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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
YEPPY..U UPDATED...
WILL READ & COMMENT
read it...very nice..asusuall..waiting for the next one...
liked how maan always manaofy's her..really cute...
shiv & geet hug😲...if maan sees to gaya!!!😡😡
really liking the story line..what happened to prem...
so the don part well handled by maan!!!😳
waiting waiting waitng!!!!
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Oh its great as always.. Geet and shiv close.. Maan will to burn..without even leaving ashes behind..haha..waiting for next update...and ya i too watch maryada its a good show.. :) :) quite bold about the harsh realities persisting in society..well its hard to read the reactions of that devyani..chalo leave maryada...when am i getting jealous maan ..i mean next update..
Edited by SimplyAparajita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
yayy finally an update!!
plz update intezaar as well.. really looking forward to that one

Awesome update
i don't think maan will like geet working with shiv at all!
its just going to cause more problems:S
con't soon!

--yeah i use to watch maryada when it started. love the main couple
and the music for them is soo good.. Almost as good as Mahiii ;)

-But i still prefer Geet, as it is a lighter show and more of a love story
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
awesome update dear...hope Maan is the way Geet explained rather than wat Shive explained...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
finally u update dear.......yepeeeeeeeeeeeee.........now coming to update..

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME 👏👏👏👏👏

pls update asap........we waiting DESPERATELY...he he he he

👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
finally u update
do continue
wen is maan gonna realise he love geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
hmm.... i dont know where its going frankly..!! lool but good one update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

***ESOTERIC LOVE***

part 64

Geet walks in to the office informing that shiv will help her out with this.
Naku- have you informed maan about this?
Geet- oh no! I haven't! I will tell him tonight.
Nakusha- I don't think you should do this without informing him.
Geet- he will be fine! Dw!
Nakusha- as you wish.

It was a busy day. Geet called shiv now and then to find some more information out.
They were talking for more then an hour while maan trying to get through to her. He got p off.

Evening....

Maan comes home earlier then geet... He was missing her. They haven't seen one another since morning.
Maan calls Geet...

Maan- Tum kha ho?
Geet- hi! I am in the office still! She makes a baby face.
Maan- why?
Geet- I still didn't managed to finalize some if the Design.
Maan- why your phone was busy all day?
Geet looks at her phone... She only spoke to Shive for 3 hours! Not all day.
Geet- nop... It was free.
Maan- I have tried 60 times... Every time it kept coming up as busy.
Geet- you probably called me when I was on the phone.
Maan gets a bit irritated. She didn't even care how many time he was trying.
Maan- i am coming to the the office. I will pick you up.
Geet- it's ok!
Maan- I will be there.

Maan picks geet up in matter of 30 minute.
He walks in to the office. Finds Geet surrounded by files.
Maan walks in Geet smiles... He closes all the file and picks her up on his arm.
Geet- maan! What are you doing?
Maan- it's 8pm! Well over office hour.
Geet- but....
Maan- shh...
Geet makes a baby face and holds him tight by his neck... Kissing his cheek.
Geet- I missed you.
Maan- and that's why you for got to call me!
Geet- no.... It's not like that. I was too busy.
Maan- I was more busy and still managed to call you.
Geet- but you are experienced and ...
Maan- you are not! Not a good excuse.
Geet- sorry....

Both makes there way home.... After the dinner....

Geet takes her night dress out. Really tirade. Now she realized how tirade maan must get after office. Then when he used to arrive home he had to spend quality time with her....
Geet takes a long warm bath.... Maan walks in. Finds Geet sleeping in the bathtub. He was tempted to go in with her.... And he does.
Geet cuddles up.... As his hand travels to her private part. Stroking. Seducing her.
Geet relax her head on his chest.
Geet- now I know how tirade you must get.
Maan kiss her forehead.
Maan- I am used to it. You are not.
Geet hugs him tighter...- I have to tell you something.
Maan- bolo....
Geet- the project! I asked for Shivs help.
Maan stops his hand straight way...
Geet looks at him... - guessing he didn't like that.
Maan- why? He asked angrily.
Geet- umm... I need help.
Maan- I want you to stay way from him. And...
geet- per ku? He is really helpfully. He knows the project.... And he was giving me great advise today.
Maan- so you were on phone with him?
Geet- yes sometime.
Maan gets more irritated- you remember to call him and not me.
Geet- per... I was working!
Maan- Geet! Which word you don't understand that I don't want you to even talk to him.
Geet- why do you hate him? He is such a nice guy.
Maan- because I can't tolerate you being with anyone els except me.
Geet- what? ... Geet was confused... I am always with you.
Maan- if you were always with me what were you doing with him?
Geet- maan! You have lost it! We only work! There are nothing more.
Geet tries to get up but maan jerks back. Holds her tight on his embrace.
Maan- I don't want any professional relationship with him either.
Geet rolls her eyes...
Geet- maan! Try to understand.... She calms her voice a bit!
Maan- I don't understand. I don't understand why you can't just listen to me.
Geet just gets annoyed and forces her self out and walks in to the shower. She stood underneath the shower staring at maan directly. While maan on her... He gets up after while and slips under.... Hugging geet from the back. He pushes her against the wall.... Kissing her passionately. He pushes his private part on he hard as possible. Geet twists her leg round his.

After long time both were in bed making love over and over again... Geet couldn't breath due to the over lode pleasure....

Both laid there panting... Maan bricks geet in to his embrace... While she slowly falls sleep...

Next day...

Maan sat in his office... In deep thought. He didn't like Geet working with Shive at all... But knowing Geet she will work with him...
He himself have to do something.



ello ello ello… oh no maan sees geet and shivs long hug in magazine… awwwwww

hehe…. thats next. loved all the commrnts

ty gys… LOVE U SOOO MUCH

xxx

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG..........SHIV GEET big hug......ummmmmmm........maan to puri tarah jalllllll jayega......he he he.........

wana to see him more jealous and realise that he love geet a lottttttttt 😉

hey pls update and pls tell na how many parts u going to update today..........pls update morrrreeeeeee 😆
Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Kem knwing Maan's mood im now scary wat will happen.... is there going to be abig twist....

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