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Hinal.94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

y is geet so cold towards maan

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

when will u b updating??

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Hasina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

maan is such a sweetheart sach mein caring for geet and not letting her know

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

hello madam!!
r u ever gnna update?!!?😆

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: dimpzz
hello madam!!
r u ever gnna update?!!?😆

Yes madam ki friend,I'm gonna update today coz I not feeling well today so I might as well do something than sitting at home like a patient! I will try to update today!🥱

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Yes madam ki friend,I'm gonna update today coz I not feeling well today so I might as well do something than sitting at home like a patient! I will try to update today!🥱

kya hua??!?! u ok??like nothing serious n all na?!?

get well soon madam! 😉😆😃

waiting for d update!

Edited by dimpzz - 14 years ago

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bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: dimpzz
kya hua??!?! u ok??like nothing serious n all na?!? no yaar...I just got throat infection!
get well soon madam! 😉😆😃 Haha..thanks!😃

waiting for d update!

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

ohk...better...hope u get well sooon!
n m STILL waiting!

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

hey loved the ff the maan in ur ff is so sweet loved the scene when he holds her in airport............

love the way he cares for her...................pl cont soon

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

Hi my dearest readers!!! I am sorry for the delay! Hope you haven't forgotten this FF 😉

Part 4

Brij veerji's wedding was coming closer with each passing day and there were loads of preparations to be done. The adults were engrossed in the preparations. Their haveli was buzzing with people rushing in and out. Voices of the so-not-melodious- women,singing village folk songs echoed in the ancient mansion while they helped out in the chores. Village kids were running around playing with us sheheri kids,ogling at our clean,ironed,posh clothes.

Me,Arohi and Riddhima played Ludo,everyday, on a special carom board we found in the attic. it was our new toy. Maan used to drop by sometimes and being the cheat he was,he always helped me cheat smartly without Arohi and Riddhima suspecting a single thing. That used to be our little secret.

One fine day,the barber came to our house to give all the men a haircut and a proper shave. That's when I saw Maan and Dev hiding in my room,begging me not to tell Maa about their presence. So,I decided to play along because I wasn't aware of why were they hiding,that too in my room. So I simply left my room.

Just outside the room

''Geet,tune Maan aur Dev ko kahi dekha hai?''

''Ha- mera matlab hai..Nahi. Nahi nahi,maine nahi dekha. Kyun? Kya hua Maa?''

''Arre woh dono badmaash kahi chipkar baithe hai. Aaj barber chacha aaye hain,sabke baal katne. Isi liye woh dono chup gaye hain.Armaan aur Arjun ko toh maine pakad ke bahar bhej diya lekin yeh dono kahan chippe hain??''

''OHHH....Yeh baat hai??? Maa....woh dono toh mere kamre mein chup kar baithe hain!''

Inside the room

''Shit!!''(together)

''Yeh Geet ne kya kar diya??? GEEET!!!''

''Ab to hum gaye!!!Maan,kuch soch!!!!''

Maa came in and brought them out,pulling their ears.She dragged them both to outside the house where the barber was. Soon,4 boys with a champu hairstyle entered the house. As soon as they entered,they were welcomed with roars of laughter,from the girls,who arrogantly swung their long,luscious tresses on their faces and dashed up stairs before they could react,giggling away.

Afterwards, in their room.

Armaan - Yaar,Maan...ab toh kuch karna hi padega! Yeh Geet ne sahi nahi kiya.

Dev - Haan Maan, Geet ne sahi nahi kiya. Hume badla lena hi padega. Hum...hum...hum uske baal cut kardete hain. Ya phir,hum...

Arjun - Cut it out guys. Chill. Hume kuch aisa karna hoga jisse woh pareshan bhi ho aur woh kisise kuch keh bhi na sake. We must have sweet,cold revenge.

Armaan - Sahi bol rahe ho bhai! Bohot maza aa raha tha na usse? Ab hum use dikhayenge ki hum kya cheez hain! (Making funny evil face)

Arjun was pissed off. These ghades just didn't get him. Sigh!

All along, Maan sat quietly...soon,he just left the room.

He had a devilish plan in mind. Haha,he's going to have so much fun. Poor Geet! All,I can say for her is,'' Bach ke rehna re baba!''. :P

Precap: Maan's masti and Geet is lost in his ******. Lagta hai kahi kisi ko pyar ho raha hai.

So how was it? I feel so stupid writing shit like this. Please forgive me for giving pathetic updates like this. Do comment. Please forgive my mistakes. Do click on the like button below. Thanks.

I am only sending pms to some readers. Don't cry if I didn't send you one.😃