The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. - Page 25

congrats for the new thread....

u opened a new thread...

posted the next part...

n did told us...........that was so bad.........

i was thinking when u'll put up the next part...

n here its already posted........

jao khatti...mein baat nahin karon gi...........😔😭

Originally posted by: zephyrr

doesnt look like an update night tonight.. i just came home half an hour back.. and its really cold where i am.. i just feel like snuggling up in my blanket and going off to sleep.. cant complete the part today.. but i'll surely plan an update for tomorrow.. 😊

Originally posted by: armaanlover_7

I read the part 80 update.No need to say,it is superb.You already know that.And I just love the title .The best is "SupArmaan" part.I didnt realised it first,I just read it as superman and then only after a while the 'Armaan' part struck.Rachna,you are superb yaar.👍🏼All the supermaan related dialogues made me laugh like nothing.🤣How do u manage to tell such humourous dialogues?Then I liked Ridhima's search to find out the meaning of tattoo.If I was in her place,I would have learned Chinese.Can you sent her my message?Please tell her to check internet for the translation.There may be the new Chinese words.
Then the whole Shashank interruption was very good.I could feel their irritation very well.But the most irritating one is one and only Armaan.The way he irritated Ridhima.....😡oh God.....when will he stop his stupid jokes in serious situations?I felt really pissed off when Armaan was trying to avoid Ridhima's questions.But afterall he is my baby,I cant be mad at him.The whole update was fantastic till the last para.The scene were Armaan was sitting in parapet and Ridhima coming to his home at night and console him,making him sleep..i couldnt get continuity in that scene.I felt the scene was not in place or it was a dream of Armaan.So I didnt like the last para very much.But when i started to read the next update,then only I got the continuity and I got the answers for the questions in my mind.So eventhough i was confused earlier,when i read the next update,i could relate to the last para.Now I like that scene also.
Then...I have to tell something about the making out scene.The scene was intense,passionate and you really describe the whole scene fantastically.But nowadays I feel that the making out scenes are becoming a little repetitive.I am not saying there should not be any make out scene.There must be😉.But add something new to it so that it looks different.The last one or two making out scenes are almost like this one.I felt so.I hope you will add some more spices to it,next time.Love u.....❤️

Originally posted by: zephyrr

not yet.. have some work.. and mood nahi jam raha hai.. but i'll start writing soon... 😊