AR FF -||MY Bride||- |Link to 2nd Thread pg 155| - Page 97

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey maha
as alwyz awesum update👏
OMG!! spk abt rudeness personified
chi...chi...shanky n padma!🤢
and pklzzz take ur own tym
n dnt rush to d wedding!!
cz if u ask me i want this FF to go on n on.....
so i'm luving the pace as well as the story;ine!!

awwww....luv the pre-wedding stuff
AR r soooo cute!!!😳

PLZ UPDATE SOON
n thnx a ton fr d PM😊

P.S:" MY BRIDE" suits the story well

love
-KIN😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Maha
thats a great part.....truly loved it.............i cant believe that shashnk and padma would do something like this..........

coming to rushing the story........dont do it........rushing the story and dragging the story ruins the story line and also the reader loos interest in the story...........

i do think that they should get married soon but dont rush in to end the FF............

thanks for the pm
cont soon
love
nruti

ps loved the new name
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww loved it...............hate shnaky n paddy............ughhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maha ......nice plotting...
every bit showed how much she needed him to be by her side.
And Armaan loves her so dearly ....Specially when he came there outside her house just to sooth her,comfort her ....
New title goes exactly with this story...
I am happy with this pace...

I love how it feels when you hold me in your arms.

I love when you whisper in my ear.

You make me feel charmed.

I feel no fear.
I love how you comfort me when I'm sad.

You brighten my smile every day.

Having you makes me so glad.

When I need you, there's no delay.
Your love brings a glow to my face.

You give me butterflies inside.

You'll never be replaced.

This joy you bring me won't subside.



thanks for pm.
love
ritu
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shashank Padma 😡😡😡😡😡

AR😳😳👏 Muskaan👏

Very Nice update maha😊😊 more trust building up
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Posted: 14 years ago




update

AR scenes




AA scenes are

"Riddhima you should not do such stupid acts! Apologize to Armaan!" Shahank control his angry voice,

Anjali walks ahead, "Anjali beta, you are a guest! Please be a guest! This is personal!" Padma insulted, Anjali nodded and told Muskan, "We will take a leave than aunty…" Anjali spoke, boldly;

"Anjali enough!! That's enough! Seriously!" Armaan stopped her, angrily, hugging Riddhima tightly. "I just Request you two to please…. For Riddhima – For me… stay with her till Marriage! After it, we will arrange an apartment for you both! So you can continue your studies here!" Armaan spoke, "Yes Anjali! For your friend do it!" Atul spoke, finally, who had been trying his level best to cool her pressure, and "I am staying with Riddhima! Hell no, I am afraid to leave her alone here!" Muskan spoke, making her mind! "Par Muskan, Haven't you heard the way they talk!" Anjali protested, "It's not about them Anjali!! Riddhima NEEDs us!" pause "what part of it You don't get it!" Muskan added, "Once she is with Armaan, then we will leave the house!" Muskan spoke again, "Okay…" Anjali understood the circumstance, it was first time – that she had ignored Riddhima's point of view, "I am sorry…" Anjali mumbled and took Riddhima in a hug, pulling her away from Armaan! "Sorry…" Anjali holds her ear; Riddhima chuckled while crying pushed her hands away, "its okay…" Riddhima mumbled and hugged her. "Achaa… Riddhima, Do come at dinner at my home, my dad has invited all of you at dinner! Theek hai!" Armaan ruffled her hair, kissed her cheek "and promise me you won't cry!" He asked, "Promise…" Riddhima whispered,




plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz maha conti soon




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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey maha.

Very nice part. Loved it to the core. I can imagine ridhima sleeping keeping alarm on her chest so that no body can change it. It's so cute ..😊Arman is in so love with her. I hope he always love her like this or more than this. Ridhima has truly found her soul mate and can trust him after Anjali n Muskan. Atul an Anjali confession was cute. Ab bas muskan and Rahul are left. Wish to see a nice and fight full love story between them .😆

God can i kill shanky in this 😡 I just hate both of them. How can be they rude to their own only daughter. Heartless people. Thank god Ridhima got nice people around her else her life would have been hell.
Can't wait to see them got enged now.

Don't rush the story. We all do want them to get mrd soon but not in a rush. This pre mrg love story is superb. This period will help them making their bond strong.

Continue soon... I love the new name too..


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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 part
thanx 4 the pm

p.s: i liked the new name
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maha di, what an update! AR are just so lovely and lovable that they put a smile in my face everytime i read their names together hehee. Anjie and Atul are....... um........ FREAKING CUTE! loved their confession, it was just beautiful, the way atul described his feeling was just awwwwwwwwwwwww! ahahaa Muskaan is just lovable; hope RM get together soon hehe. OMG Ridhimma's parents are heartless always making her cry! but can i just say that ARMAAN is like the cutest most adorable person ever! I love the way he always supports and protects her! LOVED THIS UPDATE TO THE CORE! lol and about the marriage hehee dont worry we can wait!......... but dont make us wait toooo much hehee UPDATE SOOON!
Edited by Kajenrsmecxi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice flow...good going maha

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