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cherieLover thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahahaha poor maan
greattttttttt move geet
but for next part, i want to see all misunderstanding clear upand see our lovely geet woth hot maan, hahaha
great part
hilerious
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Posted: 14 years ago
let him cry & realize his love for Geet she deserve to know amazing update pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
No yaar...make it happy happy lovey dovey!
Loved the update
Couldn't stop laughing when she did karate on him...🤣
Thanks yaar
Love you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
dont want to see slap...want to see them together and with their passionate moments plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update yaar. i agree geet should b more angry on maan. he should realise the true love which geet feels for him not just the bedroom love. hey what surprise maan is trying to give or he will b surprised by geeting a slap by his own behaviour waitng for ur next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

***Esoteric LOve***

part 68


Geet looks at him bit scared...
Geet- what are you planning?
Maan- a surprise!
Geet- what type of surprise?
Maan- you will see!

Geet didn't like his intention at all. Something defiantly was wrong with him! Hmm...

Maan flows her behind, Geet kept looking at him now and then. Bit suspicious. Bit curious. Something not nice was cooking in his brain but what? She thought.
Maan on the other hand was bit anxious. He wasn't sure how she will react to this!

Both walks in a room! It was pitch black! Geet holds maan tight! Hmm!
Geet- is this on of your stupid prank?
Maan- no! If course no!
Geet- I can sense something fishy here!
Both walks towards the middle. Geet wasn't sure where she was heading to and maan... Of course he knew....
Geet could here some creepy noise... She started to panic a bit more and then suddenly everyone screamed....
"happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to maan and Geet... Happy birthday to you!"

Geet looked at everyone in shock. Maan hugs her from the back and kisses get cheek...
Maan- how is it?
Everything was geets favorite... Everything.
Geet- umm....
Mum, dad, Darji, Dadima, bua... Everyone...... geet and Maans closest friend... Everyone came and hugged both if them. Congratulating them for there first birthday after there weeding.
Geet just looked at maan thinking... "idiot still didn't say sorry!"
Maan smiled and kissed her again and again. He was just too happy. He brought Geet 24 gifts as they are 24 today.
Geet as usual nothing for maan. She completely forgot.

Maan walks off with Armaan & atual to met everyone. While geet with Ridzy Sammera.... And others...

Mum- you still haven't brought anything for maan! First birthday beta... And specially after marriage.
Geet- he have me and that's the biggest prize he could ever get.... Geet says annoyingly.
Ridzy and sam laughs.
Mum- chup badmash. He loves you so much.
Geet- love my foot mum! I just couldn't believe you let him marry me! You didn't even stop him!
Mum- Geet! What's this. I thought you love him!
Geet- I do! But does he?
Mum confused- Geet. Grow up. You two are married now! Stop acting like a child. You two are not young anymore.
Geet roles her eyes and walks off. Ridzy and sam flowed.

Mum rolled her eyes as leaves ignoring geets silly thought.

Sammera- you happy with him na!
Geet- he is ok!
Sam- but you....
Ridzy- umm...
Geet- where is Dutta?
Ridzy and sam gave one another a look.
Geet- I haven't seen him for a long time!
Ridzy- he will be here soon. She said in a shaky voice.
Geet- umm! Ok!
Ridzy- anyway tell me about you and maan. He is good in bed na!..
Geet chokes on her drinks!
Sammera trying her best to forget the image she created in her brain.
Sam- shut-up
Geet- what? she looks at ridzy... she was never this bold before. was she alright. sure she have done something with armaan.
Ridzy- just some tips! You know me and Armaan getting married in a month time... less then a month!
Geet- it's private! You should make your own up!
Ridzy- can you do that?
Geet roles her eyes and looks at sam- isko samja na Kuch yar!
Geet walks off to look for maan. And bumps in to bua.

Bua- mera Pari bachi.
Geet hugs her.
Geet- Dev not round?
Bua- he left for London yesterday!
Geet- something important?
Bua- yes! Well... He was talking to some Prem! He was offering him a good deal about a company!
Geet- Prem ha!
Bua- ha! Then he left straight way!
Geet thought about the name sounded familiar! But what the heck it's her and Maans birthday! And she didn't like to spoil there mood.

Party was only with close friends and family. No outsider. And Geet was more then happy no nakusha. Happy that maan didn't invite her! And didn't close her as part of close friend or family….



next: ☺️


well u lot wanted a slap… :D a slap will be up in 2-5 parts

xxx loving all the comments… next part up soon

xxx as many of u wanted like 6 parts… i am trying my best

xxx :D

xx

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey your are back..............

I THINK YOU ARE PLANNING SOMETHING WITH MAAN AND NAKUSHA

........................REALLY CANT WAIT TO SEE YOUR MORE UPDATES AND PLANS AS WELL.

GREAT PART......................

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE FAST
AS I AM NEW BUT I HAVE ADD YOU TO MY BUDDY LIST BUT YOU ARE NOT PM ME LOL.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nooooooooooooooooooooo salpppppppppppp pleaseeeeeeeee

i want to see happy moments btwn maneet. no gilesikve plz?

nice update!! i expected something else but turn out to be diffenrant, nice update though.

please update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. cant wait for the next one.. do continue soon

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