~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108

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kvva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

Sidra. Wonderful story and excellent update. Thanks for it.

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Lennie

@Lennie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Hey this bit got to me

She knew that he had closed the gates of his heart so firmly that they would probably never open again.
Naina looked back at Shilpa.
Would she have to endure yet another heart break??

Shilpa cant suffer another heartbreak, otherwise she will break and be like how Sid is now, so firmly closed and no one to hold her up, what she is to Sid, there will be no one like that to her if she suffers another heartbreak, esp when this happens to be such intense and real love

Loving Naina, and her giddyness and noticing Shilpa and the look, i am glad she asked Shilpa, sooner then later and totally hit the spot when she said Sid deserves someone who loves him entirely, who doesnt expect much from him and love that will be enough for both and same for Shilpa - unconditional love.

Shame she is still at the old Sanjeevani, and i like how she views AR with disgust and what they did to Sid.

I do not like how Patni-chor looks at Shilpa, shame that he never understood anything and anyone at that time, and he was and his love was to fail, as for Ridz - i dont think she even feels much for Armaan, he is a routine to her - fight and make-up, what else did they do before, same old routine

Poor Shilpa, her going through many feelings, intense feelings are coming up, one minute she wants to see thats it nothing and then cant bear to think how she will be able to stay away from Sid for many days

Another thing is i think Shanshak's dream to see Sid run the new building came true, coz he did want SR to run it together but with Sid there, its like Shashank knows its in good hands

I am guessing the beauty pageant is for both building and soon we will see all of them together at one place

EDIT - Does Patni chor and everyone know that Shilpa is engaged and he is still looking at someone else's fiancee like that 🤢 - the man is shameless

Edited by Lennie - 14 years ago

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Nikita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Damn Sidra! WOW I was so engrossed.

It has been so wonderfully written.

Like Jenny said I love how Naina has been used in this FF and I can't wait for her to prod Sid in the right direction.

This seems really weird but I felt bad for Armaan and Riddhima, they don't deserve a happy ending - because it came through crushing innocent people but I am glad that the guilt is catching up to them Armaan heart beated to late for Shilpa. It was always going to hit their relationship - but to see how much its weird because in my head they are selfish and I guess I just saw them moving on ignoring that one year of their life.

Naina is the link - I feel like she will guide the story in some way because she will see the beginning of Sid and Shilpa and the end of AR. There is such a strong comparison between the four of them each has there own personality well at least 3 of them do 😆 I don't think Riddhima can have one she is just so confusing she portrays every personality trait its annoying!

Shilpa's self-confidence you have shown it as low, I love how Sid builds it up, but I have to hate Armaan for making her feel so worthless.

I loved how you mentioned only Sid can know a certain part of Shilpa and vis versa because its true, I don't think anyone else can reach that connection between them. 😳

I can't wait to see what happens next - I have a strange feeling - Sid is going notice only Shilpa at the fashion show and not see anyone else ☺️

Cont soon!!

Editted: Lennie I know what you mean, I don't think Shilpa can endure another heart break but with Sid I feel it is something different because she doesn't expect anything from him, she has no expectations from him in a life partner sense, because she might love him but she has told herself she can't feel like this she is forcing herself away from him because it is the only thing that is holding her from spilling her emotions and ruining her relationship well friendship with Sid. 😳 I feel she can give him her whole heart and not expect anything from him in return because she doesn't expect anything from him!

Edited by nikita_88 - 14 years ago

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Zarqa

@indian_beauty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

WOW!!!!

Sidra just WOW!!!!

A very very outstanding update. I love Naina in your FF. Her and Shilpa as friends, amazing!!! Glad to know that Naina noticed the effect Sid has on Shilpa and the look....she will help Shilpa understand this 'unwanted' feeling in her. Naina's gonna be the cupid😳

and lusty....love how SidShi are living a settled life while lusty are just breaking up and crumbling down into pieces...they really deserve it

That lusty hormaan hate the way he looks at Shilpa😡

The fashion show coming up....like Nikki said maybe Sid will only notice Shilpa and only her and maybe then a little something will happen to him too ☺️

anyways continue soon......

Love
Zarqa!

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nm21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

This really should be published...I am sooo excited to see what happens next (no pressure)!

Your writing is amazing-please tell me you write professionally! Because this is a natural attribute you have, simply wonderful to read the words, I can envisage everything, you know you get to the root of the character, such an amazing understanding of the different roles they all play. I can actually seem them infront of me...I don't have a favourite part the WHOLE thing was simply perfect!

Honestly, just perfect.

Well done xxx

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Woahh what an update
Loved it to d core <3

Starting wid Naina , I am so happy dat u included dis character in ur FF & dat too so beautifully 😳
I love dis Naina in ur FF
Shilpa & Naina being friends is amazing !!
She noticed d Siddy effect on Shilpa 😉
I feel she'll gonna play cupid b/w SidShi 😳

She saw all 4 characters ( SidShi & A---------- R ) closely & she was right dat there is some part of Shilpa which only Sid understands😳
Also dat Sid deserves someone who loves him unconditionally 😳

Shilpa thinks going away & being wid Vivek will help her in forgetting Sid ? But I feel dis distance will bring dem more close to each other.
May b Sid will also realize abt his feelings towards Shilpuuuu😳

Phoreverrrrrr Lusty couple still unsettled in their life hahahaha how can u live peacefully after breaking d hearts of 2 pure souls
Dey deserves every bit of it 😈

But I don't like how dat Hormaan looks Shilpa . Such a shameless guy 😡
As 4 Ridz dis break up & den make up den again break is just a daily routine 4 her , nothing new in dis😆

I hav a hunch dat in d Beauty Pageant all 4 of dem will b together at one place but Sid will notice only Shilpuuuu & not see anyone else 😳

Continue superrrrrrr soon....

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10124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

Absolutely wonderful update Sidra!

I always liked Naina in DMG and here she is adorable!

Shilpa is falling deeper and deeper for Sid (who wouldnt!). But Sid has closed his heart so tightly to love. Im really looking forward to see how Sid will realise how shilpa feels towards him and his reactions!

As for the lusty couple I have absolutely no sympathy for them and they deserve every bit of unhappiness they get!!

Someone should send this FF to Priya(the pathetic 'writer' of DMG) to show how a story should be told!!

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shamil

@shamil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

amazing update once again! & yes this time am more happy that it was indeed a long one.
naina -yuvi were the other couple who had hooked me to the clown show. I feel happy to see she is back here in ur ff & want to see how yuvi will react to her thoughts abt sidshi. He was the only frnd sid had; others had changed colors
ewww maiyya is back ! she makes me puke🤢 that woman can never change! & horman is feeling 'something' for shilpa ??ah, that makes me feel better. Shilpa shud use him to make sid jealous (err I mean when he opens a lil for her😉) and throw him like a tissue paper'
I agree with zeenu; some one shud sent this ff to the EMA writer

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PSharada

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

Perfecto. A beautiful and marvellous update Sidra. I liked a lot of things in this update, like the friendship between Naina and Shilpa, the affectionate brother sister bonding between Naina and Sid and the good friendship which is slowly evolving into much more meaningful between Shilpa and Sid. You know I really am happy the way you have potrayed these characters. You are damn good better than those lousy creatives of the show.

And yeah last para between Armaan and Riddhima was spot on. Armaan can now no longer fool himself that he and Riddhima were meant to be. Their relationship was never a stable one given their 2 yrs of courtship. All they did was they fought and then made up. Love and understanding has their basis in trust and unfortunately I never felt the trust between Armaan and Riddhima was strong enough and deceiving an innocent man in their quest is something their relationship can never take. They are the like the people in the desert who always are in search of water but end up chasing a mirage.

Edited by psarada - 14 years ago

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jacobharry10011

@jacobharry10011

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Posted: 14 years ago

#240

WOW WOW WOW Mindblowing update
The way Naina is trying to fing out Shilpa's feeling
Shilpa's feelings of Sid...U have written so well
Armaan n Riddhima's crumbling relationship...i thought they were married😲 ...
Bahut jaldi yaad aa gaya Armaan ko Shilpa ki😡