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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

amazing part divya cont soon


Thanks Jyothi. will update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

amazing part , way beyond words. loved each and every word. Thanks hun. Felling bad for Shally, she was behaving just lake another girl, din't realize her love for Milind n when he moved on in life she realise his place in her life. really felling bad for her i wish she'll find her true love in Mark and moved on in life like Milind , after all Milind and Prachi are made for each other. True. They were both very young and she realised much later what she had lost and longs to regain it. But it is far too late now and Milind belongs only to Prachi. Prachi poured her heart out to her parents was nice, Inder really missed his daughter that was so touchy. Parents are the first people you think of when you are down. Poor Inder is also missing his daughter very much. Poor Milind has to work so hard, but still very energetic. He is the great Milind Mishra after all 😉Great part continue soon. Thx, will update soon. Ta

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Hey Divya, Hi Sona

As always the update was fantastic. Thanks Though the way Milind reacted to Prachi in the start did put me off a little. So did not like his patronizing attitude towards Prachi. He is always handling her with kid's gloves when it comes to sharing things with her. He cribs that Prachi keeps things from him, isn't he always doing the same? He knows very well how Prachi feels about being alone in the house. Milind should have been more sensitive here. Work took precedence there and he behaved in a typical way expecting a wife to understand and raise up to the situation. He could have at least walked with her to the bedroom. He also knows that Sally is a sensitive issue for Prachi but he always forgets it when it comes to it. yes, he does and brushes it aside all the time expecting her to understand. What is most ironical here is that both Milind and Inder are almost same when it comes to handling Prachi. They want her to be child-like or mature at their own convenience. I think its time for Prachi to start growing in strength. This obviously cannot happen overnight but she certainly needs to grow in confidence. It is ironical how they both love Prachi, treat her similarly but just can't see eye to eye with eachother. Prachi will need to be really strong to handle these two men. Time will help in the growing up process.

Vicky continues to be the calm, balanced and rationale being. Milind should take a leaf out of his book and learn to control his temper and stay calm. That's the difference between the two brothers. They balance each other.

Sally's anguish was so palpable that it was but obvious for Prachi to wonder at to what has happened. And the fact that Milind looked troubled went ahead to cement that thought. With so much still lingering between them Prachi will continue to see familiarity and intimacy in Sally and Milind's every action and word unless this whole issue is once and for all out in open and she could talk about what she feels. That's exactly where this is all heading. Prachi will need to get it all out of her system so that she can move on. Sally seems to have finally realized that what she had with Milind or what she could have is now gone forever and there is no looking back, the bridge has been burnt for good. With this realization hopefully she will move forward in her life. She had known it for sometime but accepting it is what taking time. Micky is such a great friend, though he lent his shoulder to Sally to cry out all her anguish, he rightfully gave her the reality check also. Yes, he is Milind's friend too. So, he is taking a neutral position here.

The feeling of loneliness was so deep for Prachi that all her insecurities went in for an overdrive. The way she was missing every small thing from her earlier life was written superbly. For Prachi the changes after marriage have been huge and all alone she ended up being more lost. Isn't that what we all do? A little shift in our lives and we cling to those whom we hold close to our hearts or atleast the thoughts of good old things. The phone conversation between Prachi and Inder was very touching till it steered towards Milind bashing. PL as always was practical and sane. But what is wrong with Inder? He seems to not even care if Prachi marriage hits rock bottom just to prove his point. His hatred towards Milind has completely blinded him. No wonder Pl was shocked' It will blind him even further and he won't realise untill the damage is complete.

After all the high running emotions, you winded up the update with perfect naughtiness. Milind is simply incorrigible and Prachi has still a long way before she is one up on Milind. He is IMPOSSIBLE. Prachi does have a long way to go still 😉

Continue soon'Take care'Hugs and hugs Will update soon. You take care and hugs to you too. Ta

Sona

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: liza_beans

Another wonderful update Divya. Love the way your are building the story and the different relationships in it. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

Liz


Thanks LIz, glad you liked it. Will update soon. Ta
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Divya,

Where are you!!!! I sincerely hope that it is work which is keeping you away.....................

Hugs,

Sona

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Posted: 14 years ago
Divya....Waiting for ur update.....plz update soon hun..
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Posted: 14 years ago
How are you Divs?? 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved u r ff.......the best i read in michi ffs........the content is beautifully written........u r the best......i want more of prachi and vicky..........i love their naughty quarelling.....hope vicky knows abt sally's intentions......i want some one to know how she troubles prachi.........so they give her support......i mean she is facing a lot........a completely changed atmosphere.......she is trying her best.......anyways want millind and prachi to always stay together......i want prachi to be happy always.....the most things i want to see are:

1. inder should move on.......he should understand.........he is acting immaturely.......but i know he loves his daughter unconditionally but this way too much.

2. want millind to take out sally insecurities from prachi.......she should have full confidence in herself.......want her to fight for her love than sulking and feeling bad abt sally.

3. want more of prachi and vicky and vicky and pooja......plzzzzz make it a two pair ff now.

i have more to say but latter i got to go.......once again love u r ff and u r writing

---------vini😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Divya kaha ho yaar, hope everything is fine at work at home, missing u hun
Edited by ytanuja - 14 years ago

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