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OH SHI....*! NOOOO WAYYY!!! 🤪 WOW WOW WOW! I LOVVVVVVVVVVVED THE WHOLE phone convo scene, shifting to Geet at VKC, and then back to phonecall which Adi-Sasha overhear..!! OH.. EM.. GEE!! WOWWWWWWW @ that part particularly!!
That end was freakin' FANNNNNTASSSSTIC TOOO!!! Yo Sim, you wrote in this part that Geet wouldn't cry over the man she hated / loved, so would that mean Vicky and then ANOTHER character who is yet to be revealed and possibly the person who shuts the door and says the line from the first precap?? aaaaaaa YOU MUST update tomorrow! I can't wait already! The precap are torturous - please reveal everything FAST! 😆
Awwwwwww ok, I HAVE to mention this - even though it was small, I LOVED the small mention of Romeo in Geet's thoughts. He's such an adorable character that it comes naturally to smile if / whenever he pops up lol
An undoubtedly brilliant update once again! I'm having another "mega-annoyed moment" right now = it's high time the "LOVE" button be invented on IF so that we can actually hit "LOVE" on a post too..! urgh. ESP when it's as suchaaaa megaaaa pleasing update like this!
Anywayyyys, womannnn!!! I AM SUPER HAPPY that you've chosen to add DRAMA to every part now - like HA-LOW, that's what fiction's all about - be it tv shows, ff's or cinema... DRAMA is a MUST, therefore... dramatise this to your hearts content!! =D There was plenty of drama in this btw, which, OMG... I LOVED every word of! So do keep that up with your lovable style.
On the whole, this was such an awesome update, cos it had So Much to it! You so wonderfully added shades of
HUMOUR
(with Maan's comment about having a RUBBER head after bumping into Geet??!! 😆);
SADNESS
(with Geet's stiffening at the idea of returning to VKC + then having to face what she didn't wanna);
SUSPENSSSSSE -
(MAAN AND DEV?? CONVO);
curiosity, frustration, mixed feelings and lots moooooore! Keep updating so wonderfully, looking forward to the triple treats a week =D =D =D
Saz
x x x x x
and ohh! you're so welcome for the promotion in the Jalwa thread 😆 like I said before, this is tooooo gooood to miss out on! 😛
That end was freakin' FANNNNNTASSSSTIC TOOO!!! Yo Sim, you wrote in this part that Geet wouldn't cry over the man she hated / loved, so would that mean Vicky and then ANOTHER character who is yet to be revealed and possibly the person who shuts the door and says the line from the first precap?? aaaaaaa YOU MUST update tomorrow! I can't wait already! The precap are torturous - please reveal everything FAST! 😆
Awwwwwww ok, I HAVE to mention this - even though it was small, I LOVED the small mention of Romeo in Geet's thoughts. He's such an adorable character that it comes naturally to smile if / whenever he pops up lol
An undoubtedly brilliant update once again! I'm having another "mega-annoyed moment" right now = it's high time the "LOVE" button be invented on IF so that we can actually hit "LOVE" on a post too..! urgh. ESP when it's as suchaaaa megaaaa pleasing update like this!
Anywayyyys, womannnn!!! I AM SUPER HAPPY that you've chosen to add DRAMA to every part now - like HA-LOW, that's what fiction's all about - be it tv shows, ff's or cinema... DRAMA is a MUST, therefore... dramatise this to your hearts content!! =D There was plenty of drama in this btw, which, OMG... I LOVED every word of! So do keep that up with your lovable style.
On the whole, this was such an awesome update, cos it had So Much to it! You so wonderfully added shades of
HUMOUR
(with Maan's comment about having a RUBBER head after bumping into Geet??!! 😆);
SADNESS
(with Geet's stiffening at the idea of returning to VKC + then having to face what she didn't wanna);
SUSPENSSSSSE -
(MAAN AND DEV?? CONVO);
curiosity, frustration, mixed feelings and lots moooooore! Keep updating so wonderfully, looking forward to the triple treats a week =D =D =D
Saz
x x x x x
and ohh! you're so welcome for the promotion in the Jalwa thread 😆 like I said before, this is tooooo gooood to miss out on! 😛
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