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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey maisha..!
congo on new ff dear....i was really very busy these days so could'nt get time to coment on ur ff's...!sorryyy...
but now im reading them and will comment pakka...!
and about this ff...
nice concept sweety....samrat doctor......thats cool..!but
gunjan loves aammy???????
do continue asap....i'll be waiting for ur first update..!
loads of love,
gunjan mariya..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept.............ulta jodi..........
hmmm lets see how the story progress...................
add me to ur pm list plz...................
Afrin

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Posted: 14 years ago
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part-1 singapore....a city were no one has to wait...or to stand still...everyone is busy in his own work...in his her own lifee...no time to stop....u have to keep on movingg... in this busy city...the camera focuses on a big house..with garden swimming pool... the main door of the house opens...n in the hall was a big picture of a girl n a boy standing beside of a woman..hugging her.... then the camera focuses on a room... were a sweet beautiful sleeping beauty is sleepingg..she is the same girl in the picture... n she is none other than,...SHILPA...the sleeping beauty was sleeping peacefully but due to her cell phones ring...she feels disturbed....at first she avoids some rings...but finally she takes the call in a sleepy tone..without seeing who it was... sh=wat bhaii...subhah subhah...har din kyu phone karte rehte ho??? tumhe aur koi kaam nahi ha kya???? the guy who was on the phone...is SAMRAT SHERGILL...SHILPAS ELDER BROTHER... SON OF SHILPA SHERGILL s=shona...tujhe neend se uthana mera sabse bara kaam ha..itne door rehte hue bhi apne phone bils kharach karke..ma tujhe call karta hu.. sh=very funnyyy... s=accha ab nakre karna chod...aur uth ja.. sh=thori der aur so jau.... s=shilpa..tere final exams ma nahi dene wala... shilpa opens her eyes...n jumps on the bed.. sh=shittt!!! crappp!! aj to mera exam....ha..ma bhul gayi??? bhai love u..thanks mujhe yaad dilane keliyee..bye...ma tumse baadme baat karungii..byee... n she hangs the calll..n runs to the washroomTHIS IS SHILPA SHERGILL.. A GIRL WHO MAKES EVERYONE HAPPY..N SMILE...NEVER HURTS ANYONE... JUST LIKE HIS BROTHER...!!!! BOTH BROTHER N SISTER ARE BEST FRENDSS!!!
....samrat on the other hand smiles.. as he knew she would react like this....
samrat leave with his mom in mumbai...he is a doctor in sanjeevani hospital.. a responsible doctor...son..n a protective brother...loves her mom n sister like anything else...n can do anything for there happiness...is never careless to his duties..both hospital n familly....doesnt hurt anyone...doesnt not have any idea of love n marrige.....THIS IS SAMRAT SHERGILL..SWEET CARING...ADORABLE... N LOVABLE.... MUMBAI.... a girl in a house..was doing the pooja..wearing a blue salwar kameez... specs... she is aas beautiful as snow white..or should i say more than snow whitee... a man is standing behind her..with another girl...after the girl is done with the pooja turns around....she is GUNJAN BHUSHAN... n the man is SHASHANK BHUSHAN... gunjans papa...n the another girl is DIA... gunjans younger sister... gunjan gives them arti n takes her papas ashirwad..
gd=jeeti raho beta..
g=papa....ap aj nashte ma kya khayenge??
gd=jo bhi meri beti banayegi wahi ma khaunga..par beta thora jaldi..mujhe office jana ha..
g=ji papa...dia tu bhi tayyar hoja..tujhe college jana ha na..
d=ok gunjan....
gd n dia goes to be ready...gunjan comes in the kitchen n starts making the breakfast....when her cell rings..seeing the number gunjan first looks at herr both sides then receives the calll....
g=hello..hi....abhi kyu call kia???
guy=kya yaar?? na koi gudmorning..na koi love u sidha daatna shuru?? accha chalo koi baat nahi..tumhare daat me bhi tumhara pyaar chupa ha...
g=shut up..mane kaha tha na tumhe..aj coffee shop me milenge..to phir..abhi ma busy hu badme call karungii..samjhe?? byee...
gunjan cuts the calll....the guys smiles...n kisses on the speaker...
guy=tumhari ek awaz sunne keliye ma kuch bhi karsakta hu..tumhari daat bhi sun sakta hu...
HE IS OUR DREAMBOY....ARMAAN MAILKKK!!! GUNJANS LOVE.... GUNJAN IS HIS LIFEE.....LOVES HER SINCE 3 YEARS.....PROPOSED HER ONE YEAR AGOO.. DIA ONLY KNOWS ABOUT THEM...BUT GUNJAN N DIA HAVENT TOLD SHASHANK ABOUT GUNJAN N ARMAA YET...AS ARMAAN IS AN ORPHAN... N LIVES IN A HOSTELL.... IS SEARCHING FOR A JOB....ONLY FOR GUNJAN..AS HE'S STATUS IS NOT AS HIGH AS GUNJAN......BUT HE CAN DO ANYTHING FOR GUNJAN.....
dia comes to the kitchen..
d=kya hua....loverboy se baat hui????
g=shut up.tu bhi na...armaan ke jaisehi baat karti rehti ha...
d=so what?? wase gunjan..tum logoka ye pyaar wala game aur kitne dinotak chalne wala ha???
g=what????
d=mera matlab kya sari life esehi chuparustam karne wale ho???? shadi nahi karni ha kya??
g=dia....
d=gunjan dad ko pata chal gaya na to....
g=isiliye nahi kaha..armaan koshish karraha ha na...aur jaisehi usse job milega..woh papa se mera hath mangne zarur ayegaa....tu dekhnaa...
shashank overhears gunjans n dias conversation...
gd=ma janta hu ke gunjan tum kisise pyaar karta hu..mujhe tumhari pasand se koi shikayat nahi ha..par agar woh tumhe khush rakhneke kabil nahi hua.. tumhari har zarurat..tumhari aukad ke kabil nahi hua..to ma tumhari usse shadi nahi dunga... lekin ma abhi kuch nahi kahunga... jab tum mujhse khud is bareme kuch kahogi.. tabhi ma tumse ye sab kahungaa.....
SHERGILL MANSION
samrat comes down..n sees his mom was waiting for him for breakfast..
s=gud morning ma..(takes her ashirwad)
sm=gud morning beta....so kaam pe janekeliye ready?? wase raatko kitne baje tu ghar aya???
s=do baje..ab plzz ma daatna mat....mere kaal bohot sare surgeris the...isiliye busy day tha...aj late naho hoga promise....
sm=sam..mujhe tere kaamse koi shikayat nahi ha..tu apna kaam itne acchese karta ha..tera sapna..doctor bannekea...par beta apne bareme to kuch soch..humesha sirf kaam kaam aur sirf kaam... beta teri apni life ha...jo...
s=jisme sirf ap aur shona ha....mujhe meri life bilkul complete nazar ati ha.. apki aur shilpa ke sath...mujhe apne lie kisi aur ki zarurat nahi ha.....ok?? mujhe der horaha ha..bye mom..
sm=byee..
s=aur ha mom..aj subhah shona se baat hui ha....aj uska exam ha... to apko woh exam ke baad call karegi...theek ha?? bye..
sm=bye beta..
after samrat leavees..
sm=beta tu akela ha...ye tu mane ya na mane...kabtak ese akele zindagi guzarega?? shilpa ki bhi shadi honi ha..par tu??? tune bhai ka farz nibhaya ha... bete ka farz nibhaya ha..par..ye sare farz nibhate nibhate apne bareme sochna bhul hi gaya tuu...
SCENE SHIFTS TO COFFEE SHOP...
armaan was sitting on a table..gunjan comes..
g=hey..
ar=ab arahihu??? ek ghantese wait karrahahu..
g=mumbai ki traffic se tum anjaan to ho nahii.phir??? dia ko college drop karke ate ate der hogaya sorryy...
ar=its ok...
g= mera rose???
ar=kaunsa rose??
g=har rozz to dete ho,,...aj kaise bhul gaye???
ar=are bhula nahi..ye dekh raha tha ke tumhe yaad ha ke nahii..ye lo..
gives her a rose...
g=thankss...wase itne sare cups yaha???
ar=tumhare intezaar me najane kitne sare cups of coffee peeliyaa..
gunjan starts laughing hearing this from him....seeing her smiling..armaan was just like..
ar=oyehoyee..
gunjan blushes..
g=shut up.aur ye batao...job ka kuch hua??
ar=im trying...
g=armaan plzz be serious...ma aur papa se jhoot nahi kehsaktii.. ma unse humare bareme kehna chahti hu...
ar=to tumhe kya lagta ha??? ma nahi chahta??? kya ma tumse shadi nahi karna chahta??? gunjan ma tumhare lie kuch bhi karsakta hu..kisibhi kimaatpe jasakta hu..aur ma koshish bhi karraha hu...
g=armaan mujhe tumpar yaken ha..par plzz...jo karna ha...jaldi karo..kahi esa na ho...ke waqt humare hath se nikal jayee...
ar=tumhe mujhpar yakeen ha...bass..mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiyee...
armaan keeps his hand on her..n gunjan also keeps her hand on him.. shashank from the car sees that....but doesnt do anything..n leaves from there.....
SINGAPORE
shilpa comes out with her frends..priya simran...n neha..
neha=shilpa...exams to khatam hogaye ha..ab age ka kya irada ha??? vacation me kaha chale???
sh=welll..ma to apne bhai aur mom ke pass jarahihu..mumbai..
priya=wat??? shilpa...plzz dont do this...
sh=guys...ma tarap rahihu unse milnekeliye..aur bhai..har din mujhe puchte ha ke kab aungi..aur mom..ma bhi jana chahti hu..u guys carry on...
simran=tumhare bina maza kaha ane wala ha??
sh=aur mera..vacaion me..unke bina maan nahi lagne wala....bhai.. mom.. ur shona is comingg!!!!
n the scene divides in four....SAMRAT GUNJAN..SHILPA ARMAAN....
PRECAP: SHILPA COMES TO MUMBAI....
+ SHASHANK MEETS ARMAAN....
hope u would like the first partt....
saduf thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hey nice concept
cont soon
n thnx for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Hi well thanks for the Pm....Nice update....i always loved yur FF's...i used to be silent reader....have read yur many ffs...u r a fantastic writer👍🏼

Well coming back to yur update...it was nice...yar sajan ko sath sath dekhne ki aadat hai...romantic dialog between arman & gunjan was little different....but nice...but plzzz get back sajan together they simply made for eachother....

continue soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesum upd
thanks for the pm
plz cont soon!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wow awesome update
totally loved it
do continue soon
IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
tht was sooooo awesomeeeeee just love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
wow awesome update
loved it
do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Very Nice Updates👍🏼 Little Different.Please! Updates soon. Awesome Part.

-S O H A M.

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