..varna bro ko paatha chal jaatha…waise aapko kaise paatha chala mein bro ko yeh baath nahi baathana chahtha

Geet –tumhare chehre se……..aap bhi thak gaaye honge…fresh ho ke aa jaaiye...

vicky - bhabhi..aap aaram kariiye...aisey samay mein aapko apna khayal jyaada rakhna chahiye..

He leaves…

Geet goes to her room…and doesn't finds maan…

Geet – maan..maan…aap kaahaan ho..

Maan – he comes from behind and hugs her…and says.. jab mein tumhare paas hotha hoon toh tum mujhse door bhagthi ho aur jab door hotha hoon toh tum mujhe paas bulathee ho…

Geet – aap kehna kya chahthey hain….

Meanwhile dadima enters the room

Dadima – maan betey aur geet betey…aur kitni der laagayenge aap dono….doctor ke paas jaana hai na aapko…ithni laparvahi acchi nahi..

Maan – ji dadima…abhi jaa hi rahey they

Maan takes geet for check up…

Meanwhile rajji comes home…. She asks for geet and comes to know that maan and geet went for check up…she decides to leave..

She leaves and Vicky comes..

Dadima – Vicky betey..agar kuch der pehle aap neechey aathey toh hum aapko aapki bhabhi ki behen se milaathey

Vicky – bhabhi ki behen..woh issi sehar mein rehthi hai

Dadima – haan betey….

Dadima gets a call and the call is from hospital..

maan - dadima..aap jaldi se hospital aa jaaiyee..emergency hai
dadima - aap ghabraye huye laag rahey hai maan betey..baath kya hai..
maan - wo dadima..geet ko operation theatre mein le gaaye hai..achanak se ussey labour pain shuru ho gaaya
dadima - kya..lekin yeh toh geet ka 7th month hai...aap fikaar math kijiye betey..hum abhi aathey hain...
dadima and vicky reach hospital...they meet maan and all are worried about geet and the baby..

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