{---How Life Changes---} AR FF-NEW Pt4-30 &Note 32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Hey Preet

I loved this part

I'm looking forward to the next part and AR's meeting

tnx for the pm and con. soon

take care

love miss93

Edited by miss93 - 14 years ago

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Hey.
Got this link from somewhere. Very nice story. Loved the concept. Can't wait for AR's real meeting.

Continue soon. Pls add me to your pm list.

Happy New Year.

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Caramel_21

@Caramel_21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

now you are really quick Dude..
looks like someone blessed herself too much.. ;P
will be back this time in less than 24 hours..I hope you are not in a mood to update another part in the meantime..
thanks for the Pm..

love Mel..

PS: about me replying nice, just wait and watch..mwahahahaha..😈

okay me back...before my deadline..quite early I must say.. ;D;P
so enjoyed the story till now, you made their meeting so ektaish..like dim lights, her back towards him, hair flowing😆.. but totally loved it..Armaan and Rahul are proud brothers of Nikki.. looking forward to their bonding and billy thought anni is expecting that was fun to read.. in all enjoying the storyline.
just one suggestion- put the conversation in quotes and in separate lines, it will be easier to read and looks nice otherwise it looks like one whole big paragraph having no conversation..😳

wishing you a very happy new year-2011..😊
loads of love..
Mel..

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perfectsmile

@perfectsmile

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Hey Preet,
nice start.. n I guess its going to be a roller coaster ride with AR with little misunderstanding about their identities. Its fun to read.
U should have started writing long back, u write well too.
But if you dont mind, I have an advice, plz use quotations while stating words of a character, that makes the reading more enjoyable and easy. Don't get me wrong, its just a piece of suggestion to help improvisation. continue with the next part soon and pm me if u update.

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DreamerReality

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

hye preet
just read ur FF
itz certainly awesum!!
i loved the mallik's n gupta's
ohhhh nt to frgt modi'd n joshi's tooooo
plzzz do update soon!!
and do do do add me to ur PM list
wuld luv to read more!!

love
-kinnari!