Deceived- MG FF ~Part 13~ on pg 66 & impt note

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asmara

@asmara19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#211

NOTE:

Ok guys soo i gotta make a complaint here. i have just realized that i PM to alot of people but i dun get

that much comments or likes which is a little disappointing so either i wrap up this ss if u dun like it

or if u have stopped liking my ss u can delete me for ur buddy list so that i dun have to send out an extra PM and then get disappointed that i

take out my time to send out pms thinking that all of the people added in my pm list wud like to read the update.

So kindly save me the trouble too and urself too...

Or i have a better idea😛 u tell me if u want any improvements here and i will try to improve my ss

to ur likings

nd for those who do read my ss but dun comment or like then i humbly request them to do so cuz it wud encourage me😃

and for those out there who have been liking and commenting thaaankkksss a ton

and i love u all for reading my ss...

and 1 more thing with this note i didn't intend to hurt anyone but if i did i apologize for that😊

Thank You...😊

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#212

Wow Amazing part yaar.
Loved that swimming pool scene hehe.
Aww geet is too innocent. Fearing about Maan's reaction.
Oh cant wait for their close moment. And hayee Maan jealous and possessive.
Do update soon please ;D

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Nahin yaar dont end your FF so soon. Abhi to maza a raha hai :D
Keep up ur awesome work yaar :)

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krati

@krati5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#214

its so lovely... d good thing is their relation is strtng on d understanding plot... continue soon

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Loved the update! Amazing! Can't wait for the next part!! Thanks for the PM!

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#216

Please don't end this FF. Love this FF.

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#217

ah... the part was a tease😉... well the precap has me eager for it😃.. do post the next part soon.

Edited by ninand - 14 years ago

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#218

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#219

i like d update very much... 👏👏

maan family is too damm sweet...😃😃

i like d way maan try to convey his feelings to geet in the last para through his words n actions...😳😳

add me to ur buddy list...

do continue...

chao

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malfoy

@malfoy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#220

Hey, just read this ss from the begining. i have got to say, u have a wonderful story goin on here. loved it so far..the upcoming update sounds very interesting..looking forward to it. pls to update soon.