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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#611

nice one!!! luved it... both acting like strangers.. wow.. wonder wht next... continue soon

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504887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#612

awesome one
so both are avoiding each other
thnx 4 d pm

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: smj1977

let me think

have I read a ff with sad ending

yes I have

but its name

ohit was DARK LOVER😉

have you read it😉

read it she is some torment queen😆

thats why there love is legend...
tell me a love story... a famouse where the lover don't die.😆

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#614

actually i thought their feelings were mutual.................

y is geet retreating herself back now.............

though the reasons she is giving i am quite not ok with it...............

its her who had given this confidence in him abt himself and also he is quitting to hate himself and now when she does this it might affect him as well.............

i am sure maan will make her understand her that its her who gives him all the strength and confidence he needs

waiting for the next part

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

thats why there love is legend...
tell me a love story... a famouse where the lover don't die.😆

yes you have a point look at LAILA-MAJNU, HEER-RANJHA, ROMEO-JULIET, SOHNI-MAHIWAAL, PHTIVIRAJ CHAUHAN-SANYUKTA, NAL-DAMYANTI and their may be many more

so shall we write unpleasant ones

even in Sholay Amithabha died

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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#616

Shruti that was awesome as always....loved it

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#617

yes you have a point look at LAILA-MAJNU, HEER-RANJHA, ROMEO-JULIET, SOHNI-MAHIWAAL, PHTIVIRAJ CHAUHAN-SANYUKTA, NAL-DAMYANTI and their may be many more

so shall we write unpleasant ones

even in Sholay Amithabha died

lol.. see thats why we remember them. just bcs they die. lol😆
how bad... & all the sweet sweet one... there r just too many & we forget. lol
xxx

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#618

brilliant part. loved it.
finally rajjy and geet moved there.
maan- geet behaved truly professional or stranger ..
let's see how long.
continue soon.

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: preethia
actually i thought their feelings were mutual.................
y is geet retreating herself back now.............

though the reasons she is giving i am quite not ok with it...............

its her who had given this confidence in him abt himself and also he is quitting to hate himself and now when she does this it might affect him as well.............

i am sure maan will make her understand her that its her who gives him all the strength and confidence he needs

waiting for the next part

ok but does she know that she has changed him, from the very first day she saw him he was following her instructions, but is she aware that she is the only one he listens to, I dont think she knows it, she simply feels that as she was always there with him for last 5-6 months that he is getting use to her, she herself has no self confidence, she is very good in her work but fails to realise it, her insecurities are inevitable, she thinks that Maan needs poper guidence and she herself does not think she is capable of it, though she always leads him but unknowingly,

in next part I will deal with Maan's insecurities also

they are not normal as we are, they are people with inferiority complex and its very hard to overcome it.

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

yes you have a point look at LAILA-MAJNU, HEER-RANJHA, ROMEO-JULIET, SOHNI-MAHIWAAL, PHTIVIRAJ CHAUHAN-SANYUKTA, NAL-DAMYANTI and their may be many more

so shall we write unpleasant ones

even in Sholay Amithabha died

lol.. see thats why we remember them. just bcs they die. lol😆
how bad... & all the sweet sweet one... there r just too many & we forget. lol
xxx

I don't forget them though I some tiomes gets confused with names

but that's becoz not many people discuss them