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Broken Hearts - AR :)

Armaan sat beside the hospital bed. He could not cry anymore as he was dried out of tears. He looked at her, she looked like an angel sleeping. He couldn't help but smile at her. He took her hand into his, ''Riddhima, i love you,'' his voice broke, he could barely speak, the past few days have been the worst days of his life. He had never ever imagined that any of this would ever occur in his life. He never imagined that his-
Someone interuppted his thoughts.
Riddhima moved a little. She opened her eyes slowly hearing Armaan's voice. She smiled as she saw him, but she was hurt when she saw his tears. She knew...She knew it was cos of her...
'Armaan...' Riddhima kissed his hand. 'Armaan, please don't cry...' her voice broke, she didn't want to leave me, but it wasn't her choice. God had already decided to take her away from him.
'Riddhima, please don't leave me i cant live without you...i'll di-'
'SHUT UP ARMAAN. why do you say that?! you know i hate it!' she yelled at him for talking about dieing. She always hated it, cos she loved him more than anyone else in this world, he was her everything and she can't last a minute without him.
'I'm sorry Riddhima...what can i do? God is taking you- he broke down completely and ran out of the room. he couldn't take in anymore! He didn't want Ridhima to die. God took away his mother first, now when he found a reason to live and hes taking that away as well?! He hated God for ever inventing Cancer! God knows how many people have died from that! but now God gave that to his Riddhima, his love, his friend, his companion, his everything. She is/was his reason to live and always will be. He tried consoling himself.
'Armaan.'
He turned around to see Riddhima's father, Dr. shashank.
'Si-'
'Console yourself armaan, if Riddhima see's you in this state how is she going to go peacefully?', he loved Riddhima dearly, even though Riddhima was not his real daughter, he loved her more than anjali, his real daughter. Riddhima always listened to him, always cared for her father, she never said no to him. Shashank was proud of his daughter today, he knew she was leaving them, but he was proud because Riddhima always took care of her paitents, she was a doctoer afterall. It was her DUTY. she always put herslef AFTER her paitents, he paitents were most important and if anything was more important to her than her paitents and family and everyone its was ARMAAN. when he found of that Riddhima loved Armaan Malik, his worst nightmare, he didn't say no, he knew their love, it was DIFFERENT than any lovestory, he saw the love they shared and couldn't refuse.
'Dr.Malik? Dr.Shashank?'
They turned around to see the doctor that was treating Riddhima.
'Yes?' dr.shashank said with a worry on this face.
'Well... its time.' the doctor gulped as he said that cos he knew what armaan's reacting would be.
'Armaan...' dr shashank looked at armaan who was crying uncontrolably.
'i-im coming...you g-go f-first.' he said that between his sobs.
'Okay...'. dr.shashank walked in the room, he looked at his daughter who was smiling at him.
'I-'
'Papa, i know, your proud of him. because i was brave. Right na?' she said as she smiled , she kept her tears in, was she had to be strong infront of everyone, specially armaan.
dr shashank walked upto her and kissed her forehead and said, 'your mother is proud of you, wherever she is, she is and always will be.' he walked out before he broke down.
Armaan looked at Dr.shashank and walked in...
'Armaan' she smiled.
'Riddhima.' he smiled through his tears.
'Armaan I-' Armaan went and sat down next to her said said, 'no basket, let me speak today.'
'Okay'.
'Riddhima, i just want you to know how much i love you, i will miss you more than anything, i love you and always will more than anything or anything, i can't live without you and you know that. you my everything, you supported me as a friend as first, then as a lover, now as a wife. you're leaving me but your soul, your memories and your love will always be W*H me. i can NEVER move on even if i wanted to- which i don't. i will try my best to live with you memories. But basket i can't wait till i am there with you.' he kissed her lips as he said that.
Riddhima pulled away and couldn't take it anymore as she let her tears pour down like the rain does.
'Armaan malik, your my love, my best friend, my world, my life, my everything and my husband. i love you more than anyone or anything. im sorry im leaving you which i didn't want at all. im sorry im breaking one promise and that is leaving you. i love you Dr armaan riddhima malik. she kissed his soft lips.
armaan pulled away and replied, ' i love you Dr Riddhima basket malik and i'll love you will the end of time.'
They smiled at eachother.
Riddhima slowly closed her eyes, and never opened them again.
Armaan cried uncontrollably, he couldnt express in words how he felt. He cried into her and hugged her so tight.
Dr.Shashank cried outside looking at them.
After 2 days...
They performed the last rites and buried her. Armaan never cried once, he just was in shock and pain of losing the one he loved most and coudlnt bare the pain. Everyone tried to make armaan smile, but he never spoke to anyone, ate, smiled, laughed or did anything. He gust gave up on life.
2 weeks later...
'armaan beta please eat...' Billy, armaan's father was pleading to him, but it was of no use.
Armaan did not even move.
Billy sighed and left the room.
Armaan looked at the table next to him, there was a picture of him and Riddhima on their honeymoon. tears suddenly started pouring out of his eyes. he looked at the table and blinked. There was a knife dagged into the apple. He stared at it for a few minutes. And he thought if this was the only way to see her, and get rid of this pain then i'll do it. he picked up the knife, he closed his eyes and saw all his memories with her, so he stabbed himself into his heart and took his last breath and his last words were, ' i love you basket.'


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Index:
Broken hearts/AR - page 1
Saviour/AR - page 2
From Friendship to love/MN - page 2
Riddhima Abhi Malik or Riddhima Armaan Malik?/AR - page 2
Don't leave/AR&Armaan-Nupur - Page 3
I love you or i hate you/MN - Page 3
Tangled hearts/AR P1 - Page 3
My Other Work(s):
Diary Of Riddhima Gupta/AR FF - On-Going
Love Conquers All - Damon&Riddhima/Ian&Jennifer FF - On-Going
And Their Story Began/MN FF - On-Going
BeleiveInLove'sHallOfFF's(:

Edited by -shan- - 14 years ago
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amazing....this is so sad poor armaan and riddhima....I must say that you are an awesome stirrer and do right more...
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Hey... very well written... but i am not really a fan of sad AR endings...

Write happy stories...please....
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Hey Amazing OS
realy sad 😭
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heyyy dear,
nice OS
do write more



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; Hey, Thanks Guys (:
yeah, i always wrote happy ones, so i tried something different :)
i love your comments!
before i used to write on facebook, then somene told me to post them here, so i did <3
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Sad, but great OS 😊
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Saviour ' AR OS:

I stared through the opaque, misty and vague window. There he lay unconscious with sapphire blue wiring attached to his strong, muscular body. Misty dew drops showed at the corners of my 'emerald orbs' as he liked to call it. I smiled through the raindrops which we're pouring down from my eyes. I could remember what he told me before we left for Goa airport.

I sat down on my comfortable, roseate and coral bed. Gazing down on my sunlit dark black carpet thinking about my Shona. What did I ever do to deserve him? He had been there for me like a saviour, he was my knight in shining armour and I was being an obnoxious selfish b****. 'Basket,' he called out to me from the bathroom. I looked up and realized he had forgotten his towel again. 'He will never change,' I muttered underneath my breath while picking up his soft, yellow SpongeBob towel and walking towards the bathroom. 'Armaan, tum kabhi nahi sudrogi, how many times do you forget your towel and on top of that why do you always buy SpongeBob towels?' I complained to him from outside the light purple bathroom door. Armaan always listened to me; he always did what I wanted apart from one thing. Whenever I pleaded him to leave me, he ignored my comment and changed the subject as if we never even talked about it. He peaked out from the door, and looked at me with a smirk and a spark in his sapphire blue eyes. 'I'll always forget my towel, but you'll always remember it, and don't dare complain about my SpongeBob, after you he is my favourite um'person.' I giggled at his clumsiness. 'Basket yaar, hasso mat, anyways tum tayaar ho, hume wapaas Mumbai Jana hai.' He reminded me. It wasn't like I forgot because I knew the reason for us returning to Mumbai. I looked into his eyes, pleading him not to go back but all I could see was his firm decision of leaving Goa. 'I will get ready once you get out of the bathroom.' I replied with a smirk on my face and passing his stupid SpongeBob towel. He grabbed the towel and pulled me inside. 'W-what?! Armaan! Chordo mujhe!' He chuckled. 'What? Why are you laughing?' I asked him looking as clueless as ever. 'Soap. It's all over your face!' He laughed at me. I smiled because Armaan's laugh, smile, his everything and specially him meant the world to me. 'Armaan, why do we have to leave? Please, can't we stay?' He sighed and took my hands. 'Riddhima, look at me.' I looked at him into his eyes. Even now after 3 years of being married to this man, every time I looked into his eyes, I would get lost in them just like the day I met him. I remember when we met; it was at my best friend Muskaan's birthday party. I was walking downstairs, until I tripped and almost fell but he caught me in his arms. I know typical right? But the thing is after we both got lost in each other's eyes; we jumped up and started an argument. Ever since then we used to meet coincidently and got used to meeting each other that we always hoped we'd see each other again. And gradually we fell in love. But like normal people we had our ups and downs. I could still remember our first fight. When he had to leave Mumbai for a job his mother (now my mother) wanted him to take. He fought like cats and dogs. We eventually broke up but after a week I saw him on the bus and I knew he gave up his dream of going to America for me. 'Basket!' I heard Armaan screaming at me to get my attention, I completely forgot we we're in the bathroom and he was talking to me. Damn his beautiful eyes. 'Sorry ab bolo, what did you want to say?' he looked into my eyes and said those few words, which will stay engraved in my heart forever.

''Basket, no matter what happens to me or anyone I will never let anything happen to you. Even if the world ends, I will still protect you from anything. The first time I saw you, I knew it was true, that I'd love you forever, and that's what I'll do. You don't know what you do to me, you don't have a clue, you don't know what it's like to be, me looking at you. I promise you basket, today and forever, I'll always be there for you. And if you talk about me leaving you, just remember death can't separate us neither can God.''

I smiled remembering what he told me, he HAS to fight for his life, to stay in this world, to protect his Riddhima, his basket, his everything. 'No Armaan, you can't leave me. You promised that even death can't separate us and God. Even if those gang members are after me, you can't let them come close to me. We'll fight our way through. For each other. For our love.' I spoke with the sincerity in my voice just like the day we confessed. 'Mrs Malik?' I looked up at the doctor standing in front of me, she had long black straight hair which fell perfectly in place, her brown eyes had a strange spark, and her face was fair. She reminded me of my mother, who passed away when I was young. 'Y-yes.' I did my best to speak at least for my Armaan, my Shona. 'Good news sweetheart, your husband is out of danger. He still has a few injuries but he will survive.' I smiled as tears started to pour down but this time because of happiness, because my Shona was perfectly fine. Well'almost. He fought; he fought for me, for his life, to protect his Basket. 'T-thank you so much doctor! You saved MY life. My Shona, my Armaan!' I nearly screamed and hugged her. She was in shock, but hugged back. I quickly pulled back, desperate to meet Armaan and I guess she could see my anxiety. 'You can see him.' She smiled and led me the way. I walked inside as quickly as I could. 'Armaan.' I cried. He smiled. Even though he was badly injured and went through a huge trauma, he smiled and that to for'.me. 'Basket, I promised you remember? Not God, neither death can separate us. And now look I completed my promise.' I smiled, he was everything to me. I never loved anyone like him in my entire life and I mean it. He wasn't only my husband, or lover. He was my saviour. 'Basket, you always call me Shona Na? I will call you Shonimoni.' I smiled and hugged him as he hugged back. I got my life back, I got Armaan back and that's all I want. It's all I need. Everyone tells you, that you need good grades, good jobs and a good salary but if I be honest without having someone by your side those things mean nothing.

Author's note:

Please leave comments! && thank you all for you feedback from my other OS <3 Shona means 'sweet' in Punjabi for a 'man' and Shonimoni is the opposite , it means sweet but it's for a girl. I am not Punjabi but my friend is and she told me && it's also from the book I read 'I too had a love story' by Ravinder Singh. I recommend this book, it's heart-breaking and it will leave you speechless. Please read my FF and leave a comment:

Love conquers all; Damon&Riddhima/Stelena FF ' about the vampire diaries but I changed the story. And it includes Jennifer Winget of DMG/KZK as Riddhima Gupta :)

Edited by -shan- - 14 years ago
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Nice ff but I hate sad endings...

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