MANEET!FF: Tere Mast MDN sea 2 NOTE PG 139 - Page 40

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 23:
Geet- ohh..she is that girl!

Dadi maa goes to Maan and asks him if he can take care of Jenni cause she wants to go home.. Now it's for the youngster to start their games..
Geet is standing their and watching him and goes from their.. Maan sees it and wonders what happend to her.

Maan- Jenni go to Jay and rest of the gang I will get Geet.
Jenni- oh I really want to see her.
Maan goes after Geet but can't find her.
Maan sees her standing and talking with some other girls.. He looks at her back and sees that her kurti's hook is open. Geet looks back and sees Maan standing their and looking at her. She excuse her self and goes away from them. Maan is standing on the other side and when Geet goes beside him he takes her hand(that one who is not hurted) and pulls her to her.

Geet- What are you doing?
Maan- I missed you sooo much and hugs her tight.
Geet- Leave me Maan.
Maan- Geet, how can I leave you like this.. he turns her around and puts her paranda on her right side. He touches her back and it send cold shiver to her. Maan closes the hook and gives her angry look.


Geet- Can you leave me now! and snappes out at him
she is about to go when Maan holds her tight from the arm.. She screams of pain and Maan looks at her arm and are shocked to see the scratches she has..
Maan- What happened Geet? How did this scrates happened?
Geet takes his hand and pushes him away .
Geet- W*H What's wrong with you? she started to bleed
Maan- Sorry Geet.. But what happened?
Geet- All this is because of you.. You destroyed me Maan. How could you? I hate you. thank god i'm free from you. And leaves him in shock
Maan- What did I do? WHAT? He looks at her in anger.. I know these girl.. now I know why she did come so close to me.
Geet goes and stands next to Taani and are behaving like everything is fine.
Maan comes their and stands next to Geet. Jenni asks Jay who is Geet and he points to her.
Jenni comes and is about to hug Geet when she back out and gives her a strange look.
Jenni- Hi I'm jenni
Geet- so?
Jenni was taken back with her words. She looks at Maan who was getting mad at Geet. Maan comes there and holds Jenni by her waist which made Geet mad.
Maan- What happened jenni?
Jenni- Nothing, you haven't introduce me yet to Geet?
Geet- Listen Jenni.. I don't know you.. I don't want to have contacts with wrong people
Jenni- But you are Maan's girlfriend right?
Maan- Have you lost it?
Geet looks at him and is shocked.
Maan- Please Jenni.. just leave the dust here. We goes and enjoyes ourselfs..
Geet looks at him - dust? and cries..

Taani sees it and starts getting worried for Geet. Anu also looked at them and then saw Geet hurt like this he couldn't stop himself for taking her side, he goes to Maan.
Anu- MAAN!
Maan turns around and looks at him like what happened?
Maan- Ja bro!
Anu- What happened between you and Geet?
Maan- Who ?
Anu was taken back with who
Anu- Who? Maan I'm talking about Geet
Maan- I don't know what happened to her. I think she needed a break from me.
Anu- Geet? Geet needed a break from you? I don't think so. You must have said something to her. I remember how many bad things you said to Sam when you left her! Tell me the truth
Maan eyes goes to Geet who is trying to put medecine on her sctraches.
Maan- Woh anu bro , what happened to her arm?
Anu- You don't know? She had a accident that day when you left for London.
Maan was shocked of hearing that. Accident? His Geet had a accident? No
Now anu didn't get a thing of what happened between them.
Maan was about to go to Geet when Anu stops him and nods a no for him.
Anu- I will try to talk to her first! ok
Maan- Please Anu asks her what happened to her, why she is changed so much? My Geet wasn't like this and looks down is embarresed.

Precap- Anu knows why she is angry and Geet will never forgive Maan now!

Edited by SaVni - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh teri ye kya keh diya maan ne gussey mein.................its going to b hard for him to manofy geet now.............oh pl yaar baat ko aur mat bigadna................
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Posted: 14 years ago

u said that MU will be solved soon,

but now it seems like it will last for few updates,

nd it will be hard for maan to manofy her now!!!!

wonderful update........loved it!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
What the hell he think of himself. Poor girl had accident and this guy is showing her attitude.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this is awsome one yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago

The MU will be clear soon ;) Just wait and read... ;)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ooh maan has put himself in a deep hole now I understand he gets angry but his choice of words where not right at all and have hurt the already wounded geet and ergh jenni acting wo calm not realising what her joke has done and liking anu for taking geets side anyways great update and cant wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luvly update
Grrr Maan shud hav been caring instead ov shouting at geet
Glad dat Anu tld everyfin 2 Maan
Maans going 2 hav 2 du a lot b4 geet 4givs him
Cont soon Xx..
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME,....... Did he just cal her DUST
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 24:

Anu goes direct to Taani and tells her everything Maan said to him and both looks at Geet and when she looks at them they pretends that they are flirting,

Geet- How sweet and goes to them

Geet- Can't you guys hold on for a sec or something? and teases them
Anu- Why are you worring? You have Maan right? Go to him

Geet looks at him and leaves in anger.. Taani gives him look go after her now.. Anu goes after her and stops Geet.

Geet- Please Jiju
Anu- What happened?
Geet- what?
Anu- exacly.. What happened between you and Maan?
Geet- Nothing
Anu- I can see it clearly..
Geet- ....
Anu- Please tell me.. Oh so you don't trust me and turns his back to her and is about to go when Geet stops him.
Geet- No Jiju, aise kyo baat nhi hai. Woh.. Maan dosen't love me anymore!
Anu- WHAT! Geet how can you say this?
Geet tells him everything how she was in his office and everthing and how he said to leave and everything.
Anu- But Geet, he maybe said leave from the office? He didn't meant like leave from my life?
Geet- I don't think so.. Don't you see.. That jenni is total over him 24/7.. Like that see.. and points there Maan was talking with Jenni.
Anu- I think you are misunderstanding him jenni is..( Geet's cut him)
Geet- If you are going to take Jenni's side then please do it.. But leave me alone.. First your brother is total heartbraker person... I just made a mistake of loving him. I will never forgive him.
Anu- But Geet listen but geet just left..

Seeing Geet leaving Maan runs to Anu to know what she said and Anu says that he will tell him later, as she is very disrubed with hearing Maan's name all the time.

Geet goes to her room and brakes down totally, she started to cry, she sat there and remembered all the memories with Maan. And at the same time she hears Anu's voice in her head, all the things he said.

Geet- Maybe Jiju was right, maybe did Maan meant to leave office, OMG hai babaji yeh mene kya kar diya, mene sabh kuch ghalt le liye, paar Maan ne bhi haad kar di.. Mujhe ek baar bhi nhi milne aya jab mein hospital mein thi, aur woh Jenni! huh, Maan ke upar to total latoo hai, mujhe Maan se bath karni hue gi, I can't let this go to far now, and goes to Khurna house, she enteres the house and goes straight to Maan's room but he is not in his room. She decides to sit and wait for him.

Maan comes home late and goes straight to his bedroom, he takes off the jacket and throws it on the bed, and Geet chaths it..

Geet- oww.. Somebody is not in good mood

Maan turns around and is shocked to see Geet..

Geet stands up and walks to him
Maan- What happened?
Geet- I'm sorry Maan! and holds her ear. I'm really sorry and hugs him

Maan was very happy now.. Finally .. finally his Geet is back.

Maan place a soft kiss on her forhead and Geet rolles her eyes

Maan- Abh kiya hua?
Geet- Comon Maan, Itna acha mauka hai, and you didn't give me the first kiss.
Maan- Sorry I didn't tought about it..

Maan cups Geets face and slowly goes closer to her and Jenni openes the door.

Jeeni- Geet? and is shocked to see her this time.

Geet- Hi and smiles to her.

Maan murmer* Jab bhi mein iska kareeb jata ho koy na koy ae jata hai, abh jenni ko kya hua?*

Maan- What happened my sweet sister?
Jenni- I come to say that I got a work in Sanjeevani so i'm going to work tomorrow, so you don't walk into my room and starting to look after me, btw now I should leave and closes the door..

Geet tried to hold her laughter but she didn't manage to do it,

Maan- Why are you laughing? in angry voice
Geet- I'm laughing at you, who can't even kiss his girlfriend for the first time without somebody poping up and continues laugh

Precap- Maan is naughty

Edited by SaVni - 14 years ago

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