FF: Another Chance ...Ch 4B PG 12 [7/20/11]

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Hima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

i am sure bani is going to go with jai only for mausi. when will the pig head jai will understand wht happened during his and bani marriage, bani is not to be blamed

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nema123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

wonderful update.....!!!

Very nicely written... !!! i wish i could write something like u..!

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Proud-BrownGirl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Part two was just superb, can't wait to read what Bani decision will be about going to India.

Update part three soon please.

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Just read both chapters, and I must say, very interesting. Love the development of Jai's and Bani's characters. Please continue soon.

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pooks

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Another beautifully penned part. I am so glad you shaped up Bani's character in a strong manner. The slap she gave Jai was so due and deserved. But I think, Bani's love for Mausi will compel her to go back.

Even if she does go back, please do not let her falter in front of Jai. I want that dumb*** o grovel to her.

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@jazzy28

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

GR8! But pls update "Incomplete life" now yaarr! hehe, Keep up the good work! (:

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Anjinie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

beautifully written. just loved it esp da slap he deserves another. If bani goes dack 2 india 4 mausi sake pls do not make her fall 4 jai so soon. I agree he grovel to. Keep up da good work also waiting 4 an update on incomplete life

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Isa_de

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Good part...........Hope Bani goes to met masi.But alone...

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Shreshta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

hi there. i love part 2 and im sure bani will go back for maasi. i hope bani will still be the strong independent woman and jai will understand his mistake

cont soon, please update incomplete life too

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Rockyy_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Hey Dil, incredible chapter.

Just hope Bani do what is right for her and not Jai.

P.S. I know you will make the right decision for Bani.

Happy writing and take care.

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