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deepti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

wow tasfia nice concept of ff

sorry for commenting so late ......

bahut saare pms the padhne ke liye

do continue soon

n thanx for the pm

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: deepti_mohit
wow tasfia nice concept of ff
sorry for commenting so late ......
bahut saare pms the padhne ke liye
do continue soon
n thanx for the pm

hey deepu thanks yaar.....but you read mayur ff?....😆
anyways thank you so much yaar .......i am so happy to see you here yaar...

love you muahh

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

hey

I AM THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT

VERY NICE UPDATE

LOVED THE CHARACTER OF MAYU AND HIS CONVO WITH GUNAN

JYST EGARLY WAITING FOR THE FIRST MEETING OF OUR DEAREST

MAYUR

Will u please include this song in your ff i just loved it

" TERE BIN NA DEKHU NA SUBH "

"ABHI KUCH DINO SE "

OF THE MOVIE "DIL TO BACCHA HA JI "

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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556195

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: shafyyy
hey

I AM THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT

VERY NICE UPDATE

LOVED THE CHARACTER OF MAYU AND HIS CONVO WITH GUNAN

JYST EGARLY WAITING FOR THE FIRST MEETING OF OUR DEAREST

MAYUR

Will u please include this song in your ff i just loved it

" TERE BIN NA DEKHU NA SUBH "

OR

"ABHI KUCH DINO SE "

OF THE MOVIE "DIL TO BACCHA HA JI "

⭐️

hey shafy.i guess its your name....
thanks a ton dear....
and i will try to include and thank for this songs.....i will surely try to add this

love you
tasfia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

part-3......

in car......
g-mayank you saw that girls photo na?..how does she look....
m-kaun?...he said being confuse...
g-are dad ne jis ladki ko adhi ke liye chuna.....
m-oh!.....uo ladki.nahi maine nahi dekhi.....
g-what?...but adhi said....
m-i know...maine usse jhoot kaha......
g-gosh mayank.you are too much......
m-yea i know...but dont tell this to adhi ok....
g-nahi mayank mai abhi jaungi aur newspaper par de dungi...."mayank ne us ladki ki photo nahi dekhi"......she said being irritate
m-ha..ha...very funny..yaar bhai ke saath rehte rehte tumhara sense of humour bilkul unhi ke jaisa hogaya hai......
g-mayank...he's my husband......
m-to mai kahan keh raha hun uo padosi ka pati hai........he said with a naughty smile on his face
g-i hate you.......
m-thank you.........thank you
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n-by god dia!.....i am so happy......aaj kitne dino baad humne saath me shopping ki na.....
d-haan yaar....long time.....
n-yea red wali dress kitni cute haina.....she said showing her the dress which she brought.....
d-yaar ab aur kitni baar dikhayegi........??
n-i love it na.....she said making a baby face.......
d-haan haan i know.........
and both headed towards the exit...
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m-gunjan....aaj ke baad tum koi bhi dress return nahi karogi aur agar karogi to apne pati ke saath ana....mujhe irritate mat karna...got that?.....mayank said trying to hold so many bags of gunjan....
g-just shut up!......jaldi chalo.....
suddenly mayank remembered something
m-gunjan....hold this....ise pakdo.....he said giving all the bags to gunjan......
g-what are you doing mayank.????......she said trying to catch the bags....
m-are mujhe mere phone ki battery badalni hai.....pata nahi kyun....its not working...tum chalo mai ata hun
g-i am waiting for you in the car .......come soon ok....
m-yup....you go...i'll be just back..
g-hmm....saying this she left towards the parking area...carring so many bags in her tiny hands....
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nupur and dia was leaving when suddenly dia's phone rang
d-shit.!!
n-kya hua?
d-actually maine apne ek friend ko ihan bulaya tha.....and he's waiting
n-ab?..
d-umm...do one thing.tu ihin wait kar.....mai bas 15 minute me ayi..ok.....
n-par....
d-i will be back dont worry....aur ihan se hilna mat......
n-hmm...jaldi ana...
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mayank was going towards the exit after taking a new battery for his phone...he was reading the information which was written on the packet....so he actually didnt see that someone was standing there......nupur was standing there with all her bags....she actually was feeling nervous....she was standing there alone.....she was only praying that dia should come back soon...atleast before she faints with nervousness.....
suddenly mayank bumped with some one and all the bags fell from her hand......
m-oh freek!......i m so sorr.....
but before he could appologise .....he was lost in the beauty standing before him....

mayank'POV
she is the most beautiful girl i have ever seen.....she looks like an angel standing in blue dress.....her eyes.which was filled with little nervousness and a little bit of anger...ofcourse because of my sudden bumping....her long black hairs....her lips....oh my god...is she a human......or some pari....

nupur bent down to pick her bags....she was already feeling so strange about standing there alone and now this was just increasing her nervousness more and more....she slowly started picking up her bags.....maynk realised that he was staring at the girl...he also bent down to help her....but more than helping he was looking at her....nupur looked up and saw mayank staring at her.....
n-excuse me....she was concious but didnt want to show
m-oh!..i am..i am really sorry.......he said coming out of his dreamland....
n-its ok...
both stood up....and nupur set her hair ...mayank just admired her and her beauty......"beautiful"....he said slowly....but nupur was nupur.she heared that.....
n-what?...what did you just say?....
m-me..no....maine..maine to kuch bi nahi kaha.....mayank said with a cute smile on his face.....and nupur cast a angry glare to him....
n-apko mujhse koi kaam hai....
m-haan....he said being lost in her melidious voice
n-ji?...
m-nahi.......mera matlab nahi......par agar ap ko kuch kaam ho to.....
n-(is he mad or what?)......look mr.pls dont try to flirt.....
m-i am not trying.....actually i AM flirting....he said with a naughty smile on his face
n-tum pagal ho kya......????...she said shocked with his courage
m-ji...abhi tak to nahi....par agar app itni khus surat lagengi to hum jaroor pagal ho jayenge.....he said coiming closer to her
n-look....mr.....whatever your name is....she said pointing her index finger at him.....mujhe koi aisi waisi ladki samajh ne ki galti mat karna.........samjhe....
m-samajh gaya......waise mera naam mayank hai.....
n-acha?.......he said with a surprised look.....mujhe to laga tum SRK,...nahi nahi uo to mera favourite hai....imraan hashmi ho.......
m-he giggled seeing her expressions which were changing so fast......waise tmhe nahi lagta...tumhe bhi mujhe apna naam batana chahiye?.....
n-kyun koi law hai kya....?...aur mai tumhe apna naam kyun bataun?
m-law to nahi hai.....par....
but before he could complete his silly talks dia came there
d-hey nupur........i am so so sorry yaar.......
m-to apka naam nupur hai?......he said W*H a victorious smile.....
n-(to dia)-itni jor se chillane ki kya jarurat thi.....thoda dhire nahi bol sakti thi....she said as she was a teacher and dia was her student..
mayank wanted to see nupur's changing expression and her angelic face more but how can we forget about gunjan.....she called mayank being im patient....
g-mayank where are you......ek battery lene me itna time lagta hai kya.....jaldi aao i am waiting....saying this she cut the phone
m-sorry ladies i need to go........(to nupur)....phir milenge nupur ji...agar kismat me milna huya to.....and winked at her
n-she just cast a angry glare to him and he being mayank just smilled in return and left to face gunjan's anger...
after he left dia faced nupur and asked
d-yea hottie kaun tha........but before nupur could reply....OMG..kahin yahi tera hone wala pati to nahi......
n-DIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......tu paga hai kya?......
d-mai to bas guess ......she said making a baby face......
n-mat kar......ab chal.....
d-haan chal waise bhi late hogaya hai......
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m-sorry.....sorry.....
g-what is this mayank .........it ni der kyun lagai......
m-mayank smilled remembering his foolish talk with nuur......
g-kya hua?.....aur batao itni der kyun hui...she said winking at him
m-kuch nahi..bas ek jangli billi se samna hogaya tha.....
g-jangli billi?......she said being confused
m-apne chote se dimag par itna jor mat do aur chalo.......
g-hmm....chalo.......
and they heeded towards the khanna mansion.....

ok guys...........dont think that mayank is falling for nupur in first meeting.......it was just a normal meeting.....
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Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago