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working on it...so hopefully updating it in some tym..


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Hi all...back with another part...know might many of u forgot the story...so here is the link of the last 2 parts...refresh it...


Part 1

Part 2




MISTAKE...




Last Part [installment 1]



Recap: Armaan in pain...no one liking him..all against him..he made some mistake...so that Ridz left him within the 8 months of their marriage..Atul n Anjali trying to support him..but he is so much into his guilt...Ridhimaa living in Lonavla Orphanage...no one knows why..but she misses Armaan...n though he made a mistake but still loves him...



Armaan Mallik the spoiled son of the biggest industrialist in Mumbai. Drinking, Smoking, Gals, Partying all were his hobbies and he was famous among his college mates and his company of friends were other spoilt brats and that was the main thing which always make Ananya worried. He is indulging himself more and more into bad habits sleeping around with gals and every other bad habit, though after all these bad habits his studies never get effected he was the topper of his class the only student who is both admired and disliked by his professors.

Finally after finishing the studies in good grades and joining the business and after 2-3 years of success Mallik family thought to get Armaan married which came like a hard blow to Armaan as he was not at all ready for this. Heck he didn't even gave a thought to it, he was so busy in his so called social life n gals and other activities that he never tought of having any responsibility on his shoulders and man marriage is the big issue.

It was all done for Armaan's benefit so that he leave all his bad habits and become a responsible person, but it all turned out to be a big hurdle in Armaan's way he was not all ready to let go all his habits n turn into a complete new person, who is responsible,caring n all that stupid stuff. But then to he has to get married for his family sake but he was thinking on the lines of telling her in the very first meeting n showing her what kind of person he is.

Finally the day came and Armaan n Ridhimaa met, though Armaan tried his best that she denies this marriage, but one thing he didn't know was that Ridhimaa was deeply in love with him. They were in the same college and Ridhimaa was two years junior from him, she always admire n adore him from far, always trying to get as much information as she can, he was her first crush n certainly she never knew when she fell in love with him and forbidding the thoughts of all his bad habits she said Yes for the marriage and Armaan n Ridhimaa got married.

But things didn't turned out to be as thought, Armaan turned as a wild beast for her, on the very first nite he told her to keep distance from him and let him have his own space he is doing a big favor by letting her be in his room and letting her share it. Ridhimaa was disheartened hearing it but she didn't lose hope and thought of beginning a relation of friendship with him.

Nevertheless, soon Armaan n Ridhimaa became friends and Armaan started getting dependent on her, with her being his guiding angel, his best friend, his comforter, his everything and the love started to bloom b/w them but Armaan was still unaware of his feelings. He started to abscond all his bad habits and his family was really happy seeing the change in him, they were truly living the beautiful life, Armaan became so possessive about her that he can't see someone eyeing her or else he is gone.


Finally came the day...that changed everything in Armaan Rihimaa's life...leaving them broken...


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There was a success party in Mallik Mansion for theproject the just finished and it was a huge success, all were invited in the party even Armaan's college too n among them was Vivek his best buddy was also there whose eyes were fixed on none other than Ridhimaa who was looking really beautiful wearing turquoise net saree looking really beautiful it was showing off her curves and Armaan's eyes were also on her he just want to grab her and keep with himself shield her as he knew many hungry eyes must be eyeing her. But he was proud on the fact that she was his only his, he was talking to his collegues when he saw Vivek and Ridhimaa talking to each other and Ridz laughing on some joke cracked by Vivek. He got really angry and instead of pulling Ridhimaa away or anything else he just left from there taking a bottle of alcohol in his hand. Ridhimaa also get rid of Vivek as she saw him making moves towards her, but what he don't know is she is only Armaan's her heart, mind and body belongs to him only.

After the party finished Ridhimaa looked out for Armaan but he was nowhere to be seen so she went to her room after giving instructions to the house helpers to clean the mess tomorrow and should go and take rest as its quite late and they must be tired.

She moved towards their room hoping to see Armaan there but he was not and she got upset seeing it. She settled down in front of the dressing table and started taking out her jewellery and that's how Armaan found her. Her bare back towards him and he can see her fair skin and his hands itched to touch her, he staggered and moved towards her.

Ridhimaa looked in the mirror and saw him coming towards her and got up quickly to get some answers, how can he left her in between the party and just vanish.

Ridhimaa: Armaan where were you? I was looking for you quite sometime.

Armaan: Why?

Ridz: what do you mean why? And are you drunk Armaan you promised me you'll stop drinking and just one day I was busy and you broke your promise. [hurt voice]

Armaan: oh shut up okay don't show me this fake interest for my well being alrite. I know you are no less than other girls who just want a rich handsome husband who don't stop them from doing anything and they can do whatever they want to. [not knowing what he was saying, cant even stand properly]

Ridz: what the hell are you saying Armaan you are comparing me with those bitches, someone like you usually sleep with.

Armaan: oh I sleep around and what you were trying to do today, you were making moves towards my friend that Vivek only the reason that I haven't slept with you till now rite [he shouted]

Ridz: shut up Armaan just shut up [crying] how you can say such thing I know you don't love me and we haven't shared the relationship as man and wife but that doesn't mean I'm a s**t who is always trying to be with one man or the other. You really disgusted me today Armaan you made me feel so cheap, I loathe you Armaan Mallik. [Hiccupping]

Armaan: stop these fake tears of yours it won't work on me now, and today I'll give you what you want. [advancing towards her]

Ridz: [moving back] no Armaan stop all this non sense okay you cant just force yourself on me.

Armaan: I can very much do it and no one can stop me not even you, when you were standing there in front of Vivek weren't you feeling ashamed, I'm sure you would be feeling taking out your there only rite. [as he said that he received a tight slap from Ridhimaa who has cupped her face and crying badly]

Ridz: I hate you Armaan, I hate you so much [the sound of the slap was still in his ears and that didn't stopped him but made him more angrier]

Armaan took hold of Ridhimaa's arms and pushed her against the wall and looked dangerously in her eyes and it scared her a lot.

Armaan: today I'll make you mine so that you won't be able to look around for any one other. You are only mine you got that.

Ridz was so scared to say even a thing but did try to protest and get out of his grip. Armaan took hold of her face tears were glistening her cheeks he cupped her face and kissed her on her lips and it was not a loving kiss but the one to hurt her. She can see an animal taking place of the Armaan she knew and she is not able to stop him to.

He kissed her hard and bites making blood come out of her lips, he tugged at her sari and her pallu fell down on the floor. Ridz was trying hard to get free from his hold asking him again and again not to do it but he was not in control now, he needs her and that was making him more dangerous.

He was touching every part of her body which made her feel loathe and like some rag doll which can be used like the way they want. He left her lips and started planting kisses on her neck, while her hands were on his chest pushing him away from her but he took hold of her hands and pressed them making her moan in pain. He left several bites on her neck to and then holding her tight from her wrists moved around and pushed her on the bed hard, making her hit on the back hard.

He removed his shirt and was about to pounce on her when she shifted and fell from the bed making him madder she clutched her sari and was about to ran when he got up and held her from the blouse which ripped leaving her back completely bare to him. This awoke the demons and he pulled her towards him not caring about her protests and pleads of not to do it.

Ridz: Armaan please don't do such thing which will make you regret later.

Armaan: this wont make me regret at all.

With this he kissed her again holding her hands tight and pushed her on the bed, he moved her both hands above her head and hold them with one hand while her other hand moved on her body from her neck, chest, waist and then her legs. He pulled her sari and started moving his hands on her legs while she was throwing her legs and trying to push him away while he was kissing her more fiercely.

She was crying badly tears' streaming down but as Armaan was drunk and furious it didn't affect him at all. He removed his hands from her legs and moved towards her chest and tried to tuck on her blouse but Ridhimaa somehow took out her hands out from his grip and rolled on her stomach which made her bare back facing him. He left her blouse and started planting kisses on her back.

Where as Ridhimaa was just laying there not moving an inch or protesting, for her everything just finished the person she loved the most in the world had broken her badly and broke all her dreams of living together. She just cant see any more dreams as they are brutually shattered, the person was non other than her own husband her love.

Armaan didn't felt any moments from her side, he got calmed a bit and than saw her laying with face down and left her moved towards her side and pulling her close put duvet on them and hugging her slept. But sleep was far away from Ridhimaa's eyes she was awake she just cant believe about what happened few minutes back. The person she loved the most her husband was just about to rape her and if he did force himself on her she wouldn't have been able to tell anyone about his brutality too.

She made up her mind she looked in his direction and saw him sleeping without even a trance of guilt or discomfortness probably would have been drunk a lot, that he didn't even know what has happened. She packed her things and caressing his hairs one last time left early morning with a determination of never coming back.

Morning when Armaan got up his head was pounding badly, he looked around for Ridhimaa but she was no where to be seen. He saw her jewellery and her broken bangles on the bed, the sheets were completely messed up he was not able to understand and thought

Armaan: have we consummated our marriage last night. Did we became one, if so I really want to see her red blushing shy face but gosh why cant I remember anything.

He moved down in search of Ridhimaa when he saw his mother and bhabhi working in the kitchen other family members were not down yet and he went asked for Ridhimaa. When they told she is not here yet and we didn't saw her from morning. It made him wonder where she is, he looked around but didn't found her in the whole mansion. He again asked for her but no one knows about it and they again started searching for her. Armaan moved towards his room and saw a piece of paper he moved towards it and started reading.

Armaan I want to tell you something today, I had always loved you not from the time we got married but before that. If you remember one girl in college was always after you coming in your way through one reason or another, it was me. I was always in love with you and when we got married I was more than happy but you said that you want to live you life your way. It broke me but I know you need time and I was determined to make you fall in love with me which I don't know I succedded or not.

Last night when you said I'm one of those who look for a rich man for marriage so even if they have relationship with other men it wont be a problem. But I want to tell you Armaan I had always loved you and my heart, mind, soul and body were always yours. I would have never let any other man touch me, but after last night I'm left with nothing I abhore my body, I abhore my heart and mind that loved you so much. I never knew that you don't even have this much faith on me, I'm sorry I cant stay with a man who doesn't even have faith in his wife. You broke me badly so therefore, im leaving the house and the love I had for you is now replaced with hate only. You broke my dreams brutually so this is the end of this relationship. Humara saath bas yahin tak ka tha, ab shayad kabhi is dil mein phir se muhabbat na ho ab sahayad yeh dil kabhi na dharke.

Jo kabhi aapki thi,

Ridhimaa.


Armaan was completely shattered reading the letter, it slipped from his hands and tears started running down his cheeks. He cant believe he is the reason that she left, he loved her and he is the one who drived her far from the love she felt for him. How can he do this, he is the most horrible man on this earth, he remembered how he behaved with her and tried to force himself on her. He fell down on his knees and holding his head started crying badly.

End of flashback'

Armaan trance broke hearing the sound of the horn, tears were running down his cheeks and he was close to Lonavala Orphanage where he thought Ridhimaa could be as she always there. Hearing the sound he focused back on road and saw a truck advancing towards him, he tried to applied brakes but seems the truck has it break failed or either the driver is drunk and driving. Armaan applied brakes and moved the steering wheel in other direction to minimize the chances of a major accident. But seems luck was not on his side the truck hit the car from the side and the car turned around and hit the giant tree.

The car got badly crashed Armaan head hit the wheel and blood started oozing from the wound the glass of the front wind screen broke and fell on Armaan, the windows rattled and broke Armaan's right arm got bruised with it and left the cut on his arm his leg also hit with the dashboard. Armaan felt pain in his head and all over the body, he felt dizzy the things were moving around in circle then everything went black and he became unconscious of his surroundings.

The truck driver didn't wait and just left from there no one was around on the deserted road to help Armaan.

Lonavla Orphanage

Ridhimaa was busy with her work in the back yard of the orphanage and even the kids were playing around when they heard the big bang sound, all got frightened hearing it. Someone shouted 'accident' the kids were rushed into the house as the helpers don't want them to see any blood and get more scared. Ridhimaa along with some male helpers rushed out to see if someone needs help though bua asked her not to go but she didn't listened to her.

Since morning she was having very mix feelings, happy plus sad her heart was telling her that something bad is about to happen but what she don't know. She rushed out and saw a car badly crashed and hit the tree and no one was around to help.

Male helper 1: arey bhagwan ji, hey tu bohat bura accident hua hai. Na jane jo chala rahe thae jeete bhi hongae ke nahin.

MH 2: mein ne ek truck ko jate dekha, shayad usi se accident hua hai.

MH 3: bhagawn job hi hai uski raksha karna.

Ridz: bhaiyaa aap log yahan reh kar baatein hi na karein na, chaliye dekhte hai shayad unko humari zaroorat ho.

MH1: haan batiya chalo.

As the reached near the driver seat the saw some young male was driving the car, Ridhimaa went near the person and saw his head on the wheel and he was unconscious. One of the male helper opened the door and as he moved the head of the person up and kept on the seat, Ridhimaa was beyond shocked seeing Armaan she got stilled and her face turned white he was bleeding badly many wounds all around his face and body.

Ridz: bhaiyaa jaldi se ambulance ko bulayae [she went near Armaan and tapping on his cheeks] Armaan, Armaan [she had tears in her eyes seeing him like this]

Soon the ambulance arrived and Armaan was rushed to the hospital, doctors took him to the OT and Ridhimaa was there all the time with him waiting outside for any news. Finally the doctor came out which seems like a life time and informed her, that Armaan is fine and got few bruises and cuts which will take few days to recover. He is unconscious now and she can meet him once shifted to the private room.

Ridhimaa first thought to call at Mallik Mansion and inform them about his accident but thinking about that they'll get her address and probably would convince her to come back she didn't made any call and thought to ask Armaan to do it. She went inside the room and saw many wires attached to Armaan's body and were monitoring him; one blood bottle is also attached as he lost a lot of blood. The main gash was on his which will take more time to recover where as the cut because of glass on his arm was stitched and leg got bit strained. Well nothing to worry he was fine and better and would get conscious in some time.

Ridhimaa looked at his face, it was pale and weak he is not the Armaan she knows. He was much healthier than this Armaan he has lost so much wait and looks so thin. She looked at the chunri which was kept on the side table, nurse gave she told it was wrapped around his arm and they took out while cleaning his wounds. Tears came out of his eyes he keeps her chunri with him to feel her, but she reminded herself what he did with her and wronged her. She came out of her thoughts and looked at Armaan who was moaning in paining, she pushed the button of the IV and let the painkiller relized in his blood so that he don't feel pain and sleep for some more time.

Next morning Armaan open his eyes he was still feeling dizzy and not sure where he was, he cant recognized his surrounding. He looked around white walls machines and it struck him he met with an accident, he looked around once again when he saw his angel sleeping keeping her head on his bed near his shoulder. He kept looking at her and adorning her, tears flow down his cheeks but he was less bothered he was so happy to see his angel, his love, his wife infront of his eyes. He tried to touch her to confirm whether it's a dream or reality but than pulled it back not sure what if she vanished.

Ridhimaa opened her eyes and looked up to see the grayish blue eyes looking in her direction but when she got up he averted his eyes from her. She got conscious of herself and covered her body properly, this act of her was not gone unnoticed by Armaan and his heart pricked seeing this gesture. Seems someone has cut his heart with the knife, he felt so hurt and tears ran down by his cheeks. Ridhimaa mistook his tears of guilt as tears of pain.

Ridz: kya hua Armaan, are you alright kahin pain tu nahi ho raha. [Hearing her more tears fell down his eyes but he composed himself]

Armaan: no im fine thank you [he completed and didn't said anything and not even looked at her again as he don't want to make her feel conscious and she also didn't said anything, there was an awkward silence between them both not saying a word. After sometime]

Ridz: woh mein ne ghar par call kar ke kisi ko aapke accident ka nahin bataya so if u call them. [Consciously]

Armaan: no need of that. [ignoring]

Ridz: why so they must beworried. [shocked hearing his reply and with bit irritation now]

Armaan: well they don't need me anymore in their life and don't worry they wont be worried about me.

Ridz: any why so, I know you don't care about other feelings but they surely do.

Armaan: but what I did 2 months back after that I'm no more a part of that family. Did u get that? [shouting and it strained his voice and he felt pain shoot in his body and immediately closed his eyes]

Ridhimaa was completely shocked hearing the information he gave, the person who was adored by everyone in the family, the life of the family is no more needed. Aren't they worried that he is away from his house met an accident, what happened that changed everything. She was still in her thoughts when a nurse came inside to give medicines to Armaan but he was asleep may be he has stressed himself a lot and is tired. Ridhimaa went to change her clothes and also to get something for Armaan. She told bua about what all happened and the patient is fine she didn't tell its Armaan.

Armaan opened his eyes and looked around when saw Ridhimaa entering the room she looked so fragile and pale he can see her chubby cheeks were not there any more she got dark circle and her color has also darken she is not same how she use to be, she enter with some food in her hand, he so want to eat something made by her, his eyes filled with love but upon seeing her taking her duppata properly he averted his eyes once again. Ridhimaa made him eat some light food and gave him medicines informing that he would be fine in few days.

Armaan: Ridhimaa tum jao rest kar lo im fine.

Ridz: I know it but im staying here do you have any problem with that. [Armaan nodded in NO]

Ridz: Armaan tum ne ghar par kyun kuch nahin bataya, kya hua tha. Are they angry on you bolo Armaan?

Armaan: who actually [he went in flashback]

Reading the letter Armaan fell on his knees and started crying badly the family members also came there and were shocked seeing Armaan like this. They tried to hold him but he was not stopping, Ananya saw a paper lying near him and read it. After reading it she was shocked Anjali and soon everyone read it, they were shocked that Ridhimaa left the home.

Ananya: Armaan kya kiya tum ne.

Anjali: Armaan bolo kya kiya tumne meri behan ke saath who kyun ghar chor kar chali gaye.

Armaan: [looking up] bhabhi meine bohat bura kiya uske saath.

Ananya: Armaan kya kiya hai tumne jo who is tarah chali gaye bina kise ko bataye Armaan mein kuch poch rahe hoon tumse [shaking him] Bolo Armaan bolo.

Armaan: I tried to force my self on her, I tried to rape her. [he shouted] mein itna drunk tha mujhe kuch samajh nahin aya mein ne kya kiya.

The sound of a slap echoed in the room not once but twice and Armaan fell on his knees once again crying, Ananya and Shashank [Ridz dad] both slapped him and after that left the room. After that they distant themselves from Armaan not caring much about him whereas Anjali didn't side lined him as she loves him a lot.

Flashback end


Ridz has tears in his eyes hearing him but didn't say anything, and gave him medicine so that he could sleep for some more time. He tells her or not she can see through his facial expressions that he is in pain.

Armaan: Ridhimaa tum please mere saath ghar chalo gi.

Ridz: [shocked hearing this from him] Nahi Armaan mein a buss ghar mein kabhi nahin jaon gi.

Armaan: kyun nahin Ridhimaa please chalo na sab tumhare liye wait kar rahe hain.

Ridz: Kyun jaon mein wahan Armaan kaun hai mera apna jiske liye mein us ghar mein jaon jisse rishta joda tha aur jiske karaan sab se rishta tha mera ja who hi nahin raha.

Armaan: plzz Ridhimaa mein ne sabse wada kiya hai ke tumhein ghar le kar hi lautoon ga. [voice getting lower and lower as the medicine started showing its affect]

Ridz: nahin Armaan kabhi nahin tum bhool jao ke Ridhimaa naam bhi tha kabhi tumhari zindagi mein aur ab tu mein kabhi nahin jaon gi us ghar jisse itni buri yaddein juri hoon meri [crying and looking at Armaan] I hate you Armaan Mallik I loathe you.

Armaan: but I love you [Ridz got shocked hearing it but when she looked towards Armaan to get it confirm he was asleep]

Days passed and finally Armaan's injuries recovered no one called from home to check upon him and when Anjali did Armaan didn't told her about his accident. When Ridhimaa asked him the reason for not telling to his family and even Anjali about it, he told her that he don't want Anjali to get worried about him in this condition. Upon seeing Ridhimaa getting worried that something happened to Anjali he told her she is pregnant and he doesn't want her to get stressed.

All these days Armaan kept on requesting her to come back to home, but she was not ready for it. He requested her if not for him than atleast do it for the family his and hers. He won't force her to be in a relationship with him or share a room too if she don't want to. She can live in a separate room but he wants her to be back with him for the family. [Armaan's heart pierced saying all this to her but he knows she will never be able to trust him again.]

Reluctantly Ridhimaa agreed and went back to Mallik Mansion with him, he left her on the main door and after that she didn't saw him. Family members were so happy seeing her back and pampered her a lot. All her wishes were being fulfilled, she was given a separate room and she was staying there. Though in front of all she is happy and smiling but from inside she was dieing.

Ridhimaa was sitting in her room and thinking: its been 2 weeks and she is back home and from that time she didn't saw Armaan not on the dinning table having dinner, not in any family gathering or anywhere around though she saw his figure away from all in the long corridor but not with any family member nor anyone asked about him. She even saw him sometimes sitting in the garden at night or near the fountain, but since they came back he didn't once tried talking to her and this was irritating her.

Ridhimaa's trance broke hearing Anjali's voice and she looked at her Di coming inside the room with a platter full of her favorite food.

Anjali: tum kahan ghum ho Ridz mein kab se door knock kar rahe thi.

Ridz: kuch soch rahi thi di, but its ok kahiye.

Anjali: tere liye khana laye thi, tu ne aaj khana nahin khaya na.

Ridz: mann nahin hai di.

Anjali: thora sa.

Ridz: gale se ek nawala [bite] nahi nikale ga di.

Anjali was about to say something but got interrupted by the maid.

Anjali: kya hua kamla.

Kamla [Maid]: bhabhi who Armaan bhai ne khana nahin khaya keh rahe hain mann nahin kar raha hai.

Anjali: hey bhagwan kya karon mein is larke ka. Acha Kamla ek kaam kar yeh tray yahan rakh de mein usey khila doon gi.

Ridz: kya hua di aap pereshan lag rahe ho.

Anjali: arey pereshan nahin hoon tu kya karon mein is larke ka from last 2 months he is irritating me [seeing Ridz confused] arey tangh kar diya hai is larke ne khana hi nahin khata kabhi. Ridhimaa agar ek baat kahon gi tu mane gi [ridz looked up hearing Ridhimaa from her di, it must be serious otherwise she wont call her with full name and she nodded, seeing it Anjali continued]. Please agar ho sake tu Armaan ko maff kar de, mein jante hoon Ridz jo usne kiya who ghalat tha but mujse ab uski yeh halat nahin dekhi jate. Who buri tarah se toot chukka hai, usey kafi baar tu khud hi nahin samajh ati ke who kya kar raha ahi, ya tu har samay rota rahe ga tujhe yaad kar key a khud ko choot puhanche ga yeh soch kar ke usne tujhe dard diya.

Pata hai Ridz ek barr jab mein uske room mein gaye thi tu tujhe mahsoos karne ke liye teri chunri ko khud se laga kar so raha tha. Ghar wale bhi use baat nahin karte khass kar Ananya mom who tu uski shakal bhi nahin dekhna chahti mein janti hoon andar se who khud bhi toot jate hai Armaan ko rota dekh, magar sirf is wajah se ussey baat tak nahin karti. Tere jane ke baad tu jaise is ghar ki khushiyaan hi chale gaye hoon, sab khoo gaya hai Armaan jo kabhi sabki jaan tha aaj koi uske bare mein baat bhi nahin karna chahta aur yeh sab ab sirf tu teekh kar sakti hai Ridz tera ek kadam aur yeh ghar phir se khushiyoon se bhar jae ga. [she kept her hand on Ridz tears flowing down their cheeks] meri baat par ek baar sochna zarror.

After Anjali left Ridhimaa recalled all what she said and even she herself observed Armaan is not the same he use to be, family members seems don't think about him anymore and now she was determined to get them back together. She picked up the tray laden with food and moved towards Armaan no correction their room, she knocked twice but Armaan gave the same answer.

Armaan: [shouting from inside] Bhabhi mujhe khana nahin khana aap plz jao [when he heard the 3rd knock he got irritated and opened the door only to get a shock of life time seeing Ridz infront of his eyes]

Armaan: Ridhimaa tum yahan koi kaam tha.

Ridz: tum ne khana kyun nahi kahaya

Armaan: who mera mann nahin kar raha tha, aoo andar aoo.

Though Ridhimaa entered the room but all the past memories came flashing back, she looked at Armaan who was putting something under his pillow but Ridz got a glimpse and saw its her chunri. Armaan sat apart from her an akward silence filled the room both don't know what to say.

Ridz: Armaan khana kha lo.

Armaan: nahin Ridhimaa gale se ek nawala [bite] nahin nigle gi.

Ridz: Armaan dekho kitne weak ho rahe ho kuch tu kha lo.

Armaan: tum ne bhi tu nahi khaya.

Ridz: tum kaho phir mein kha loon gi.

Armaan: mein khilaon [Ridz was shocked hearing it but didn't said anything Armaan got the signal moved towards her and taking a roti and along with some curry moved towards her lips. Reluctantly she took the bite and taking roti and dipped in curry made Armaan eat it. like this they finished their food though both were feeling some block in their throat and its difficult to gulp but still for the sake of the other they had it. Armaan couldn't take it more and tears spilled from his eyes.

Armaan: im sorry Ridhimaa im really sorry, mein ne kaise who sab tumhare saath [he broke down n held his head in hands]

Ridz kept the tray aside and moved towards Armaan and making him looked up cupped his face, but he put his head in her lap and started crying badly even Ridhimaa couldn't control and started crying too.

Armaan: im sorry mujhe maaf kar do please ridhimaa mein marr jaon ga tumhare bina I hate myself for doing this with you. Magar us samay sharab ke neeche mein na jane mein kya kya bol gaya tumhein im sorry im so sorry. Lekin nahi tum mujhe maff mat karna meri yehi saza hai ke sab mujse nafrat kare I deserve it and u deserve someone better. Uncle [shanky] teekh kehte hai im not worth u im the cheapest human being a beast who didn't left his wife too. Please tum mujhse alag ho jao mein nahi chahta ke phir se tumhein chot pohanchon.

Hearing his words Ridz was shocked she pushed him away from her lap and Armaan thought she don't want to be near him at all. He was about to say Sorry when she slapped him hard.

Ridz: tumhari himaat kaise hui yeh sab kehne ki, tum jante bhi ho kya bol rahe ho ya sirf yeh dosron ki influence mein bol rahi ho [Nahin Ridz meri baat ' Armaan was saying but Ridz cut him in b/w]. tum ne khud ko samajh kya rakha hai koi king ho kya ya mujhe koi khilona samjha hai jab dil chaha le liya aur jab dil bhar gaya tu pehnk diya. [Nahin Ridhimaa aisa nahin hai], aisa hi hai Armaan tum kabhi mujhe samajh hi nahi paye. Mere dill mein kya hai tumne janane ki koshish hi nahin ki kabhi, seems like im no one to you humesha apne bare mein hi sochte ho na. aur aaj bhi tum mujhse isliye alag hona chahte ho so tum mujhe chot na pohancha sako [Kar to tumhare liye hi raha hoon na Ridhimaa] mere liye kya mere liye Armaan. Dard diya takleef khud ko bhi hui aur mujhe bhi di aura b jab mein wapis ana chahti hoon tu tum phir se mujhe khud se door karna chahte ho. [Kya kya kaha tum ne] wohi jo tumne suna u idiot Mallik I love you a lot mein ne tu tumhein usi samay maff kar diya tha jab tumne mujhse apne pyarr ka izhar kiya tha [Mein ne Kab]. Lo ji inki suno inko yeh hi yaad nahin hospital mein [Armaan scratched his hairs], nahin yaad aya [seeing him nodding in No] tu ab bol do na.

Armaan: I love you Ridhimaa I love you a lot im really sorry tumhein itni takleef den eke liye.

Ridz: shhh'bas ab sab bhool jao jot ha who guzar Gaya and I love you too Mr. Khadus

Armaan: hey mein khadus nahin ok miss rondho

Ridz: Armaan im not rondho ok.

Armaan: yes you are.

Ridz: no im not.

Armaan: yes

Ridz: no

Armaan: yes

Ridz: no

Other family members who have seen all this smiled seeing finally the two lovers together though they were angry with Armaan for what he did, but hearing his words and seeing him suffering so much they forgave him and looked towards each other and than towards Armaan Ridhimaa who by now have embraced each other tightly and as the life goes on, their love increased.

True love never dies it gets stronger with time, here also Armaan did a mistake but as he loves her fully and his heart belongs to her only he won her back.


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Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago
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beautiful👏😊
eagerly waiting to read more 😊😊
update sooonn dii 😊😊
waiting 😍
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waiting to see wat he did to her
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its 9th may ...can i demand the complete part NOW ...plzzz
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Anu please complete it naa yar its ages please i really want to read please
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sorry...was busy with some personal stuff...

writing...so hopefully will be updating...

all the ff's...n will complete mistake too soon...

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anu please i request u to please update this one i really want to read it
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wow such a poignant story
Armaan must hv done sumthng real bad
eager 2 know wat had he done
hope Ridz forgives him coz he's suffering 2 much
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
luv it
thanks 4 d pm

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