Promise and Pyar FF#1 Part 1-310 Page1-145

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

oye yaar sadday munday per rehem kero ... bechara pura flat hai Geet per ...

its about time Geet shud realize her feelings for him too....

btw their cute arguments are just tooooo cute...

continue soon,

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: tonyahk
Part 189
after sometime maneet fall asleep
G:(turns 2wards maan in her sleep)
M:(after few minutes turns 2wards her by chance &his gaze falls on her face)
G:(sleeping like a cute kid)
he keeps on looking@her lovingly as if a mother sees her just-born baby.he couldn't take his eyes off her(previously maan had many times lost himself seeing her sleeping on d couch.bt 2day d scene is too close 2 his eyes)
maan notices on her face a hairlock tht is distubing her.he couldn't resist himself&stretches his arm&gently moves d hairlock behind her earlobes.&lost in her
G:(moves slightly)

👏👏 SWEETLY WRITTEN .................👏👏👏👏👏👏

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 190
when maan is abt 2 take his hand back,geet moves slightly in her sleep n his hand touches her earlobe accidently
G:(catches his hand&still her eyes closed)
M:(shocked&looks @ her in horror)
G:(still sleeping&talks in her sleep)bhabi,how many times i have told u not 2 tap on my earlobes while i am sleeping(since geet is too fond of sleeping,archana used2tease her by taping geet's earlobe while she sleeps)
M:(whispers2himself)bhabi?
G:(still holding his hand)
M:(tries2pull his hand from her grip)
G:(tightens her grip on his hand)bhabi,i won't leave u 2day
M:ye maine kahan phas gaya?

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

cute update

geet gonna feel embrass wen she woke up😆😆😆😆😆

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

Part 191
M:(again tries 2 pull his hand back)
G:(doesn't loose her grip)
M:(tensed&selftalk)if she wakes up now,what would she think of me?socho maan.(some idea comes)acha
M:(call her)geet
G:...(still sleeping)
M:geet(lil bit loudly)
G:....(still sleeping)
M:(pats on her shoulder with his other hand)geet
G:(opens her eyes gradually,still in semi sleep&looks @ him)
M:geet
G:hmmm
M:(with his eyes gives her a gesture to see towards her hand tht is holding his hand)
G:(still in semisleep &couldn't understand anything&closes her eyes again)
M:geeet!!
G:(opens her eyes bt still holding his hand)

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

"bhabi" ???? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Maan sahee kehta hai ye Geet usay sachee mein pagal ker de gi.... special piece hai puri... especially made only for him...

keep the updates coming ... i'm lovin it!!

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

Part 192
M:geet,mera hath pakadkar kya karehe ho?
G:(realises tht she is holding his hand&shocked&couldn't react)
M:ab yesa kyun dekhrahe ho?mera haath chodo
G:(releases his hand immediately&embrassed)hey babaji,ye kaise hua?maine yesa kyun kiya?
M:(smiles,remembers dinner convo abt ACTION MOVIE&selftalk)geet ab dekh
M:(teases)u said na u r wellmannered girl?
G:sir,aap mujhe galat samajrahe hai
M:nai,mein bilkul teek samajraha hun
G:sir,I dono how it happened.i'm innocent.trust me
M:geet u r not that innocent as much as u seem.now u r behaving as if u have done double PhD in ACTION MOVIES

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Part 193
G:(shocked 2 d core&speechless)
M:teek hai,since it is d firsr time,i forgive u.dubara yesa math karo
G:(staring@him without blinking her eyes)
M:ab sojao(turns 2 otherside&smiles silently)
G:(couldn't come outta d shock,tries 2 recollect wht happened bt fails &self talk)geet tum pagal hogaya kya?y did u hold his hand?(lays back&moves 2 d edge of d bed 2 keep a safe distance from him)
M:(still smiling&self talk)well done maan
G:(still feeling embarassed&further moves 2wards d edge of d bed&falls on d ground)
M:(hearing d sound gets up from his bed & looks 2wards her side of bed)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Part 194
M:(understands wht happened,rush 2 d otherside of bed & spots geet on d floor&hurt 2 see her like tht)
M:(worried)tum teektho hena?
G:....
M:kya hua geet?tum neeche girgayi kya?
G:(lies)nai
M:thn wht r u doing on d floor?
G:i'm just checking d tiles
M:kya??
G:(annoyed)y r u asking so many questions?can't i sit on d floor?
M:kyun nai?
G:dekhiye mujhe neend aarahi he.let me sleep(gets up&again lays on d bed&closes her eyes)
M:(shook his head&lays on his side of bed&closes his eyes bt he couldn't sleep as he is worried tht she will fall again.turns 2 geet&removes d pillow boundary...