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Cutee999 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
thanks for pm
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. geet is so confused, but maan understand her very well. now lets see how she cooks..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazingggggggggggggggggggg!!!
Loveeee it.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago





so ready for


updates

part 73

please shift to my place yanha aacha nahi hain
.
she snapped in anger kaha na shaadi se pehle nahi.

maan raises his voice - tum humesha itna zid kyun karti ho? zid tum se nahi kare gi to kis se kare gi maan but i guess ajjkal kuch zyada hi ziddi ho gaye hi apni geet.

maan gets angry & walks away. he gets even more pissed off looking at the guys & girls hanging around not so decently dressed. he sits in his car & makes few calls he rubs his temple & realizes she was hungry. he closes his eyes to have lost his temper he hits his forehead with his closed fist feeling misserable that he is not able to take care of her well enough. he gets food for her. he goes inside the room to see she was already sleeping with trail of tear in her cheek. he kissed them feeling sorry khana tho kha liya hota. how could I be so careless towards her. he arranges her scattered stuffs. he leaves the food packet on the table next to her bed & turns off the light & leaves.

next Monday maan walks in at 9.00am sharp to her room. she was in her pink satin night short & spageti top brushing her teeth she jumped up & blabbers with form in her mouth - aise koi ladkhi ke kamre main gussatha hain kya maan geet k kamre me

I can't wear this
maan looking at her wet looks naughtily - tum khud pehen thi ho yah main pehnavoon

maan signed some papers & told her - sign karo
she looked at him - lekin aap meri baat tho suno
maan pointed at the papers with his eyes - sign karo geet phir baat karenge
she signed the papers murmuring - maan aap kuch bhi karlo main shaadi se pehle aapke saath nahi rahonghi
maan leaned close to her & softly whispered - shaadi ke baad tho rahoghi na




geet started to cry - mama inho ne mujhse zabradasti shaadi kari hain
sach main mujhe nahi pata tha, he cheated me


pressing her further on the couch. naraz kyun ho rahi ho
geet - u cheated me, u didn't tell me we are getting married
maan softly caressed her face moving her strands behind, she almost melted into
his arms, he kissed her very softly on the forehead - kahta tho, tum kabhi nahi maanti
geet snaps back - kabhi nahi maanti
maan - aab tum mano yah nahi mano we are married
she turns him down in one jerk & sits over him - main yeh shaadi nahi manti
shaadi aise thodi hoti hain.

he pins her down in oner jerk & kisses her on her cheeks - jaanta hoon
she had tears in her eyes - phir yeh sab kya hain
he cups her face lovingly - it just for you. tum mera saat raho uske liya
I didn't want you to say there in that stupid place.
geet - i imagined everything so differently in life, aapne sab kuch ulat pulat kardiya I wanted every thing so magical in my life, pyar, shaadi.. but you have turned every thing upside down kuch bhi magical nahi hain.. kuch bhi khas nahi I hate you ..i hate you... 😭






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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey what a lovely update!
ENjoyed reading it.
Maan is such a sweetheart!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update.. Pls update khamoshi too.. Have been waiting for so long..
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Posted: 14 years ago
OOO..the sweet housewife eh? 😆 I'm liking this new Geet! Hope her and maan get back to their usual selves. The arjun guy better not be intrusive! 🤔

Awesome update Di!

🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update
aur geet nay yaha bhi geetrekha bna li 🤣
cool
cont soon
aur khamoshi kb update hoge
love
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago




part 74

I wanted every thing so magical in my life, pyar, shaadi.. but you have turned every thing
upside down kuch bhi magical nahi hain.. kuch bhi khas nahi I hate you ..i hate you


U Love Him
geet - main yeh shaadi ko nahi maanthi
shaadi din bhi koi meeting main jata hain kya?

wah aacha wedding day hain, pehle mar khavo, aab room clean karo pata nahi yah Maan Singh Khurana se kya kya karvayeghi


he goes back into the room - geet yah peelo
geet - mujhe nahi peena
maan - tumne subha se kuch nahi khaya
geet - i hate you
maan - aacha hot chocolate pee ke hate kar lena
she slowly slips her hand from the spread & takes the drink the hot chocolate.

abhi bhi naraz ho. she noded her head. he pushed her hair behind
and kissed her head. I don't like you. you cheated me. main yah shaadi bhi nahi manti
maan - mat maano bus.
geet - aap bhi nahi manoghe
maan - teehk hain
geet - aur kisi ko nahi batana hain
maan - ok
geet - but I still hate you but maan

geet - mujhe bhook laghi hain
maan snapped in furstration - mujhe kyun nahi khaa ke leti
geet innocently - shaadi ki din non-veg nahi khaten

geet - shaadi ke din koi office jata hain kya?
maan - lekin tum tho yah shaadi nahi manti na
geet - haa...aan nahi manti ..lekin main upset thi tho aapko mujhe manana chahiya
agar aap mujhe chodke javoge tho main aise hi karongi

geet u know u r a

muskan u r truly a and






Edited by cute-aly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update... loved geet cuddling up...
update was great as usual
loved it muskaan
do continue soon

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