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Posted: 14 years ago
okies...i so sense troubles......
let's see what we have in store
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha..... this is too exciting..
So finally, the shashank-thalia secret is going to come out, i guess.
And Shiv is gonna be really really angry on Gauri.. u better update soon... pls don't torture ur poor readers like the last time akira's aphrodisiac made an entry into the story...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

🤣🤣🤣


Reminds me of the saying..."Haath ko aaya, muh na laga"!!


Translate please! Main nahi samjsti hoon... (pardon spelling and grammatical errors)😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tammie: Somewhat similar to Many a slip between the cup and the lip...

Literal translation- "It was in your hand and yet it could not reach your mouth"
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Posted: 14 years ago
@bluangel13 very insightful post, made me think.......... after Gauri drank the potion it also made her very vulnerable because she didn't have any inhibitions. Don't we want to either be alone or be with one who makes us feel safe and protected when vulnerable? I don't think Gauri's plan is as simple as it was presented initially i.e. get Thalia to seduce Shiv or leave him alone. Don't forget she is a tad complicated so maybe there is more to the plan than what we currently see.

On a totally unrelated note, I listen to a lot of NPR (National Public Radio, to my non-American friends its a news based radio station). One of the pieces this morning was on book clubs and the book she was recommending for the book club. I've always wanted to be part of a book club but either never had the the time or found like minded individuals. Anyway, I just realized I am part of a book club just not the traditional kind. I absolutely adore the discussion on the updates on not only on this thread but also on some of the other FF's I follow on IF. So, thank you Devi for writing wonderful stories all the crazy Devi FF addicts for making life a little more fun!

And on that meandering note, Happy New Year!
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Posted: 14 years ago

hee hee ...

Looks like Shaan is in for the night of his life!!
... and so is Gauri .. although the experience might not be the same as Shaan's!!
Hope you are having a wonderful start to 2011!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 64: What's Love Got to do with it? – Part 5

"Strumming my pain with his fingers…

Singing my life with his words…

Killing me softly with his song…

Killing me softly… with his song…."

The song – the Fugees version – was running a loop in her head and it wouldn't stop. Not that it was necessarily bad; there were worse things in the world that having Lauren Hill's voice stuck in your head on repeat. But the audio track in the background was accompanied by images that were driving her mad.

She was walking down a long hallway, shrugging aside the shimmery curtains that were now almost like a white hazy film in her eyes that she couldn't blink away no matter how much she tried…. She was blindfolded next… caught from behind… someone was washing the wounds on her legs… she was sobbing… she wanted to jump out of her window… she was poised on the window-sill to do just that… someone was carrying her over his shoulder… she was yelling again… and then he kissed her… she finally jumped out of the window…. Only to find that someone flew up from down below to catch her and bring her in back through her window…

"Aaaarrrrghhhhhhhh" she screamed then covering her ears and shutting her eyes and Shiv rushed back into the room.

"Don't worry. He's on his way."

She opened her eyes quickly when she heard his voice.

"Shiv, what are you still doing here? You have to leave!" she said now, looking at him in surprise.

"What? Are you crazy? Look at your state. I am not leaving you until Shaan gets here. I don't think he is too happy that you are with me here though."

"Of course he's not happy. I am determined to ruin his precious lover's happiness with her husband. I mean, honestly, where does he get off playing such a martyr? Marriage is meaningless if there is no love in it. It doesn't matter how many people witnessed and blessed the ceremony!"

Shiv grew still as he heard Thalia's seemingly fragmented ramblings. Something about it was vaguely familiar…

"Come again?" He asked then.

"Huh?" she looked up as if she had forgotten that he was in the room with her.

"What did you say just now?"

She rubbed her eyes to clear out the confusion from all the sensations overwhelming her and stood up from where she was sitting on the floor and walked over to him.

"Shiv, listen to me." She said as she grabbed onto his collar. "Don't you believe that a marriage should have love as its foundation?"

He looked down at her face curiously as he placed his hands over hers on his collar to gently loosen them.

"Why are you asking me that?"

"Do you love Gauri?"

He was taken aback by the question. Whatever he may feel for his wife or anyone else for that matter, was his own issue… why would anyone else pry into that?

In the moments that elapsed in his silence, she spoke again.

"See… when a man is in love, he does not hesitate to answer. If he hesitates, then the woman deserves better. She deserves to be loved fully, not in the half-assed fashion that men are so keen on now-a-days."

He looked at her now, his ire rising, but she continued without noticing.

"And believe me, I am not saying this because I have any love lost for your wife! I am speaking for women in general. She deserves to be loved fully, not just to have a man who makes her body feel good."

"What the hell is…" he started, but she did not let him finish yet again.

"Shashank loves her, Shiv. And his love is pure. I may not like the man, but I know at least that much. There were extremely difficult circumstances that prevented him from showing up for their wedding. You could even say that it was a matter of life and death." Her eyes swept down as she said the last part. After a moment she continued, "But he's back now. And knowing him, he will never encroach between you or even dream of breaking up your marriage. And so I am asking you as a neutral party in all this, Shiv. Do you love your wife? Does she love you? Because if the answers to both those questions are no, then don't you think that love deserves a chance? For both of you?"

His mind reeled as he tried to absorb all the information that she threw at him. She knew Shashank? Since when? And she wanted Shashank and Gauri to get back together? That was the whole reason behind this extended drama? That was the whole reason that she decided to make a public spectacle of herself? And suddenly another thought crossed through his head. Gauri had given Thalia the aphrodisiac to seduce him. Does that mean that Gauri….? He paused to take a deep breath before he finished that thought. He had already told Gauri that he wouldn't give her a divorce. And now Gauri was in league with Thalia so as to brand him an adulterer. So that means… he felt a numbness spread over his limbs… she wanted out of this marriage. She wanted Shashank back…

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Posted: 14 years ago
nooo
i wonder where this is gonna go!!!
please update soon if u have the time


HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
omgggg...shiv can be so stupid sometimes...i am hoping u fix this soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my that came out of nowhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i had just checked this thread - saw nothing and then went onto fb for a split second and come back and what do i see - yes an update from you
oh my my
wait let me read and then i'll come back
WHAT???????????????????????????????????????????😲😲😲😲😲😲
This can NOT be the same shiv that I had slowly began to fancy?!?!?!!??!?!!
NO WAY - now I HATE thalia for being so stupid and blurting out random crap that is making it wahey worser for Shiv n Gauri!!!!!!!!!!
and I'm hating Gauri now for even thinking of having this stupid idea and then getting it implemented!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh nooooo
now whatever happens between shaan/shashank and thalia will not do me any good cos its disrupted shiv n gauri..............unles of course thalia realises what an indiot she has been and then vows to never let go of her Shaan and then confronts Gauri(still thinking gauri wants to get back with her shaan) and tell her that she'll never let her get shashank back and then gauri answers back saying she never wanted her stinking shaan and she just wanted thalia to keep her hands off of her shiv - her hubby and then shiv hears this and gets the thrills and then we allll gooooooo gooey and into la la land!!!!!
heheheheheheh
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago

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