SS: Home Coming Epilogue pg 125 Arpil 1

JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#931

that was an awesome ending.....

Maan was a typical overprotective Father....... he was just like Steve Martin in Father of the Bride,.......

and Geet was like Diane Keaton.....

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#932

awesome .... brilliant ... mind blowing ... amazing ... are all understatements ... .. am still in awe

your story telling has such intensity .. that the reader actually lives it ...

this is the effect ur writing have on us ... imagine wat happens to us poor readers when u write such heart wrenching OSs .. like the one u recently wrote 😭

THANKS ALOT FOR GIVING US SUCH MASTERPIECES ... LOVE YOU SOO MUCH 🤗

please keep writing and please keep writing romantic ones with out sad endings ... just like this one and Ek Pal .. 😊 ...

i am a hopeless sucker for happily ever afters ... 😃

love

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago

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ansah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#933

Awwww that was so adorabe....

Jaz now that this has come 2 end..

i am going t miss it terrible

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manisha shibloll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#934

amazing.........................maan is a great father............................daksh, awesome....................

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#935

aww, it was beautiful. i loved how we get a glimpse into roshni's future. thanks for the beautiful story. good luck on your exams and hope to be reading something from you soon.

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#936

awesome story....................
wow.................
the start from Maan entering and knowing Geet carrying his child and the problems and scary nights and days they faced to this epilogue, excellently written...................
fantastic fic................
any other fic u write plz pm me.................

PS: what are ur other fic's links?

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Sona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#937

Jaz,

That was a beautiful story....ur Geet never lost faith in Maan! Pls write soon....

-Sona

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#938

Hey Jaz!!!

I just found this beautiful ss of yours and read it in one go.

I have to say, you left me speechless....completely!

The raw emotions that have been described so well in the story by you left me quite emotional and in fact teary eyed for a large part of the reading time!!

You are such an amazing writer...

it was great to read it and hats off to you for this creation of yours!👏

Please pm me whenevr you write something next and do send me the links of your oheros/ffs/ss.

would love to read them!

Once again...BRILLIANT JOB!⭐️

love

Swati

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