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Posted: 14 years ago

Excellent update loved it

plz continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part , way beyond words. loved each and every word. Felling bad for Shally, she was behaving just lake another girl, din't realize her love for Milind n when he moved on in life she realise his place in her life. really felling bad for her i wish she'll find her true love in Mark and moved on in life like Milind , after all Milind and Prachi are made for each other. Prachi poured her heart out to her parents was nice, Inder really missed his daughter that was so touchy. Poor Milind has to work so hard, but still very energetic. Great part continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Divya,

As always the update was fantastic. Though the way Milind reacted to Prachi in the start did put me off a little. So did not like his patronizing attitude towards Prachi. He is always handling her with kid's gloves when it comes to sharing things with her. He cribs that Prachi keeps things from him, isn't he always doing the same? He knows very well how Prachi feels about being alone in the house. Milind should have been more sensitive here. He could have at least walked with her to the bedroom. He also knows that Sally is a sensitive issue for Prachi but he always forgets it when it comes to it. What is most ironical here is that both Milind and Inder are almost same when it comes to handling Prachi. They want her to be child-like or mature at their own convenience. I think its time for Prachi to start growing in strength. This obviously cannot happen overnight but she certainly needs to grow in confidence.

Vicky continues to be the calm, balanced and rationale being. Milind should take a leaf out of his book and learn to control his temper and stay calm.

Sally's anguish was so palpable that it was but obvious for Prachi to wonder at to what has happened. And the fact that Milind looked troubled went ahead to cement that thought. With so much still lingering between them Prachi will continue to see familiarity and intimacy in Sally and Milind's every action and word unless this whole issue is once and for all out in open and she could talk about what she feels. Sally seems to have finally realized that what she had with Milind or what she could have is now gone forever and there is no looking back, the bridge has been burnt for good. With this realization hopefully she will move forward in her life. Micky is such a great friend, though he lent his shoulder to Sally to cry out all her anguish, he rightfully gave her the reality check also.

The feeling of loneliness was so deep for Prachi that all her insecurities went in for an overdrive. The way she was missing every small thing from her earlier life was written superbly. For Prachi the changes after marriage have been huge and all alone she ended up being more lost. The phone conversation between Prachi and Inder was very touching till it steered towards Milind bashing. PL as always was practical and sane. But what is wrong with Inder? He seems to not even care if Prachi marriage hits rock bottom just to prove his point. His hatred towards Milind has completely blinded him. No wonder Pl was shocked…

After all the high running emotions, you winded up the update with perfect naughtiness. Milind is simply incorrigible and Prachi has still a long way before she is one up on Milind.

Continue soon…Take care…Hugs and hugs

Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another wonderful update Divya. Love the way your are building the story and the different relationships in it. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -BlackSky-

Wonderful part Divya 😛 Thanks Aaliyah

Wonder when Sally will give up on Millind, at least she has Micky by her side no matter what She can't give up on Milind even if she tries, poor thing. But yes, she will always have her friends by her side, Milind included. Inder should really re-assess how hes behaving Not that soon
Look forward to the next part 😛 will update this weekend. Ta

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fan1204

i loved it...but this sally is getting on my nerves now....:)


Thanks. Sally will irritate a little bit more before she winds down.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ASMI2010

First of all a VERY HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU DIVYA❤️ Thanks Asmi, hope you had a good one too.

As usual FANTASTIC UPDATE👍🏼👏 thank you
All scenes very well written👏 very well described.........luved tham all.........esp the part where prachi calls her father when she was alone and scared. it so true and natural......... how much luv and luxuries you get at your hubby's home......but whenever u r in pain or alone you realise how much you miss your parents and all those small small things in your parents home.....esp. when u r newly married. this scene touched my heart👏 very true. Those little comforts are what we hold dear. No matter however long you have been married, whenever you are in pain and need comfort, you long for your parents and the lost little comforts of your childhood.
i wish and pray this Valentine's brings lots of luv n happiness in your life that u start writing next a full romantic update soon (hahahaaaaa)🤗 Thanks hun, valentine's day did add a zing. Will give you a romantic update soon. There are a few things to sort out first.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ytanuja

Thank u dear for the dramatic emotional update it was quite spicy with everything in it, u rock hun 👏


Thanks Tanu, glad you liked it.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

hi da...

happy Valantines Day Thank you. hope you had a good one too.

wonderful update...Thanks
Sally...!!!! i dont like her...I don't blame you 😆
liked the scene where prachi calls her parents
continue soon will update soon. Ta
tc

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4_michi

Hey Divvya 🤗Hi Pri
Ohh nnooo I m lagging behind 3 parts 😳😳
Actually I was out on a mini holiday n den came back saw ur updates wanted to comment but got lazy I jst can't stop without giving a detail comment so postponed giving my comment 😳n den went out on a holiday n u hv updated 😳
no worries hun. I am glad you caught up. Hope u had a good holiday.

Well thanx 4 updating regularly n of course 4 giving us Beautiful part 🤗 🤗 🤗
I thoroughly njoyed reading all d 3 parts n man dey hv sum really WOW moments 😉 Glad you liked it. 🤗

I will
hopefully comment in details soon 😳 jst want to write so dat u dnt feel I hv lost interest as TFOP is a part of my life now 😳😃 What a sweet thing to say!! I am glad to hear that and I will update soon. Take care.

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