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ansah

@SahSah

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

that was just awesome....totally hooked...

what is it all...why is geet hiding.....

alot of questions...and u can only answer them

with another update...😆

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Nice strt

Liked it

But why all were lieing abt Geet

Plz update soon n add me to ur pm list

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-Urvi-

@-Urvi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Oh my gosh! Love it! I think I have a slight idea of what might have happened, but having read other pieces written by you, I know you are just as unpredictable as the Geet CVs. Please do PM me when you update 😊

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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Nice! I'm thinking she's pregnant... Why else would they hide her away. If there was an accident, why would they be ashamed?

Please pm me when you update. I gotta know what happens!

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hey jaz! Amazin, smooth fantastic update, bt y u stopd at tat point? Plz update nxt part soon

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

what was that..u left it half way..and u want long cooments..ok lets start but conditon i want the next update within 24 hrs not a min more u are geeting..pakka or next time i will take full revenge and write only ok..thats all..and u know me well enough i do what i say..we ahve read enough of ech other by now..hehe

mmm so the SS..what everyone says u have more..this is my first SS i usualyy read ur OS and they were al beautiful and this one toh mind blowing..mmm and suspense..why she couldnt meet now i am gonna cojure up stories the entire night woman..mmm and i know none of them will match..hehe

and maan an army officer..ahhhh i am trying to imagine ...mmm and NT..why yaar i already hate that name u had to bring her in..but chalo i bet this was the only part which had her..

looking forward to the next part eagerly..jaldi update karo..

PS:loong commnet see..

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

^^ yaar...dhamki deh rahi ho? *shocked muh*...and yes...we do know each other well enough...so you have to know with my hectic life withing the next 24hrs is nearly impossible but im trying...main toh kaam pe hoon phir bhi chup chupke likh rahi hoon...will try within 24hrs...if not...then by friday for sure!!! Maneet ki kasam! ha ah

JAZ

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

that was a really good one......now what has happened to Geet that everyone is telling lies about her to Maan n now he's shocked to see her.....Can't wait to know.....do continue soon pls..........

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

sounds very interesting. can't wait to read what happens next. could you please add me to your PM list? thanks.

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Very very different to the typical stories written on Maan and Geet. I'm looking forward to your update and how you'll develop the story to show the relationship that they both share.

Lovely OS! :) Can't wait for the next update! :)

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