PKYEK FF - The Crossroads...*NEW* Pg 51!!! UpDaTeD - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mansim

superb update👏👏

Thank you!! 😊
why is panchi counting in the jungle?😕😆

are sid and panchi playing hide and seek😕😆

You and Anu are my most intelligent readers....or maybe you both do mind reading too!! 😲😉😆
misha's dream sequence was also good😆(bimbos dancing in the background🤣🤣 loved the song suites her perfectly😆)
Thank you! 😊 Poor bimbos..show waale ignore toh I thought I'll give them some work to do. 😉

abhay and sid's conversation was too good🤣🤣🤣

😆😆 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. 😉
love the sasur and bahurani scene😆
😆 Thank you.

thanks for the pm😉

You're welcome. 😊
update soon😆

Yup...as soon as I'm allowed to. 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 28
In the jungle.....
Panchhi: One thousand nine hundred and ninety six. One thousand nine hundred and ninety seven......
*
At the Raichand Mansion.....
Abhay and Sid go still as soon as they hear Haseena's shout.
They stare at her.
They stare at each other.
They stare at her.
They run.
Abhay hides behind the sofa.
Sid runs behind a lamp.
Chaand comes in with Pia. Both smile at each other and raise their glasses of Roohafza in a toast.
Haseena faints.
Lavyadei (LD) wakes up.
LD (croaking): I...am...thirssssssty......beedi...jala.....ke.......
Pia: Haw aunty! You shouldn't smoke! Tabhi aapki aawaaz bhi aisi hai.
LD (suddenly normal): Aunty kis ko boli be beedi jala ke?
Pia (shocked): Hawww! Maine kuch nahin kiya! Kyunki mera naam hai Pia!
LD: Piya? Tune kya piya?
Pia (happily): Roohafza. Uncle ne diya.
LD (choking): Haaye Chandu..yeh tumne kya kiya?
Abhay (singing): Pia Pia o Pia Pia..... [He sees Chaand looking at him curiously and changes track hurriedly.] Subah shaam kahe mera jiya.....chain se baithoonga na jab tak khoon tera na maine piya! [He offers Chaand a grin. Chaand looks taken aback. He doesn't say anything though, and turns away uneasily.]
Chaand (angrily): I don't need to explain my actions to anyone. Meri Haseena ko kya hua?
Abhay: Dad woh...
LD (gasping): Yahaan main pyaas se marr rahi hoon aur mera khayaal toh kisi ko aa nahin raha.
Abhay: Aap ko kya hua ab? *turning towards Chaand* Dad?
Chaand (looking away guiltily): What?
Abhay: Kahin aapne......
Chaand: I don't know. Meri Haseena ko theek karo.
Abhay (coming closer to Chaand and whispering): Dad! Did you give her that dye?
Chaand: Yes.
Abhay (happily): Oh dad! You are brilliant!
Chaand: Thank you Abhay!
Sid (watching them curiously): So....what's cookin'?
Abhay: Oh..nothing.
Chaand: Nothing at all!
[They wink at each other.]
Sid: Hmmm...father-sonny talks hmm? (a li'l bit of jealousy showing through) Main bhi beta hoon. Tell me too.
Chaand: Uh...woh..
Abhay: Yeh mere dad hain. Tumhaare nahin.
Sid: Oh puh-leeeez!
Chaand: Yes. Tumhaari is bhookh ne tumhe humse door kar diya hai.
Sid: Oh dad! (He sees that Chaand is not moved.) Bhookh se yaad aaya, a li'l birdie is waiting for me. Buh-bye.!!
[He runs away. Chaand sighs sadly. Abhay puts his arm around Chaand's shoulders. After a few moments, they work on reviving Haseena.]
*
In the jungle...
Panchhi: One thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine. Two thousand. *opens her eyes* I'm coming to get ya!
[She goes searching for Sid. She sees some movement behind a tree. She moves forward to see what it is when a hand covers her mouth.]
***
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Posted: 14 years ago
Toh Anu's idea was correct, Panchi and Sid are playing hide and seek. Anu - good job, keep it up.
Haseena ne bada rob rakha hai dono bachoan par. Dono hi dar gaye, vaise I can't imagine in reality, both of them getting anything but scared. 🤣 Abhay will look so cute, hiding behind the sofa.

Loh Piya ne bhi peena shuru kar diya - rooh afzah.🤣 Vampires ki sangat mein rahegi toh yahi hoga. Aur yaar please please mujhe batayo na yeh Lavyadei hai kaun. You promised that you will tell me. I was thinking she is just going to sing the item number - beedi jalai le badan se Pia, ...

Aunty kisko bola 🤣🤣, badi image conscious hai LD. Pia, diya, kiya, jiya - good rhyming.
Aur yeh Abhay ka actual orientation hai kya. Kyun bechare Chand ko pareshaan kar rahi ho. Poor thing... din raat uske dimaage mein kaise kaise khayalaat aate rehte hain.

Mujhe pata hai Haseena ko kya hua. Woh zabardasti rest tonic le rahi hai - Adi ke karan 🤣🤣

Poor Sid, bin maa baap ka bachcha - mujhe uspe bahut taras aa raha hai.

Bhookh fir bhookh - Mein na kehti thi ki tere characters ko bhookh bahut lagti hai🤣🤣

Who was that? Sid?

Excellent yaar. I know you are very busy these days because of your exams. But still you are taking time and updating the crossroads, that's really nice of you. Thanks a lot.😉


Edited by Ritzie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

🤣🤣🤣

You know at first i didnt like LD much but in this update...she was FUN!!! 🤣
The whole Pia, LD, Chand, Abhay, Sid convo was hilarious! Enjoyed it! 😃🤣
When will i get some Birdie wings?
Sid kahin akele akele na kha jaye! :P
Thanks for such fun updates!! 😳
And you are updating so fast these days! Gooody!
but concentrate on studies too! Best of luck! :)
Edited by sugaryanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Abhay and Sid fighting for Chaand🤣 and hiding behind lamp and sofa.
It was awesome
Posted: 14 years ago
Adi,
I just logged in today after a whole month. lol. Haven't been active lately, I have been studying like crazy for my exams and I have one big one coming up. But, just took a little break today and decided to catch to your "FF Crossroads" updates. They were hilarious as always. Love the twists of Reva, Kabir, and Abhay. 😆 Poor Chand! 😆
Keep rocking.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritzie

Toh Anu's idea was correct, Panchi and Sid are playing hide and seek. Anu - good job, keep it up.
😆😆😆 Anu's the most intelligent girl ever! 😊
Haseena ne bada rob rakha hai dono bachoan par. Dono hi dar gaye, vaise I can't imagine in reality, both of them getting anything but scared. 🤣 Abhay will look so cute, hiding behind the sofa.
🤣 Awww!! He'll look so so sooo darn cute! 😳

Loh Piya ne bhi peena shuru kar diya - rooh afzah.🤣 Vampires ki sangat mein rahegi toh yahi hoga. Aur yaar please please mujhe batayo na yeh Lavyadei hai kaun. You promised that you will tell me. I was thinking she is just going to sing the item number - beedi jalai le badan se Pia, ...
🤣🤣 I will...slowly slowly. 🤣

Aunty kisko bola 🤣🤣, badi image conscious hai LD. Pia, diya, kiya, jiya - good rhyming.

😆Thank you! 😉
Aur yeh Abhay ka actual orientation hai kya. Kyun bechare Chand ko pareshaan kar rahi ho. Poor thing... din raat uske dimaage mein kaise kaise khayalaat aate rehte hain.
😆😆😆 Actual orientation...*blushes*

Mujhe pata hai Haseena ko kya hua. Woh zabardasti rest tonic le rahi hai - Adi ke karan 🤣🤣
🤣 Poor mommy-in-law...has to work so much na..tabhi.

Poor Sid, bin maa baap ka bachcha - mujhe uspe bahut taras aa raha hai.
Awww! Yeah..

Bhookh fir bhookh - Mein na kehti thi ki tere characters ko bhookh bahut lagti hai🤣🤣
😆😆😆 Uska bhi ek reason hai..😉

Who was that? Sid?
Who? What? I think I'll have to revise. 😆

Excellent yaar. I know you are very busy these days because of your exams. But still you are taking time and updating the crossroads, that's really nice of you. Thanks a lot.😉
🤣🤣 *No comments* 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

ROFLROFLROFL

You know at first i didnt like LD much but in this update...she was FUN!!! ROFL
😆😆😆 LD...hmm...super annoying na? 😉
The whole Pia, LD, Chand, Abhay, Sid convo was hilarious! Enjoyed it! 😃ROFL
😆 Thankoo!
When will i get some Birdie wings?
Sid kahin akele akele na kha jaye! :P
😆😆😆 Woh toh you only ask him na. 😉
Thanks for such fun updates!! 😳
And you are updating so fast these days! Gooody!
but concentrate on studies too! Best of luck! :)
😆😆😆 Kiya na concentrate. 🤣

Originally posted by: shaggyscooby

OMG Abhay and Sid fighting for ChaandROFL and hiding behind lamp and sofa.

It was awesome

😆😆 Thank you.

Originally posted by: lighteningbuzz

Adi,

I just logged in today after a whole month. lol. Haven't been active lately, I have been studying like crazy for my exams and I have one big one coming up. But, just took a little break today and decided to catch to your "FF Crossroads" updates. They were hilarious as always. Love the twists of Reva, Kabir, and Abhay. 😆 Poor Chand! 😆
Keep rocking.

Payyal!!!!
Sorry I couldn't reply earlier - became very busy with the 'bade waale' exams. 😆 Hope yours went well.
Thanks for the encouraging comment. Tc! 😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤗Hello Friends!🤗
First of all, an apology for updating so late - had exams going on - they started in March and ended just now! Have to prepare for my entrance exam now, so still going to be a bit busy.
And yeah, updates will continue to be "small", as a lot of readers complain, but they'll be regular, hopefully.😆 Those who don't like this format, umm, sorry, but I can't do anything about it.🤔 As it is, each part takes a lot of time to write - but in case you haven't noticed, they are all action-packed. So it's just that I prefer to say lots of stuff in just a few words.😉
Anyway, on with the story!😆
Part 29
Panchhi struggles, but the hand clamps down tighter. A voice hisses in her ear...
Voice: Door raho Siddharth se. He is not for you...
Panchhi struggles more, and suddenly she feels the hand releasing her. She spins around, only to see...nothing...
There is no one.
The forest is still, silent save for a sole cricket chirping away merrily.
Panchhi screams.
*
Abhay: Oh Dad! You are so cool!
Chaand (grinning): I am, aren't I?
Abhay: Yeah...but we must put her right before Mom wakes up. Aisa karo, you give her that green liquid from my cupboard. Tab tak main Pia ko chhod kar aata hoon uske hostel.
[Chaand looks at Pia, who is looking disappointed.]
Chaand: Umm...thodi der rehne do na ise yahin.
Abhay (looking at Pia sadly): No Dad. It is not safe.
Chaand: Hmmm...I understand. Samajhta hoon main.
Pia: Bye Uncle!
Chaand: Bye beta. May the Moon cool you.
Pia: Hain?
Abhay: Dad said 'bye'.
Pia: Oh..okayyy...
[Abhay takes her away before she can ask any more questions. When he comes back, Chaand has revived both the ladies, who have retired to thir rooms, and is sitting with a drink, staring into the flames as they dance around in the fireplace. He looks up as Abhay enters.]
Chaand: Ah...Abhayyy... We. Need. To. Talk.
[Abhay knows it then - he is in trouble.]
*
In the jungle, Panchhi is going on screaming when Sid reaches her. It takes him a few moments to calm her down. She turns to him, sobbing.
Sid (in a soothing voice): What's wrong, love? Why are you upset?
Panchhi (sobbing): Woh...Sid...main...count kar rahi thi toh ...
Sid: Toh?
Panchhi (crying a little less): Toh kisi ne...they said...tum...main.. *sobs again*
Sid: What, baby?
Panchhi: Oh Sid! Usne kaha tum se door rahoon! Tum...galat ho.
[Sid hugs her and pats her back until she stops crying.]
Sid (a little grimly) : Love, usne...galat nahin kaha ...but hey...if this is true love, we will sort it out!
Panchhi (looking up at him): Really?
Sid: Do you believe in the power of love? That it transcends the boundaries?
Panchhi: What boundaries?
Sid (exasperatedly): Arey koi bhi!
Panchhi: Umm..okay...yeah. I do.
Sid (smiling again): Bas then. Really.
Panchhi (whispering happily): Really.
[They hug. The cricket chirps happily.]
*
Abhay settles down in front of the fire for the 'discussion' with Chaand. Both are feeling very uncomfortable, and their discomfort shows in their stances. Finally, Chaand clears his throat and starts speaking.
Chaand: Look, Abhay... Tum ab bade ho gaye ho.
Abhay (muttering): Glad you noticed.
Chaand (ignoring him): Yeh talk...I mean...yeh baat karne ka...I think...er...time...uh...ho gaya...you know, hai.
Abhay (suspiciously): What talk?
Chaand (rapidly): You know...I have seen that you don't know how to neck... *Abhay looks at the floor, ashamed* and...you know...red lipstick...dye...shirt...Kabir...
Abhay (looking up, shocked): Dad!!!!!!!
Chaand: I know I know...humans mein aajkal legal hai...but hum vampires ke kuch rules hain. Rules ko chhodo. It is not wrong or unnatural...I mean, phir hum kya hain, right? Par Abhay, tum pehle Maithili ke saath...aur suddenly Kabir...
Abhay: But Dad!
Chaand: Abhay. Maana humne tumhein janam nahin diya. Maana ke I am not a good 'dad', human terms nein, but your well-being is still our responsibility. I want you to be happy.
Abhay: I understand Dad, but...
Chaand: Abhay. Let me finish. Jab tum Pia se mile, I thought...I was afraid, because of Maithili, but Abhay, it was...right somehow. Theek tha jo sab ho raha tha. Yeh Kabir kahaan se aaya?
Abhay: Dad...
Chaand (sighing): Is new generation ko itna mat follow karo Abhay ki tum khud ko bhool jaao. I like Pia. She will make a good vampire...
Abhay (angrily): NO!!!!
Chaand (startled): Abhay!
Abhay (pacing around the room): No Dad. I cannot. Pia...woh special hai. Woh...insaan hai. I cannot turn her into a monster.
Chaand (in a hurt tone): Monster?
Abhay: Yes Dad. A monster. A vampire. Ek khoon peeta...whatever jo Discovery Channel waale kehte hain Hindi mein.
Chaand: Yaar itni Hindi mujhe bhi nahin aati. Chhaddo. Tu bas itna bataa, Pia se shaadi karega ya nahin?
Abhay: No way! I belong to Kabir! Mera tann, mann, dhan, sab uska hai.
Chaand (laughing): Bestiii!!!!!!!
Abhay: Kyun?
Chaand: Humaare paas dhan hai hi nahin! We Raichands are bankrupt!!!!!
[He keeps laughing loudly, and goes up to his room. He enters the room, still laughing loudly. Haseena, who has been pacing in the room, turns.]
Haseena: Chaand.
Chaand (still laughing): Haan?
Haseena (hissing): We. Need. To. Talk.
[Chaand stops laughing. He gulps. He knows that he is in trouble.]
***
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Posted: 14 years ago
welcome back👏👏
and what a comeback with your ff😳😉
loved it😳😳
it was hillarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
poor chand now he is in trouble😭 ha ha ha🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
thanks for the pm😃
update soon😉

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