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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#301

Another brilliant update Mehak.

So Mayank has finally told the truth. For a while I thought he would never confess, but I am glad he did. But I'm now really worried about Nupur and how she will react-she will be completely shattered. Nupur was starting to dream of a future with Mayank but now she will be devastated.

Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm Mehak.

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#302

OMG.. Mehak.. why did u stop here.. update asap.. and my heartbeat is at its quadrillion speed......

for once.. in this update, i liked Mayank.. as he told the truth... and then Nupur.. THUD......

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#303

Great update Mehak👏

Nupur couldn't be happy again.........but good that Mayank is saying the truth.........

Thanks for sharing😃

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#304

First of all, I forgot to congratulate on my last post. Congrats on getting the best ff writer title. U totally deserve it.

Now going on to Part 9, it was another awesome part!

Mayank's emotions are totally understandable. First Mayank turning back… Even though it was wrong, it is human nature to hide certain things for their betterment.

Priya is such a cute girl. I'm happy that she found a father in Mayank (I don't know if Mayank deserves their love but I guess everyone deserves a second chance).

Poor Nupur…she thought that he didn't want to be with her becoz she was raped when in reality it was his own guilt that was stopping him from saying anything.

It was nice to see Nupur happy but I felt bad for her coz Mayank hadn't revealed the truth yet and when she finds out she is going to be broken.

OMG! He told her and u stopped there? ..I can't wait to see her reaction. I hope Nupur slaps him…

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#305

nice waiting for nupur reaction

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#306

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt
Update sooooooooooooooooooo=oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanxxxx for d pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#307

OMG my heart stopped beating in the last part...I ws feeling the dhak dhak dhak anddddd HE TOLD....Ur stories r just like the serials all time u ended in the crucial point to give us sleepless night...😕😆...Amazing part...Mayank-Priya moments wr superb and she called him daddy...It ws the best moment of this ff...
Ok so now nupur knows the truth...I ws thinking ki kya hoga...Will mayank say or not...And im happy that he confessed...But feeling terrible for nupur...Kya hoga ab...cont soon...

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#308

Poor nupur. She was starting to like him this will completely crush her😭 i'm glad he told her the truth though, I want MayUr together obviously but i'm 50/50 instead of being 100 percent in favour😆 You always stop the stories at a crucial point😆 Eagerly awaiting the next part, keep up the great work🤗

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563295

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Posted: 14 years ago

#309

oh god... oh mehak... plz plz kuch out of control math honey dena... i knw nupur wil b angry n shd be,... but end mein sab kuch thik kar dena.... waitin desperately for ur next update...

plz try n update early in the evng.... plz....

thz for the pm n pm me wen ur rdy wit the next part :)