FF: Maan&Geet: 120, Chandini's Rooftop - CLOSED - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Haha I liked the beginning part the majnu lover who always cones to the tea stall on the 20th for a girl but also because he made a pact with mamchanda hmm I wonder who the youth was that part seemed significant I think they will play a role later on but seriously I enjoyed that portion and awe back to maaneet geet cursing herself for not westing her veil but she came to the conclusion that it didn't hide the geet in her if she has no veil but the fear that it showed more of chandni who pleasure man and their needs but she fir the first time has fallen for a man and has the desire if maan fulfilling her needs but the fact she can't have him pierces her and awe maan in pain but he is finding solace by holding geets hand during the pain but geet has realised that it's his time to go where she is finding pain but will have to do anyways great update di and can't wait to read more 😊


Hey Shamima...so you are early this time. Thanks so much for your comment.

Yes indeed the majnu as you call him...does play an important part. He is majnu or not...we will figure that out later, for now he has some good intentions as well and that is more crucial.

"she came to the conclusion that it didn't hide the geet in her if she has no veil but the fear that it showed more of chandni who pleasure man and their needs"
Not sure about this part you wrote.
Her veil was more for her than for him and I hope that makes sense. To keep her rooted to her reality. Infact she only wanted to him to see her as Chandini and not as Geet. Does that clarify?

Hasini


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Posted: 14 years ago
Who is the one at tea wala shop waiting for Geet
Third person in their stry kyun
Maan atlast Saw Geet but seeing her got him lots if trouble also
Bechara he is in pain
Np plz he cant go lik this but he has to also
Lets c wen they meet agn
Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally!!!!...... After such a long tym good to see u back........ Very well written part...... Whose dat young guy on dat Tea shop nd is he waitting 4r geet or pinky?????? So maan saw her face now wat geet's inner demon she wants him!!! Always loves d way u poitray geet's dilemma, her fears ,confusions, insecurities...... Its always seems logical...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update as always..

So Geet has a secret admirer?.. What are his intentions?.

I am sad Maan will be leaving from Chandini's roof top. We all nkow that Geet has developed feelings for him?.. Is he also in the same boat?..

Hasini, please update sooon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update.................
but who is the young man any new character.......is that gal geet..............
oh is he going to leave rooftop if he does how will they get to know each other..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just finishedreading what you've written so far and i felt the need to respind to your amazing idea!! Really everything is nicely penned and executed!! I hope you'll continue soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
dont know...but guessing....the girl in veil as pinky...n the man as adi...
waiting to know their identities....n the reason y manchanda called him....
geet is afraid that maan saw her face...😔...i hope all her fears would go in the next part...
n also maan's condition gets improved...otherwise sasha might start suspecting....
waiting for the next part....of both NY TIMES n ROOFTOP...
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Posted: 14 years ago

who is the guy in tea stall???

nd plz don't seperate them!!!

well executed nd phrased!!!

wonderful one................loved it!!!

gr8 update!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
perfect update......👍🏼but not a perfect timing though.......😉 😆😆 u r late.........😒please give us an early UD next time if u can........😃 cos we r really really waiting for it for a loooooooooooooong tym.......thanks for d pm.........🤗😊 ⭐️ lub u....🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini!
kudos to ur update! i luv the character development n cannot wait to explore more abt wut is really goin on thru Maan's mind the plot is gettin thicker! plzzz update soon!!

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