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Anokhee thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
For installments 1,2 ,3 and 4....
Dilruba was a show stealer.........
OMG! His Hindi was hilarious.... I just couldn't stop laughing.... And the best line being "Baby nahi,,, Bhabhi bol" from Armaan.... that was so typically Armaan.
And the cutest thing was Ridhima's tantrum of not living in a hotel... That was just so cute and how did even Shashank expect Ridhima to not even visit Armaan's apartment... And what will be his reaction be when he comes to know that she didnt even check-in into the hotel?? I just hope that just accelerates their wedding like any father would probably think! LOL!!!!!!
And then the apartment, Ridhima embarrassed him enough about his "items" like he had the night before... That was a good comeback....
And Amaan's past being explored... hmmm... that sounds pretty interesting...
Would like to know more about it.....
Then the hospital, Helen seemed like a mother figure to Armaan... I'm glad he had at least someone to take care of him during those days....And Raina, stupid intern!😆
But I loved his thoughtfulness for Ridhima.... That was indeed very very adorable...
And the dress, like i told you that I have one too so no comments on how awesomely awesome that dress fits....
And about the Tiger Sky Tower...
I have no words...
That place was so cool......
Somehow, I love watching any city's aerial view...
And the lines you described about how Ridhima felt when she saw below were so true...
The feeling of liberation and freedom is something wonderful to feel...
And since, we dont have any Tiger Tower here, I usually feel like that at Marine Drive in Mumbai....
It just gives me that feeling about wanting to fly away with no bondage....
And the kiss they shared there would be the most romantic one with a view like that behind them...
OMG!!!!!!! its so much like a fairy tale.. or rather something better than that.....
The beachside restaurant-So So SO ROMANTIC!!!!!!! I would love to have a day like that with someone like Armaan by my side...... Everything was just so perfect and yet its little human imperfectness...
Also, I was going to mention about them not going out on a normal basis before but i thought I'll mention it after their return from Singapore.... And there, you mentioned it!!!!!!!!!!😊
Their conversation about marriage was really cute... And I like Armaan's idea of marriage more than the normal shaadis.... I agree with Armaan when he says "too many people, lots of oily food and too much noise" I would rather prefer a court marriage but Armaan's idea was even better....
I hope their wedding is like that....
The Bike Racing was so much fun...
You described the little details so well that it felt like i was there in place of Ridhima...
And it feels exactly the same when you get on a bike for the first time....Armaan and RIdhima getting drunk and singing nursery rhymes was so cute...
And the last emotional conversation was heart-touching...
It was just a plain awesome day in Singapore!!!!!!!!
Brilliantly written!!!!!!
I wonder whats remaining now!!!!!
But obviously waiting for it!!!!!!!!

Muaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh to you for such an awesome update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anokhee!😃

Edited by Anokhee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Anokhee

I think you should just finish the current part to where it has ended at the moment...

This one looks pretty complete!!!!!!!!
And post the little installment you have written as another part in the other thread...

its not the way i wanted the part to end.. i cant start it abruptly.. its just that i had plans ofcovering their whole two days in this part.. i know its become too too long.. but that's coz i've given so many installments and every installment has a definite end.. though this is going to be a little torture.. i am going to proceed and finish this part the way i had planned.. pleas bear with me. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Anokhee

I HATE YOU FOR ENDING THE INSTALLMENT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!

😭
Whens the rest of the part coming???

😛😆😆
i m determined to finish this by morning.. if i dont fall off to sleep involuntarily that is!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sjain

lolzzz why u didn't continue @ original place???

coz it was exceeding the number of bytes that are allowed per post.. i wasnt aware of such a limit.. now i know.. personal experience! 😛😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
In the prelude you've said this part is a bit boring, of course it isn't. But it's the most difficult for one person to think on behalf two persons and also pen it. You have to think of Armaan's questions as well as Riddhima's answers and it should sound logical too!!😕 You've done a convincing job of it and without confusing the readers either. Of course how you managed to script such a long part about their feelings is above me. Kudos for it.!!!! 👏
Edited by ssh57 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: zephyrr

i havent started writing.. not yet.. so i cant guarantee a complete update.. but i'll try putting something up.. latest by 12 or 1..



coollll..will wait
😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Hey people.. its so sweet of you guys to worry bout me.. but seriously.. nothing's wrong.. i am just extremely busy. Armaan- Riddhima have taken a back seat for now.. not thinking bout them much.. just started with my internship.. and well.. also my real life Armaan s in town and needs my time.. lol! so i'll try updating asap.. lets see.. hopefully very very late tonight. but then again i dont want you guys to be disappointed.. so i dont promise.. i'll just sort my life out a little, let things settle down.. till then just bear with the irregularity of the updates.. may not be able to update daily.. sorry.. but i'll try my best at giving early and regular updates.

Till then cheers!! take care..
and Luv ya!!!!



gud luck for internship ...😊

aur ye kya kiya...OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG😲.....wats this...ye raaz kyun khola..ufff..kyunnn....HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW😲....oh no..kya hoga....😆

LOL..okayy..nuff of my filmypana...😆

but today I got to know the RAZZ ..... that from where get such
motivation and inspiration awsummm AR romantic scns .....😉😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: sjain



gud luck for internship ...😊

aur ye kya kiya...OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG😲.....wats this...ye raaz kyun khola..ufff..kyunnn....HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW😲....oh no..kya hoga....😆

LOL..okayy..nuff of my filmypana...😆

but today I got to know the RAZZ ..... that from where get such
motivation and inspiration awsummm AR romantic scns .....😉😳😆

ha ha.. no comments on that one.. lol!!
but no.. Armaan and Riddhima are my only inspiration for this story.. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
oye what is going on in my absence.. Armaan and Riddhima ko chodkar kucch aur hi discussion ho raha hai..😳
waise i might update very very late in the night.. dont stay up.. check in the morning.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey zappy!!!😊

plz plz plz plz..... update today at least!!!!!!! ....😊

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