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Posted: 14 years ago
Excellent update divya...loved it
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a brilliant update dear loved it ⭐️🤗 plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
milind better be careful in using the word kitten in reference to prachi again :p oh pls make sally see the marks on milind's back somehow :)))))))))
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Divya amazing part, wnderful. You made Prachi cry so much not fare bechari embarrassed without doing any thing wrong. Milind was surprised by her reaction, great so she is no more kitten. Even iam wating how will Vicky tease Prachi. Ok lets see how long Prachi will not let Shally to afect her, Milind was thinking what made Prachi to drink. That was funny when Prachi says to Milind that she don't drink. amazing part loved it. Shweta is such a darling Mother in law i love her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update divya di. prachi being drunk was funny n cute....
thanks for the pm and the great update..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Superb update Divya and it was what I needed after a long day of entertaining. Please do update the next part soon.

Liz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Divya,

Superb update'though I felt that MICHI morning after talk was a bit myopic, I will get to that later. And I just love your New Year Resolution and most of us what have loved that far more than the update I think😆😉😉

Sally continues to be the confounding best. She simply loves to hate Prachi. She rattles Prachi to see her at her worst, can't stop herself from winding her and unsettling her and on the same level is concerned about her also. If her blow hot, blow cold attitude is confusing Prachi it is affecting Sally also. If Prachi needs to talk about Sally to someone, the need for Sally to talk and unload all her baggage seems much larger here. I now have my doubts that Shweta is going to be the one person who will be lending ears to both these girls. I can't tell you how much I am looking forward to this aspect of the story. I just cannot wait for that to happen. OMG I have started sounding like a broken record. Its time I zip it up'

The night of shocks and bewilderment seems to be having no end for Milind. If he was left wondering as to why Prachi drank, her anger at the assumption that he is leaving again left him completely surprised. Milind is an intelligent man and he was on the right track when he judged that someone or something gave Prachi the idea that he is going away again soon. Later her sexy and uninhibited avatar left him flabbergasted and wondering rightfully what happened to his shy little kitten. Unaware that the very word was responsible for the start of his Prachi acting out so unlike her through out the night. And with it began a long list of whys for Milind. Why she drank; Who or what gave her the idea that he is going away again; Why the desperate need for Prachi to assert her claim on him; What made her think that he doesn't want her anymore; What happened while he was gone that her mind and emotions are in such a turmoil? If Milind was completely confounded by Prachi by her actions and words, Shweta was also not behind in her shock to see her dear daughter-in-law in the inebriated state. But she contained it as she was well aware that it was neither the right time nor the right place to question Milind about Prachi or the happenings.

The update had the best interaction ever between Prachi and Milind. Whether it was the car scene or the later on interaction in the bedroom it was brilliant. The way you described MICHI's reactions was just outstanding. The part where Prachi staked her claim on Milind for me was the highlight, it was written superbly.


And now the morning after conversation'.Prachi reacted to the T, she was everything that was expected of her'.disappointed, disgusted, ashamed and floundering. Though Milind was the perfect pillar of strength and was able to calm her but the focus of the whole conversation was just on her drinking and her acting unlike her. He not even raised any of the other questions that were plaguing him through out the night. And frankly this is where I found the conversation to be single-tracked. Good but missing a lot. May be I am jumping the gun here and the conversation is all set to continue in the next update, but as for now this is what felt'.

Eagerly in wait of the next update and all ready to eat my words'.

Hugs,

Sona


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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
👍🏼Hi Divyaaaa🤗,howz uuuuu😉
coming to the update Brilliant,well written👍🏼
Sally ,what can i say abt her
i know she has very little love for prachi,she loves to tease her,and she very well knows how to trigger prachi's insecurities,and suddenly her concerns towards drunken prachi (i think this is what she wanted to see ) But it bakfired her completely and the way milind handled the situation made it difficult for sally 🤔
Oh boy what can i say abt this drunken can i say improved prachi,first coming to the convo in the car,awww prachi is so cute here and its so silly of milind to think where did she learned to kiss like that☺️it once again proves how good teacher milind is and prachi a better student😳
thankgod shwetha for not being a typical saasuma,watna things wouldhave been very difficult for prachi and milind but loved the way how prachi told how she missed her and howmuch she loves her,bechara milind dont know what /how to handle things atlast managed to whisk her to their room with little difficult😆
Milind mysery contimued there too,he wondered what and why his loving cherry get drunk and whats the reason behind all this and i dint xpect him to get conviced so easily the next dayor u have other plans😉 to solve his never ending Q whoat/why his wife got drunk
I dont know abt milind but i surely wanted to hear prachi say theese lines❤️
"I love you, Milind. I am the only one who has every claim over you, every right over you. Your past, present and your future is all mine. You are mine, Milind…only mine😍
The morning after the Wildest Night was as xpected ,crying prachi.blaming herself,loved how milind managed the situation and talked to her and tried to change her mood bt ripping of his shirt just to show her nail and teeth marks but she still managed to fool milindby giving a reason for her drunken state🤣even i tried to keep a straight face when i read prachi in a typical bahu clad in a RED saree with her mang,hmm divya this RED saree is someones hot fav and i heard his harmones work overtime and he will be out of his mind and cant stop himself,r u planning something like that or we will see vicky in his teasing Best🥳 and yes now milind knows prachi's capablities is he going tohave his fantasies a notch higher 😉🤣
BTW Divya hope he stay glued to ur new year resolution and a small req its been too long since we got a mid week update,if possible pls try to give us a double update (long updates no compromise on that)okiees
LUV uuuuuuu🤗
TC🤗
BYE😃
Update SOOOOOOOOOOON😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
must be wondering that i requested u to add me to ur pm list n u have done so n inspite of that i havent commented on any of ur updates for a long long time............for that i am really really sorry............i was not well something after something happened and couldnt come online....again i am really sorry for not commenting so long
the story is going on a awesome track....love the way u describe how prachi and milind feel......its perfect
every moment and emotion is well described
thanks for pm
plz plz continue soon
take care

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