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chubzy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Very cute n sweet nok jhok

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

wow i just loved it

teras in maan's eyes, felt sad 4 geet's scooty😭😭😭😭 😭😭😭

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

part 96

next day morning @KM 9am
dadi is sitting in d living room n wonders y maneet r not yet ready 4 office
Dadi:nakul,when did they comeback lastnight?
nakul:patha nai madam.i think chandu knows it
dadi:chandu kahanhai?
nakul:garden mein
dadi:teek hai
dadi comes 2 maneet room n sees tht d door was nt locked from inside.dadi comes inside n sees geet who was sleeping on d couch n dadi looks around d room bt maan was nt there.dadi comes downstairs.
dadi(selfthought)so every night geet sleeps on d couch only.iske bare mein kuch karna padega.par ab maan kahan chaligaya?

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Part 97
maan enters d mansion n dadi notices tht he was still in d same dress which he wore y'day
dadi:maan beta,aap kaha chaligayi?why din u get ready 4 office till now?it is 9am.
M:wo dadima kuch kam tha(left 4 his room without waiting 4 her next question
dadi:(selftalk)why is he looking so upset?i think my idea of sending them 2 movie has increased d problem between them further.par kal rath hua kya?
maan comes 2 his room n sees geet sleeping.she looked very dull.maan gets ready n leaves 4 office.
geet wokes up n checks d clock.it is 11.30am
G:(selfthought)hai babji!how much i slept.

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

Part 98
suddenly d thought about her scooty pops into gee'ts mind.she rushes 2 d parking area.she couldn't believe what she just saw thre.her scooty was standing there with full fitness.she runs near n check it.everything seemed perfect with her scooty.d scooty looked as if no accident happened 2 it.geet couldn't believe.she pinched herself 2 check whether it is real n she jumped in joy n kissed her scooty with tearful eyes
G:(talks 2 scooty)tum teek tho hena?u know last night how much i was worried abt u?u were lying like a deadman on d ground.u just broke my heart.dubara yesa math karna.

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

superb updates
loved all the updates
awesome work by you
manneet fight was awesome hehehe😆
but in the end felt bad for geet
well do continue soon

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

hey superb update marvelous
loved it
it showa how much maan cared about geet
loved the update shoooo much
thanks for such a wonderful updates
loved it when she talks with her scooty
do continue soon

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Part 99
suddenly something pops into her mind
G:(selftalk)par ye kaise ho saktha?it was badly damaged when maan sir's car hit it last night
she calls chandu
G:chandu bhaiya.who sent d scooty 4 service
chandu:pata nai madam.bt in morning i saw chote shab was parking it here around 9'O clock
G:teek hai bhaiya.aap jayiye
G:(self talk)so maan sir did everything.he has brought my scooty back 2 normal conditon within 5hrs
(remembers whatever she said 2 maan lastnight n feels very bad)
G:(selftalk)last night i talked too much.he would have been hurt by my words.i must apologise 2 him.hena babaji?

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wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

great update
finally geet realize that this was her mistake also
sho sweet
cant wait for next part plz update soon
want to know how she apologise to mann
do continue soon