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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 14 OMGGG I just loved thiz part after reading thizz!! suddenly she stopped and called out mayank's name' "mayank?"'mayank also stopped' "haan bolo"' he said trying to avoid any eye contract with her' "suna tha humsfar uo hota hai jo apke saath chale aur apko thame rakhe'par mera humsfar to age nikal gaya na"'she said tauntingly' "aur jisne thama uo to ajnabi nikla'hai na?"' she said trying to look at his eyes'this time mayank looked at her..directly in her eyes' "jaruri nahi jo haath thame uo humsafar ho..kabhi kabhi kuch insaan ajnabi rahe uahi behtar hota hai"' nupur laughed a little' "tum bhool rahe ho mayank'ajnabi hi sabse bada humsafar hota hai"' "nahi nupur'har ajnabi humsafar nahi hota'saath chlana aur humsafar hona'bohot fark hai in do lafzo mai"'nupur's eyes got filled with tears' mayank kabhi aaknon aur palko ka ristha dekha hai?'mayank gave her a confused look'nupur smilled and said.. " agar palak kuch der na jhapke to aankh ro deti hai aur agar aakhon me kuch chala jaaye to palak tadap uthati hai'shayed humara rishta bhi kuch aisa hi hai'tabhi to jise mere liye rukhna tha..uo age nikal gaya'aur jise meri taraf dekhna tak nahi tha'uo chote se safar me haath tham raha hai"''mayank gave her a pitiful smile' "sapno se bahar niklo nupur'haqeekat ka samna karo"' nupur smiled' "same to you mr Sharma"' and she left inside leaving a helpless mayank behind'
u r an amazinGGG writer!!!
feeling soo sad for MayUr na

I dunno why Mayu doesnt admit he lovez her !!!
I mean he knowzz she lovez him then y ruin her life marrying Adhi???

but amazing part loved it

-Linu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 15

🤣🤣OMG I love diz part

so Mayur+Adhi in the restaurant and

I love how Nupur emotional blackmailing him to come and using phcology on him telling him dat if he doesnt come he is scared

and then in the restaurant Nupz jealouse when Aahna comezz

and then she getzz drunkzzz

and tellz Mayu to say ILY yo her

and Adhi sed he will

and he runzz away l;eaving poor Mayu to drop Nupz home

and the convozz they have in the car🤣

Nupzz iz like R u kidnapping me?? and we r going to run away n get married???🤣

u r jealous of my intelligence

Mayu saying she haz none and he started to laugh😆

and then Nupur wanting ice cream

like a kid

!!!

and then Mayu getting her
and then raining

ufff

thiz partzzz just da bestest !!!!

and then da dance😍

and then Mayu dropzz her to Diazz house

and she iz like

"bye bye bye bye"🤣

Oh my god thiz part rockzzz:)

-Linu

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 16, haha the last part

…and problem was actually in his door..!
😆

so Dia told eveyrhting to Nupur !!
yeahhh love her 4 dat

n Nupur tellz her parentz dat she doesn twant ot marry Adhi

and her dad trusted her and sed ok

and then on the other hand

Mayank his new job, and his new flat, !!!!
hezz da bestest !!!

I love independent people

and awww him putting a pic of Nupz next to his bed !!
I just wish that he tellz her how much he lovez her !!!
anywayzz gr88 part

kant wait to know who iz @ da door lol Nupur Bhushan 😆

-Linu

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Ally

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 17 u know sachi mein Tasfuuu Nupzz character she comezz in his house and tellz him
"arey ajao andar!..tumhara bhi hai ghar..ajao ajao!"…

🤣🤣

Tasfuuu

the entire part I waz laughing

for a sec I thought Nupur waz going to kill herself

and she grabbed the knife n told him dat she will kill him if he didnt say ILY

wat a girl🤣

and hez like kill me at least I'll be with afsaara

and he came closer to her

and took away knife from her pinned her to the wall

and then hezz like abb kya kiya ja i ye

and u already had ur chance to kill me

and Nupzz like I have a big heart🤣

cant actually believe I read all 17 partzz in just yesterday night, and right now.

I love love love thizz FF na sis

do contineu soon

and plezzz

zzz add me to ur pm listy

love ya🤗

muahzz

-Linu

em dieing to read next part !!!

Mayu talking with Nupz parentz