Maaneet FF~ THE PROMISE~* ~Part 18 pg 140~25/5/12 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update dear................
when maaneet gonna meet ????????? am waiting for that.................
precap was scary,plz don't do anything that separate maaneet...........
looking fwd.......

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww loved this part...its good tht Geet met up with her old friends!! Oh no the precap has me worried...i hope nothing happenss to her...plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
precap is scary.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great story....
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. yash n meera.. hmm sounds cool.. eagerly waiting for nmaneet meet.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Naahii maan and geet missed each. Happy that geet will be working with him.

Good that geet said that yash is like her brother. She is only maan's

Me glad to hear that yash is married to meera.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 9:

Maan's Thots

Monday morning Geet reached KC. Geet's architectural works have been already assigned and Yash has to go for his supervision and Site analysis.

As Geet was also Maan's Secretary she has to be in KC more than in the site.

Geet was asked to arrange the days schedule for Maan.

Geet entered Maan's office. As she entered she felt warmth touch her outside

Maan reached KC with his usual guard accompanying him .

He walked towards the lift reached his floor.

Geet was ckhing with Maan's schedule.

Maan walked into KC. Everyone wished his morning. Geet was still ckhing and scheduling his meetings and jotting down the timing to make a sticky so tat it wud also be easy for him. She stuck the sticky wic she made and was abt to leave the cabin she remembered tat she has forgotten the paper's which she has bot with her

She turned and took the papers which she left back wile scheduling meetings.

Maan reached for the door opened it without noticing anything.. Geet was walking backwards while both bumped.

Maan held her by her waist before she cud touch the floor.


Present

Maan's thots broke by the disturbance made by the rushing of the doc's in and out ICU.

Doc's where rushing into the ICU as Geet was sinking. Maan's heart was aching.

Doctor came out and called for Maan and said Mr. Khurana there is only less chance of retrieving her. We have to make it like she has to retrieve so that she can fulfill her promise hope shud be given to her that she will be all fine and can defo fulfill her promise.

She will defo react for that as it is the only thing that is bothering her.

You sud make her think better and try her to help herself retrieve.

Coz only Ur words will work on her otherwise no single chance is left for her to be with us anymore.

Maan braced himself and went into ICU saw her lying there her cheeks which where once red chubby make anyone to pull it was now pale.

Maan's heartbeats rising. He knew that he started loving her the moment he saw her tho he married her Misha, Dadi and Nisha's promise he clearly loved her more which if Nisha wud have so much loved, but mite have caused her the pain when he din't express it to her

He dare not confess to her in fear of loosing her forever like Nisha He wished staying away from her and love her more than get close and loose her. As he believed fate doesn't want him to be with his beloved person's fate has erased the word love form his life.

He now wanted was to bring her back to her whole self he din't like her being in the hospital. It was coz of him that she is in this condition. hadn't he accepted to play with Misha and play a dirty prank on Geet while she was on the ladder she wouldn't have fallen off. He was the sole reason his hearts fear as come true of loosing her forever.

Past:

He remembered how the first time he saw her in his arms in his cabin where it was filled with a different fragrance which for a min diverted him from the fragrance of Nisha which gave him the mixed fragrance of Nisha and someone but he felt tat fragrance was close to him as if it belongs to him.

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He saw her face he was shocked beyond words she slowly opened her eyes which she had closed the moment she thot she will fall. Their eyes met a strong bonded feeling engulfed both their heart.

Maan straightened her Maan's eyes went to the frame which was on the table. Geet followed his gaze there she saw the beautiful family pic of Dadi, Maan, Nisha, and Misha.

She realized just then that she has bumped into her jiju but cudn't reveal that she is his sister in law.

Maan stood there in shock. Geet became professional; and told him that she is his new Secretary and Senior Architect of KC. She told him the timings for the meeting for that day. All this while Maan was standing in total shock like a statue and was abt to leave.

He was just staring at her in disbelief she was near the door when the door opened and Yash barged in without noticing Maan and hugged her tightly and said "Geet we got the construction work well furnished for now hope Boss likes it". Coz this was their first project for furnishing the new site. Still his hands ion her shoulder.

Geet din't know why but her gaze turned to Maan at once when Yash hugged her. She saw that the eyes wic where portraying shock and disbelief slowly portrayed anger, tinge of jealous and the questions who she is and the Y the hell a Maan is hugging her. Tho she mite not be Nisha but all he cud see in her was Nisha actually more than Nisha.

Geet saw the same possessiveness for her which he had for Nisha which clearly was portrayed in a pic on his desk separated from family pic which had only him and Nisha both hugging

Edited by aarthirajendran - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was slightly confusing

Maan reached for the door opened it without noticing anything.. Geet was walking backwards while both bumped.

Maan held her by her waist before she cud touch the floor…

Maan's thots broke by the disturbance made by the rushing of the doc's in and out ICU…

Doc's where rushing into the ICU as Geet was sinking. Maan's heart was aching.

Doctor came out and called for Maan and said Mr. Khurana there is only less chance of retrieving her. We have to make it like she has to retrieve so that she can fulfill her promise hope shud be given to her that she will be all fine and can defo fulfill her promise.

She will defo react for that as it is the only thing that is bothering her.

You sud make her think better and try her to help herself retrieve.

Coz only Ur words will work on her otherwise no single chance is left for her to be with us anymore.

Maan braced himself and went into ICU saw her lying there her cheeks which where once red chubby make anyone to pull it was now pale.

Maan's heartbeats rising. He knew that he started loving her the moment he saw her tho he married her Misha, Dadi and Nisha's promise he clearly loved her more which if Nisha wud have so much loved, but mite have caused her the pain when he din't express it to her

Can you clear this


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Posted: 14 years ago
finally....they met...i was like YAYYYYYYYYY......as soon i read ur words..i imaged their first office fall..awesome part...really hoping that geet makes it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: heermeher

that was slightly confusing

Maan reached for the door opened it without noticing anything.. Geet was walking backwards while both bumped.

Maan held her by her waist before she cud touch the floor'

Maan's thots broke by the disturbance made by the rushing of the doc's in and out ICU'

Doc's where rushing into the ICU as Geet was sinking. Maan's heart was aching.

Doctor came out and called for Maan and said Mr. Khurana there is only less chance of retrieving her. We have to make it like she has to retrieve so that she can fulfill her promise hope shud be given to her that she will be all fine and can defo fulfill her promise.

She will defo react for that as it is the only thing that is bothering her.

You sud make her think better and try her to help herself retrieve.

Coz only Ur words will work on her otherwise no single chance is left for her to be with us anymore.

Maan braced himself and went into ICU saw her lying there her cheeks which where once red chubby make anyone to pull it was now pale.

Maan's heartbeats rising. He knew that he started loving her the moment he saw her tho he married her Misha, Dadi and Nisha's promise he clearly loved her more which if Nisha wud have so much loved, but mite have caused her the pain when he din't express it to her

Can you clear this


red color lines are thots of Maan ... how he met with Geet for teh first time and the others r the present situation...

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