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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hey dear
welcum back🤗
kaha thi itna tym
n btw u r back with a bang.......awesome update
thnk u 4 the pm
continue soon
luv u❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
heyyyyyyyyy Tazzy

thnk u so much 4 d pm ☺️

finallyyyyyyyy u updated n how 👏

luvd d way u described Sid's feelings 👍🏼

plsssss dis tym cont sooner

n plsss dnt 4get d pm 😉

Veena
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
finally u updated!!!!!!!!!!!
awesome update
I can really visualize the scenes in my mind while reading
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
yay...finally u updated....

sid needs to admit to his feeling soon..i cant remember whether rids has or not..ya loved both of htem flirting with eachother...esp..rids n she dunked him in d lake...,i thought sid wld pull her in too bt i guess he was in big shock himself to think abt it....ya n ya sid is hot like a fire...plz continue soon n thanks for d pm!! :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
@Ovi_Tanni - no worries yaar hopefully next time will be quicker, am glad u liked it 😊
@sidma_love - arre harshuu, ur partner in crime and u will be coming at me with dhamki's if i do not update! toh fir issi liye update kiya 😆 and aha yes but what guy is not buddhu? they are always trying to hide from what they feel! 😆
@zeenia - yaar am glad u liked the update, hopefully next time the update will be at a faster rate than this one was 😆

@sonia1000 - thanks yaar 😊 have added u to my buddy list, so will PM u next tome i update.

@payyal - aww yaar, i have been busy with college work, that's why i've been inactive for so long, waise i hope u r okay, and am glad u liked the update 😊
@veena_rocks - aha veenu 😊 am glad u enjoyed it yaar, next time i shall deffo PM u 😊
@jacobharry10011 - thanks yaar, 😊 am glad u can visualise it, after all it helps to build a stronger image of what ur reading 😊
@nine2 - thanks hun, i did consider him pulling her in too, but i thought that this would build a better flow to the story 😊 am glad u liked it 😊
Love U All ❤️
xxxx
Edited by TazzyA - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Tazzy🤗🤗🤗
Happy to see you after a long time.
Welcome back....................Missed you
Awesome update, loved it.
Shocking to see Ridz like this...............But loved it.
Keep Going
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: ssdtvgojan

Tazzy🤗🤗🤗

Happy to see you after a long time.
Welcome back....................Missed you
Awesome update, loved it.
Shocking to see Ridz like this...............But loved it.
Keep Going

🤗 Thanks yaaru, glad u liked it 😊 xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Part 11:

Ridzy's POV


Surreal. Could such feeling's be true? Attraction was one thing, but somehow, it seemed, with Sid there was more. It couldn't be more than attraction and yet she feared to delve deeper into what it could be. A few weeks, that's all it had taken, if even that, for this attraction to manifest. But that was it, nothing more and nothing less, she refused to even consider that what she felt could be more than desire.


The room was in tatters. Both Jatin and Millie had left it in an appalling state. It irked her yes, but not enough to actually clean up their mess. After all she was not a maid, she shouldn't be required to pick up after other's. 'I wonder how Sid's doing?' she thought. Had he dried off after his abysmal swimming session? Or had he remained in the sun? It seemed reckless, somehow, the way they had flirted earlier. Could two enemies really go from angst to fatal friends within the space of a few weeks? Contemplating such things hurt her head, she was supposed to be having a nice lie in. How stupid of her to think it would go successfully. As usual Sid had consumed her thoughts and was refusing to leave.


Sid's POV:


He could not think straight. The sun was still beating down on him, and by now his clothes had even dried to a crisp. Yet he had no desire to move. He simply wished to lie there and think of Ridzy. It's not as if he could think of much else anyway. With her on his mind, there was hardly any room for much else. Sad but true.


Did she feel the same? Could she? The way she had been acting earlier would have suggested that she did. But then, who can trust mere actions? They are often misconstrued. What if, he thought, allowing himself to fantasise for a few seconds, what if she did feel the same? The same pull? The same attraction? Should he confront her? Or allow her to assess her feelings similar to what he was doing?


It was confusing. On the one hand he wanted to explore further, see if there was a potential in what they felt, or actually discovering WHAT it is they felt. And yet he was scared, what if pressing too much proved to be a mistake? What if all of this was in his head, and their feelings were not as they seem? Both him and Ridzy had started to get along, would he risk ruining the peace with his advances? Or would he stumble upon something beyond his wildest expectations?


Both the young, confused teens sat and thought. What did the future hold? They both fought what they felt, and instead believed the alternative reasons. After all, they were easier to comprehend than the truth. Easier to understand and grasp onto. For if they started to fall into the truth, it may break them. Or, if they are lucky, it may make them...


To Be Continued...


Thanks for reading, Let me know what you guys think.


Much Love,

Tazzy.


Xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Res😳

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OMG Bhabhi jaan u finally updated 😲 😆
Ek toh u updated after a century & on top of it such a short update :x :P
Not fair 😔 😆
Next time Plzz make it a li'll longer 😳

Coming to the update
Awesome as always :)
Loved how u described both SR's POV's 😳
Both r nikamme's don't wanna accept their feelings 😡😆

Hope they confess to each other soon 😳

Plzz continue soon & don't take 1mth to update 😆

Luv ya <333
Edited by -Harshu- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
very nice updates... i read pt8 to pt11 today... i really love your FF... the way you described SR minds and feelings... they were mindblowing...
love SR scenes
continue soon
And can you pls pm me when you update the next part
thanx 4 the update

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