MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 - Page 56

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

maan and ridz twins

like the precap

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
geet father Mu her he is thinking about jay.
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely!
glad to see that geet's father didn't object to maneet's relation!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
taani is 18? that was a shock for them hehe
Fabulous part
loved it
cont soon
thank you

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it n happy that maan didnt lie to geet about jenni n taani only 18
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update.........


continue sooooon dear................😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 33

They sat and talked about everything, Maan couldn't hold the truth about him and jenni and told her everything, he didn't know if she would take it wrong if he didn't have told her anything about jenni/ridzi, Geet was happy that they both didn't lied to each other.

Geet- Maan
Maan-hmm
Geet- Kya hmm, har baat mein hmm, kuch pocho to hmm, kya shaadi ke badh bhi mujhe hmm hi mile ga jawab mein?
Maan- Are jaan, gussa kyo hoti ho? Mein to aisa hi hoon, abh to tum mujhe janti hi ho na
Geet- ek saal mein kyo kisi itni ache tariqe se nhi pechanta and laughed
Maan- Acha, well what is it?
Geet- Woh, I was thinking now that Taani and Anu should go on their Honeymoon
Maan- And?
Geet- Comon, you should buy them a ticket, and send them away? got it?
Maan- Oh, Geet and started to tease her now
Geet- Kya?
Maan- Sidhe tariqe se kehte ke tumhe mere saath akele mein rehna hai
Geet- Aise koi bat nhi
Maan- I...
Geet stoped breath now
Maan- I.. Lov....
Geet started to look down
Maan- I Loved the ida, i wil buy them a ticket and started to laugh

Geet got shocked of hearing, - How mean, I don't want to talk with you, don't ever talk with me
Maan- shhh, don't say that, or else I will sneak into your room and disturb you when you are sleeping
Geet- Aaj tak to nhi aye, hehe
Maan- You are challenging MSK
Geet- Yes I do, you won't come
Maan- What If I come?
Geet- Then I will do whatever you say
Maan- Promise?
Geet- Me Geet Handa promise, so now i'm going to sleep, good night
Maan- See you soon jaan
Geet- hehe, you won't come and cuts the phone

Maan gets up and wears his shirt and goes out

*******

Geet was going to sleep and is wearing a short knee lenghted dress,

Geet- Maan bhi kitni bate bnata hai, kabhi to kuch kehta hai kabhi kuch, and goes to sleep

*******

Ridhimma is getting better and want to get discharged now, it's 2.00 am
Armaan passes from her room and looks in from the window, he sees how she is taking off all button and he goes inside

Armaan- Yeh kya kar rahi ho?
Ridhimma- Woh, I want to go home
Armaan- Kaal chale jana

She looked into his eyes and turned her face.

Armaan- should I wait?
Ridhimma- No, you can go and turned her back and pretends that she is sleeping

Armaan goes out and stands their and watches her from the windows

Armaan- I really love you, I will do anything for get you back

******

Maan reaches and climbs up to her room, he checks that her windows are opened and he goes insde, there he sees his angel is sleeping in peace.

Maan takes out his mobile and caps some pic of her, then he got a ida of scare her, he dials her nr and goes and sits in her washroom,

He hears how the bells are going and he openes the door little bit to see what she is doing

Geet is getting distrubed by the cell is calling, she wakes up and looks at the nr, it is private nr

Geet- Hello?
Maan- ....
Geet looked at the clock and it was 1.00 am, she got scared now
Geet- Who is it?

Maan takes a bit paper and holds it infront of the mobile
Maan- I'm a kidnapper
Geet- Oh, and you want?
Maan looked at the mobile if she was alive or something, are she going to talk with a kidnapper like this what he want?
Maan- Money ofcourse?
Geet- Buy why? You haven't kidnapped someone yet.
Maan felt like he should eat her up
Maan- We have kidnapped Maan Singh Khurana

Geet eyes widend and she looked at the phone in shock, Maan watched carefully how she is reacting and he is so enjoying so see her like that

Geet- Don't lie, he is with me
Maan looked around like if he has got busterd or something, but no
Maan- Do you wnat to her his voice?
Geet- ehh...
Maan removes the paper but puts it back again
Geet- see you are lieing, he is with me
Maan- You don't have any shame in you girl? Before marriage you are with a boy , so late?
Geet- Excuse me, mister, he is my hubby so ?
Maan removed the paper now and laughed
Geet- MAAAN??? and was shocked
Maan- Yup wifey, hahah
Geet- I'm not you wife? and was abit scared that it is real kidnappers but her he is joking
Maan- What not me wife? You said na, i'm your hubby, then you must be my wifey
Geet- See, I won the challenge, you are not her and changed the topic
Maan- i'm here
Geet looked around
Maan- Why are you looking around? I'm in washroom

He comes out and Geet is shocked that he actually comes

Geet- Aap yaha ?

Precap- trying to controle... heheheh wonder what is controling ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome one yaar ....loved it !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

amazing update.......loved Geet....she is so brave! Does she not know that she must not challenge MSK? Please update soon n thanks 4 da pm😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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