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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay guys! m updating now!:)
The Last SaJan scene is inspired from a KaSh scene!
Hope you guys like it! let's see who comments first!
PART 2

Narrator's POV

Gunjan and Nupur sat in one corner. Both were silent for a change.
Gunjan was present there but her heart wasn't . Her eyes searching for her love. Her mind told her that she shouldn't do this. She shouldn't search for him but her heart , told her that she's helpless as one can never suppress "Love waali" feelings.
Nupur on the other hand was lost , not in anybodies thought but in the thought of what she was going to loose today. Her first and last love. She knew that she couldn't love anybody now or ever again.

POV ends

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*An hour later*

Shilpa's POV

I was getting ready for the pheras .
Main baar-baar Nupur ke baare main hi soche jaa rahi hoon. Kya karun? ek taraf main Mayank se itna pyaar karti hoon aur dusri taraf Nupur.Par mera kya kasoor hai? Nupur hi Mayank se pyaar karti hai, Mayank toh uske type ki lardki ko dekhta bhi nahi uss angle se par woh best friends the. Aur Gunjan woh bhi badal gayyi hai. Maine uss se bhi toh khushiyaan chinli hain.

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*FLASHBACK*

A whistle blows and people all around were cheering out loud
"SAMRAT! MAYANK!"
The were playing football against Virus college and as usual their college i.e Excel had won only because of the two "heroes" of excel-- Samrat and Mayank.

"congrats!! main jaanti thi ke tum dono hi jeetoge" said a bubbly voice which was of Nupur who was now semi-hugging Mayank and Samrat.
"Nupsie! Jeete kaise nahi after all I'm the Best!" said Samrat with a grin on his face.
"Very funny!" said Nupur.

"Congrats!" said another soft voice from behind. It was of a smiling Gunjan.
"Thanks! Gunjan" said Samrat and Mayank .
"Vaise tum agar chaho toh upar dekhsakti ho! That is if your done with staring at the ground" said Smrat annoying gunjan completely , before gunjan could say anything they heard another voice.

"Congrats Mayu" said Shilpa entering wearing a mini-skirt and looking amazing in it.
They hugged each other while Samrat rolled his eyes , Nupur pretended to smile but she was hurt within and Gunjan gave an angry glare to her ex- best friend seeing the pain in her Di's eyes.

"Uh! Shilpa hummein class jaana hain, chalogi?" said Gunjan.
"Tu jaa , main aajaongi!" said Shilpa not wanting to break the hug.
Gunjan just went from there followed by Nupur and Samrat who was disgusted at Shilpa.

Many months passed like this. Mayank-Shilpa always sticking to each other saying we really like each other (as they weren't a official couple yet and this was Nupur's only hope) , Samrat-Gunjan disgusted with all the sticking.. While Nupur was staying away from Mayannk-Shilpa , in the process getting very close to Samrat-Gunjan who were always together in order to keep Nupur distracted.

It was the prom night. Everyone was excited about it. Well, almost everyone except Nupur. All people were roaming here and there when the "DJ" announced slow dancing.
Mayank-Shilpa were the only ones then slowly other's came too.

"Chal Nupur! let's go dance!" said Samrat trying to cheer Nupur.
"Nahi yaar! mera mood nahi hai!" said Nupur in no mood to dance. Samrat didn't press on further and asked
"Chashmish kahan hai?"
"Woh rahi!" said Nupur pointing towards Gunjan who was talking to some boy.
Samrat didn't like that guy , he thought "why was he talking to her ? and moreover he shouldn't ask her to dance."
He walked towards them and asked Gunjan to dance to which she said no. After a long persuading session he convinced her. In the background played Iss Pal main hoon..... from Aaja Nachle which was Samrat's favorite.

Iss pal main hoon ya tumbhi ho... Samrat held Gunjan from her waist and she put her fair hands around his neck.
Ya dono bhi hoke naa hain... Shilpa pulled Mayank closer from while he too held her more firmly.

Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain...
Samrat and Gunjan stared into each other's eyes.

aa aAa aaAa... Nupur sat alone when suddenly Mayank offered her a dance.

da da daa... She held his hand.

Pa dha ni sa re gaaa aa a... He pulled her closer.
Dha ni dha.. They both were lost
Pa daa pa
ma pa ma
Ga ma ga re... He held her more firmly while she looked down.

da na da na da naa... They swayed to the tune.

Tumhein dekhke yaad aai
wohi bishri kahani
Deewane ka kissa
Ya phir ek deewani...
Samrat twirled Gunjan with a finger like a princess.

Dono sang sang rehte har dum
Esha yeh mene suna hai...
Shilpa and Mayank were swaying away.

Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain...
Mayank and Nupur pulled away from each other and then again came back.

Tum bata do yaad koi
Kya purani leke aau
Ya nishani deti jau
YA kahani leke jau
Ya ki maan chod do jaye
Yeh jata ,jata jahan hai ...
Mayank went around Shilpa with his arm still on her waist and turned her around too .

Is Pal mein hoon ya tum bhi ho
Ya dono hoke bhi na hain
Kyun ho kya ho
Ho bhi ki na ho
Ya kehna sunna mana hain...
Mayank put his arm around Nupur and they bent to the right.

Is pal Mein hoon... Samrat enclosed Gunjan and then joined his hand with her hand a little away from his shoulder.

Everyone clapped. Samrat and Gunjan broke eye contact and left each other blushing while Mayank and Shilpa to left each other and smiled at each other and Nupur who still sat here was shocked that her dance with Mayank was just a DREAM.

Samrat and Gunjan came to Nupur while everybody got off the dance floor only to hear Mayank speak on the mike
"Shilpa I really liked you but now I don't!"
Shilpa was confused and slightly hurt , Samrat was happy and Gunjan-Nupur were seeing some hope.
After a silence he said "Yes! It's true as now I LOVE YOU!" she jumped on him.
While Samrat-Gunjan stood shocked while Nupur stood still with her eyes all teared up.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

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(shilpa's POV continued)

Aur phir Nupur challi gayyi aur mujhe yeh aihsaas hua ke main do doston ke beech aagayyi thi.

"Shilpa beta let's go down know." said my Massi.
"Haan aayyi!" I said and went.

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While the pheras were going on Gunjan kept cracking jokes about Shilpa and Nupur smiled while Kabir laughed.
Samrat sent a note to Gunjan

"Bahar aakar milo!
Right now! abhi."

She went as she knew it waas him.

"Hey Samrat. tumne kyun bulaya?" said Gunjan still nervous in a shaky voice.

While Samrat instead of answering her kept going closer to her , so close that his breath fell on her face. He held her waist and kept it firm so she couldn't move.
She said "Samrat! Samrat please" trying to remove his hand while he just puts her hand which was trying to remove his behind her back and whispered "Kyun Gunjan? Kyun kiya aisa?".
She looked here and there, he said "Dekho meri taraf." softly. She slowly looked towards him with her teary eyes.
He said "Tumhe pata tha naa. You knew I it didn't you?" getting emotional. She said "Samrat please dekho main explain kar sakti hoon"
He replied "Nahi! I know taht your sister needed you but mera kya? Tumne mere baare main nahi soch?"
"Socha tha Samrat but I had no option. I'm sorry Samrat but it's better agar hum alag hi rahen toh"She said with pain in her voice. She left and went in.
He was just emotionless and he too lest.

Somebody appears from a pillar, it's Shilpa who had come to get a jewelery box to remve all her jewelery. She thinks that she ruined two love-stories which is right.

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END!:)
Edited by AttractiveAdya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
yaayyyyyyy im first
hey adya,❤️

awesome update dear
totally loved it
im totally loving the suspence
i kind of hate shilpa for seperating Mayur n Sajan
wow loved the sajan scene😳
it was superb😳...
i totally loved the flashbacks😳....
poor nupur ...poor sajan
do continue soon
n thanx for the pm

Luv ya
deepti🤗
Edited by deepti_mohit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
nice update
poor mayur n sajan
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54


hey Adya
lovely update dear
but feel so bad for nupur and sajan
cant see them in so much pain
plz do something
do update next part soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
Hey awsm updt yar,mindblwing.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
that was soooo saod dear.....feeling really bad 4 nupur nd sajan..awesome..........................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Wonderful part, but just hate Shilpa 😆 poor SG and Nupur ! Continue soon and yeah i LOVED SG scene 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
wonderful update.
it was so painful.
cant see nupur n sajan in so much pain.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
Hey twinnie 🤗
OMG awesome part!
It had happiness and sadness. It was a mixture of emotions.
And u showed it really well!👍🏼
aww poor Gunjan she is battling between her mind and heart!😔
And Nupur her pain is clearly visible!
I really feel bad for Shilpa too!😆
But the flashback OMG ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
I always love seeing Samrat feeling jealous🤣
But Shilpa i dont know wat to say abt her part!
Then the dance I loved Sajan's part but i feel bad for nupur!
Perfect song selection 👍🏼
Then sajan!
Did Gunjan back off bcoz of Nupur's heartbreak?😲
But That part was really heartbreaking!
Now u better cont soon and Thanks for the pm 🤗
Luv u twinnie ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
That was awesome....really loved it to core

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