!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 41

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Sujal totally surprised me !!
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 35
oh my oh my..................was that Sujal???????? am surprised...........arey wah what a change.........................so lovely...............cont soon dear............
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Posted: 14 years ago
This was an unusual part actually....I dont knw I felt a very sweet feeling while reading it...the whole Sujal-Kashish convo was soothing in itself....nothing very significant was said....but everything was beautiful abt that convo...Sujal was so different...it was a treat to have this Sujal.....wow!! Pls continue soon.....I loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 36

Kashish quickly rushes to the phone as fast as she can as she hears her phone ringing.

k-hello, Sujal ! [she answers the phone while she is still panting]

s-pure 10 minute late ho, pure paanch baar phone kar chuka hoon main.

k-sorry, sorry. Aane mein time lagta hai naa.

s-phone apne paas kyun nahi rakhti.

k-kitchen mein phone kaise rakhun?

s-kyun kya problem hai?

k-kuch nahi. Khair chodo, tum kya kar rahe ho?

s-gaadi rok di.

k-gaadi rok di? Kyun?

s-arre ek dhabbe ke paas roki hai, kuch khaane ke lie.

k-oh khaalo

s-to khaa lunga naa

k-khaate hue koi phone pe baat karta hai kya?

s-abhi khaa kahan raha hoon, abhi to order dunga naa.

k-oh

s-achcha bolo, kya order karun?

k-[she gigles] mujhse ka puch rahe ho? Tumhe jo khaana hai order kar lo.

s-nahi hamesha main apni marzi se order karta hoon, aaj tumhari marzi se karna chahta hoon

k-aur meri pasand tumhe pasand nahi aayi to?

s-ho hi nahi sakta

the boy in the dhaba says to him 'saab, order kar do naa'

s-haan, haan. Karta hoon. Madam hi time laga rahi hain.[now to kashish] Ab bol do madam jithe

boy is baffled ki sabb khana khayenge, aur madam order karengi?

k-ok ok.hmmmmm [she thinks for a minute] hmm......tumhe butter chicken pasand hai naa? Haan to ek butter chicken

s-[sujal repeats] haan to ek butter chicken. Par wo to mujhe pasand hai, tumhe kya pasand hai?

k-mujhe? Mujhe palak paneer.

s-to phir ek palak paneer bhi

k-nahi nahi, akele do cheezein nahi khaa paoge tum, waste karoge. Aaj butter chicken le lo, palak paneer baad mein khaa lena.

s-par tumhe to palak paneer pasand hai naa

k-to kya hua? Wo main tumhe khud banake khilaungi naa [she bluses slightly while saying this]

s-oh ! [he slightly raises his eyebrow in amusement]. Phir thik hai, palak paneer cancel.

k-haan, aur naan; waise tum bina cold drink yaa bina kuch piye khana to khaa nahi sakte ho hai naa, islie ek thumbs up thik hai naa.

s-beer bhi thik hai naa

k-chup karo. You have to drive, ek thumbs up order karo bass

s-ok ok. Jaa beta, madam kehti hain ki humein ek thumbs up aur naan order karna chahie, to jaa jaake bhaagke le aa [he says to the boy]

the boy goes and gets the order in a while.

s-tumne khana khaa liya?

k-nahi, baad mein khaungi. Abhi mumma serials dekh rahi hai naa.

s-achcha, jis ki beti itni badi superstar ho wo ye tuchche serial dekh rahi hai.

k-oh zyada chadao mat mujhe, koi superstar nahi hoon main bass ek chotti si actress hoon. Samjhe.

Sujal doesn't reply for some moments, then curses to himself.

s-s**la !

k-kya?

Sujal realizez that kashish is on the line.

s-nahi nahi, tumhe nahi kaha.

k-to kise kaha?

s-arre kuch nahi yaar, ek ladka hai. I mean ek couple hai, you know the college ones. Yahan par gutur-gu kar rahe heain.

k-how sweet !

s-bhata sweet ! [he sulks]

k-arre tumhe kya? Karne do naa unhe.

s-main to nahi kar paa raha naa. Yahan akela phone pe chipka baitha hoon. [he actually sulks]

she giggles as his sulk is so very cute.

s-akele dinner kar raha hoon. Aur kehne ko I am an adult, who can do everything.

k-awwwwwww sooooooo sad ! [she giggling under the breath on his childishness]

s-chalo khaa liya maine, jaa raha hoon main yahan se. dekha nahi jaa raha mujhe aur ye romantic sequence.

She cant help but laugh at his cute sulks.

k-achcha chodo ye batao, abhi aur kitna time lagega pohonchne mein?

She waits for some seconds he doesn't reply.

k-kya hua? Bolo naa.

s-arre ruko naa ciggrett jala raha tha, ja nahi rahi thi.

k-tum ciggrett pii rahe ho?

s-haan to?

k-to kya? Mat piyo?

s-kyun nahi?

k-achchi nahi hoti

s-main to hamesha hi piita hoon.

k-piite ho to ab mat pia karo. Dekha naa, tumhare hoth aajkal kitne kale se lagne lag gaye hain, iss ciggrett ki wajah se.

s-wo bass, inn dino thodi si zyada ho gai thi

k-kitni? Kitni piite ho ek din mein?

s-ek packet

k-kitni hoti hai ek packet mein?

s-dus

k-kya dus pii lete ho?

s-aaj to bass saath hi pii hai, actually ye wali saatvi hai.

k-chod do naa [she demands like a kid]

s-pagal ho kya? Itni puraani adaat chodi jaati hai kya?

k-to kum kar do naa

he silent for a minute.

k-kya hua? Bolo naa

s-thik hai, koshish karunga

k-thik hai. Mujhe batana din mein kitni pii.

s-ok

k-thank you meri baat maan ne ke liye [she happily says]

s-par tum to meri ek bhi baat nahi maanti

k-kyun? Kaunsi baat nahi maani hai maine?

s-kaunsi baat maani hai?

[she thinks hard but is unable to come with an answer]

k-achcha thik hai, ab se main tumhari harr baat manungi.

s-yaad rakhna

k-pakka. Maine jo ek baar commitment kar diya to phir main khud ki bhi nahi sunti [she says in a filmy style]

s-oh meri salman khan !

she giggles.

k-chalo, maa bula rahi hai khana khaane ke lie, main aake baat karti hoon.

s-nahi, aake tum medicine leke rest le lena. Thik hai?

k-kyun mujhse baat nahi karni?

s-karni hai, par main chahta hoon kit um jaldi se thik ho jao, aur jaldi se hum face to face baat kare. Aur thik hone ke lie, medicine lena aur rest lena important hai naa.

k-hmm [she nods in agreement]. Thik hai, jaisa tum kaho.

s-good. Sunne lagi ho tum meri baatein.

k-aur kya

s-thik hai, to ab so jao. Good night.

k-good night, sujal. Bye

s-bye.

He disconnects the phone and the phone exhausts itself after a beep and displaying 'battery empty'.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is good
so sujal calls kashish
and their convo relalay nice
waise kashihs recommend sujal not to smoke cigarette
its really true cigaratte somoking is injurius to health
plz cont soona nd pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
battery empty...lol...honi hi thi...sujal itne mood me jo hai...the last two parts ...baap re...'dil to bacha hai ji' ...ye title yaha hona chahiye tha....but what brought this udden change?? looks like things are settling down....but a lot of things are not clear yet...for eg, kahish's past...missing few months...waiting for that dear....rest is cool...cont soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Sujal bas kashish se baatein karna chata hai.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww....Sujal ka bechara phn....exhausted itself saying 'battery empty'....gosh!! Aaj to Sujal ne hadh kar di....hehe....but I loved it completely. Wonder wat happened all on a sudden....but anyways...jo bhi hua ho....I was the effect to be there forever!! Again a very sweet convo btwn them....and I really hope Sujal gives up smoking!!

Thanks for the quick and niccccccceeeeee part!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
i like the way she told him to leave smoking so sweet awesome part dear thank for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
the conversation between sujal and kashish was really sweet.

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