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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: tasfia123
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Posted: 14 years ago

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hello guys😎
how are you all??......must be good😆
thanks for all your comments
have replied to everyone.....you can check if you want😛
and pls dont be confuse...hope i will clear all your confusion soon😆
and there is nothing much in this part.....i guess
but next part has something special for you all😉
ok no more bakwaas

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part-9

nupur had tried mayank's mobile almost thousand time since morning but it was switched off..she was getting tense now..'hey bhagwan ab mai kya karun..mujhe to kuch bhi samajh hi nahi araha hai...aur yea mayank hai ki phone band kar ke baita ua hai...ab mai kya karun"..she said sitting on the bed with dissapoinment..."yea kya hogaya hai....kya kar diya maine....achi khasi dosti ko maine kis mod pad lakar chor diya"....she thought while her tears were beaming in her eyes...suddenly something stucked in her mind...."mai adhiraj ko phone karke mayank se baat kar leti hun"...she was qiete happy with her own idea..."nahi.agar kahungi ki mayank ko phone do to use pakka lage ga kuch gad bad hai"....she again sat on the bed....she glanced at her phone and decided to call adhiraj...after all she had no other choice remaining....phone was ringing......"hello"..."adhiraj..mai..mai nupur"....she said with a litle hesitation...she was not used to call adhiraj.she used to call mayank and she vever felt odd..."nupur?..kanhin mai sapna to nahi dekh raha...tumne mujhe phone kiya..wahh! humare to bhag khul gayen"..adhiraj said with a chuckle..nupur took a deep breath.."nahi mai to bas aise hi....tu kaise ho?"....she bit her tounge...she wanted to ask about mayank..but here she was asking him questions .."i am fine..par tum thik ho na"..adhiraj said with a suspicious tone...."haan..mai..mai thik hoon..".....adhiraj sened something wrong in her tone.."kya huya nupur?..kuch puchna chahti ho?....nupur was that much comfortable with adhiraj....."actually haan adhiraj..i mean mujhe mayank se kuch jaruri baat karni thi..par uska phone switched off araha hai..isiliye.."...she said all this in on go.."acha to isiliye mujhe phone kiya"..adhiraj said a bit tauntingly.."nahi adhiraj....mai to..."but before she could come with any excuse..."mayank america chala gaya hai".nupur was schoked.."'what?"...she said gettinh up from the bed.."haan..actually humara new project uhan start hone wala hai...to maynk acha nak aaj subah hi chala gaya..".....nupur was not sure how to react...she was feeling as if she will faint anytime..she was feeling that mayank went away because of...which was right in someway...."nupur are you there?"..adhiraj said not getting any response..."haan...haan mai ..i meaan yes"..she said getting back to the earth..."adhiraj mai..i mean mujhe kuch kaam hai..mai tumse baad me baat karti hun."....."hmm..ok bye"....nupur cut the call and went to the balcony to get some fresh air....somewhere she knew the reasom of mayank's sudden dissappear ...but she didnt want to think abbout it more...she was angry because mayank went without informing her...but little did she know it was much harder for mayank to go...

"i have reached safely bhai"....maynk said standing in the balcony...."hmm..i hope tum apna wada isi tarah nibhao ge"....samrat said...."bhai mai chala to aya hun...kya abhi apko bharosa nahi hai?"..mayank said hurt..."mayank mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai...bas ise todna mat"....samrat said...."dont worry bhai...ghar pe sab ko bata dena ki mai pohoch gaya hun"....mayank said...."haan mai keh dunga...bye"...samrat said and cut the call hurriedly..."bye".....mayank put the phone on the swing and stood near the railing....it was almost night there....he was tired with the journey...but more than phsycally he was mentally tired.....he was disaponited.....samrat was some where really angry with him...and he knew that samrat was right...and he was wrong.....above all he was tensed about nupur.....she's been so much depended on him that he was scared about her.....moreover he had become used to her....her calls, her non stop questioning, her nervousness, her changing moods...he smilled remembering her face....her activities...but soon his smile dissapeared remembering samrat's word.....he realized how much wrong he's doing....nupur is going to get married with adiraj, with his brother..the family which gave him shelter, love and care.....how can he decived them....he never even his wildest dream thought that this type of day can come to his life..

nupur was so shocked that mayank left without saying anything.....how can he do this....was he this much angry on her...how can he be so cruel to her...he should have given her one chance to speak....but more than anything she was hurt because he left withput telling her....."i am feelling so starange.....oh god! mujhe ho kya raha ha...kyun mujhe itna buda lagraha hai....uo bina bataye chala gaya to kya fadak padta...jaruri to nahi ki hur kaam uo mujhe bata kar kare.."..."phir bhi mujhe aisa kyun mehsoos horaha hai"........she cried.....she felt as if she will die anytime........she needed someone by her side that time..but alas! the only one who always stood by her side was no no where around.....she was confuse, she was hating herself for not understanding her own mind....she cried and cried and slept on the swing without having dinner.........

mayank was done with his meeting and returned to his hotel room...he threw the jacket on the bed along with himself..."this meetings were hell tireding".....he took out his watch and opened the drawer to keep it....but what he saw on the drawer again got him back to those memories.......a bracelet was lying there...it has a N shapeed desing on its middle.....

mayank had seen nupur first when he was just 18...he had seen her in a library....she was trying to get hold of a book...she was just 14 that time...though she was a child....she looked beautiful as ever......her long pony...she was wearing a jeans and a pink tops....she looked like a barbie doll..mayank smilled looking at her.....for the first time she was noticing a girl....she tried hard but couldnt get the book untill mayank helped her...."here.....take this"....he said handing over her the bbook...."thanks".....she took the book....her voice was also as sweet as her....and her smile oh god...it killed him!....suddenly someone called her from behind...."nupur".....she turned towards mayank "sorry i need to go"....she said and ran away but leaving the bracelet.....mayank took it and smilled seeing it..."nupur".....he said slowly....as if the name gave her immense peace

mayank put the bracelet back as tears formed in his eyes.....he tried to ignore all the past memories.......but memories are something that we can never ignore...

nupur was going to dia's house....now she need to share all this with her.....she is not able to understand what was happening....so she need to tell all this to her...while going she saw a couple.....the girl had hurt her leg and the boy was trying to ask her and massaging her leg...she remenerd when she had hurt her leg and mayank was there to help her....suddely she came back to earth....she realized how much she's missing his place.....what was this?....how can she miss someone like this extent..after all what was this feeling?

" aaj kuch bat kar raha hai dil,
shayad koi fariyad kar raha hai dil,
chupke se keh diya dhadkan ne,
vo ap hi ho jise yad kar raha hai dil. "

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Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago