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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

lovely OS dear..................
keep it up...............but dont 4get ur ffs.............😉

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

loved the ArSh version! please do write more on them!

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Parneet

@ParneetS

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

hey..awesome os..:)
luved th AR version...u may have to edit Shilpa's name with Ridz in there... but rest is soo cute.;) <3
thanx for the pm n do write sum more..:)
tc ;)
Preet <3

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

awww that was so cute anu :)

but get well soon yaar

i miss your other ffs :)

Love,

Kriya <33

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cornelia

@cornelia

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Just checked my inbox and came to your mail. It was the title that interested me and drew me to check your ff right at the moment. First date and an os, was curious as to how this is going to be a short story. Honestly, at first when I read that the main characters were already dating, I was dissapointed for I thought there was no plot and it's going to be another "happy story" with no basic story line.

However when I kept reading the story, the way you expressed their love is very intense and nice. You made me as a reader really go into the characters and feel them. The use of those touching quotes made me smile. Overall, nice writing and descriptiion of feelings. I could imagine the story as if it was a real movie playing on. Probably a five minutes movie. ok, I'll stop now. ps. thank u for the pm.

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Wow amazing os Anu

just superb.

Like the Arsh verson 2

But i luv AR N RTMC versions.

now that really is called a romantic date, a perfect date.

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

hey anu...it ws very cute..i loved how u took care to give every detail info abt the date..i am planning to hire u as a date organiser..wt say?😆

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Swathi

@swahas

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

wow!!!
it was awesome, anu... 👏
anybody would dream for a date like this.. :) 😍

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

sorry guys....many of u mentioned abt the mistake i made...

wid shilpa n ridhimaa n AR version....so i corrected it......thnx for telling...

wanna read again..........

n thnx alot for ur lovely comments....

will reply to them soon.............

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

wow!!!! that was sooo nice and such a beautiful OS....there date was so romantic and i was so much lost in the OS that i read all the 3 versions though they were same.....😛 and loved that cannibalist part that was damn funny and ya do pm me

thank you

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