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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh durga....ur FF...highly excited
waiting for more....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i hope this update ll be upto your expectations ..do leave comments and hit the like button !😊

PART-1

"oh my god ! My sweetu'''."

she got out from her car and looked at it.

Geet : Sweetu baby ..... r u alright? R u hurt????

Maan came out from the car angrily and looked at the girl before him. He didn't see her face as she was turned back.

Maan (self-talking) : is she mad?

Geet turned to him and shouted

Geet : how dare u hurt my sweetu?

Maan was mesmerized by her beauty. she was wearing a light blue top and a skinny jeans. She looked like an angel. His heart skipped a beat looking at the beautiful form in front of him. 1st time MSK forgot to shout or speak. He was staring at the beautiful form in front of him. He even forgot to blink and this made her tension rise. After constant nudging he came out of the trance.

Geet : R u deaf ? (shouted) say something u Criminal.
Hearing the word "criminal" he came back from the trance...

Maan : wat? Criminal? who is criminal?

Geet : uuuuuu

Maan : (confused + angry )me..... how?

Geet : u tried to kill my sweetu

Maan : Sweetu?????? who is that?''."

Geet: u hit my sweetu and asking whos it ? are you blind ?

Now maan understood wat she meant by sweetu'' on the other line adi who was on phone kept calling him .

ADI: sir? Sir ? are you there ? wat happened sir ? any fight ?

Maan : "JUST SHUT UP"

Fearing his boss anger he immediately hanged the phone .

Geet : "Wat ? here am asking , but you are shouting at me ? its also your fault .you came in over speed. And one more thing , do go for a private coaching on how to behave with girls."

Maan :"Wat ? How dare you ? Do you have any idea who you were talking to ? Moreover I did not ask you to shut up. I was talking over phone"

Geet: "oh ! wow . look mister I dont have time to argue with you . I need to rush. But I ll never leave you for hurting my sweetu."

Maan : "Neither am interested in you. Get lost."Without giving her a chance to speak he drove off.

She stood there watching the car drove off .. Coming out of the trance she walked ahead and drove her car to the college.

AT COLLEGE:

"Hey geet are you okay ? the line went off suddenly and I was worried so much. I had been trying since 15 min and you are not picking it up. Are u alright ? say something ?" aditi spoke in a single stroke.

"If u give me some space can I say something ?"

The trio stared at her.

"Yea am alright. Just had a minor accident ..there's a little damage to my sweetu . I have called up the driver and asked him to take it for repairing. I ll never leave that khadoos . how dare he ? if I see him once again I ll kill him for sure . wat an attitude . whom does he think he is ?" Said our angry geet without looking at her friends.

"WHAT ???" the trio shouted in choros.

Preet dragged her without notice and shoved her into the car and drove to the hospital . The other two hopped up in the back seat while geet in the front and preet driving .

"Hey wat are you doing ? where are we going ? am alright" finally recovering from the shock and blurred out.

"JUST SHUT UP" came the reply.

They reaches the hospital . There a stretcher was kept ready and immediately they took her to the private room without giving her a chance to speak .

"Hey wats going on here ? look doctor am perfectly fine .its my sweetu which is damaged not me .if you wanna treat , treat my sweetu."

"Sweetu ?" asked the doctor.

"Yea my car."

The doctor checked her pulse rate and BP . everything is normal

"Nothing to worry miss . you are perfectly alright" .

"But you are not . please go to a ENT specialist."

"Why ?"

"I know am alright and had been saying the same thing for half an hour and you dint hear it seems ."

"Okay no tension .Lets call your friends inside ."

The trio came inside in a hurry with a non-stop question session.

Preet ~"Dr s she alright ?"

Aditi ~ "Any internal injuries?"

Varshika ~Any plastic surgery needed for scars?

Everyone in the room stared at her .

"What ? why are you looking at me like that ? am just concerned."

" your friend is perfectly fine and nothing to worry."said doctor seeing an opurtunity to escape from them.

"Why cant say this before ?" asked aditi.

"As if you guys allowed me to talk."

Thanks doc. Having said this all of them left the doctors room.

The doctor let out a sigh of relief and felt as if he had escaped from jurrasic park.

Geet stared at her friends as if they were some aliens.

"God ! nothing happened to you . I was so worried ? said preet .

"Guys am perfectly fine and stop worrying. Hey I hope no one called home?"

There was an absolute silence ,

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO "

"Who did this ?" asked geet

"Preet" came the reply

"I ll kill you" she retorted back in anger.

Suddenly some people came and hugged her while one calling the head doctor of the hospital ..

"WILL YOU GUYS STOP THIS ? AM PERFECTLY FINE "said geet giving a glare to preet.

Preet unable to take his friends anger finally managed to blur out"haan dad, she is perfectly fine . nothing to worry . we can go home."

Dad , mom , rajji , tito , daarji looked at one another not able to speak for some time . After some time dad broke the silence and said "Okay beta go home and take rest .. no need of college today and I ll book a new car today.."

"Uff my friends" murmured geet .

precap : maan @ office

part 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1580033/ff-forever-in-love-thread-1?pn=11

Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
hey.............. loved it yaarrrr.... these are my fav diag.

geet : do go for a private coaching on how to behave with girls🤣🤣

Varshika ~ Any plastic surgery needed for scars? 🤣


Geet stared at her friends as if they were some aliens.🤣

plzz update soon ...........


kinjal
Edited by kinju100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
hey loved the starting plz add me as pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
wow tooo gud...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

awww ....i don't like it.......coz....... i loved it sweetheart😆😊

mmwwwaaahhhhhh awesome intro with a lil JHATKA....
Hawwwwwwwwww😲 ~~~~BANG~~~~?????? GEET??????
yeh kya kiya.......??????????
well loving it.........
Welcome to the writers world.....abhi tak u were only the reader but now u r a writer....
hope u get a fab response from the lovely ppl here on IF......
1 more thing sorry i'm not able to click on the like button...don't know whatz the matter.....😭

HUGS & KISSES
love
MANPREET


thnx yaar ... updated the 1st part .. hope u like it ... for me also like button isnt working properly ...😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kinju100

hey.............. loved it yaarrrr.... these are my fav diag.

geet : do go for a private coaching on how to behave with girls🤣🤣

Varshika ~ Any plastic surgery needed for scars? 🤣


Geet stared at her friends as if they were some aliens.🤣

plzz update soon ...........


kinjal


wow am so haapy yaar... you made my day !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I really loved ur update!!!.LIKED the caring family and friends of geet.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
nice start
intersting
add me in ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update😉😉😉😉😉
geets friends are to protective 😳😳😳😳😳😳
continue soon
add me in ur pm list
Edited by ambbiha - 14 years ago

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