Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 45

Originally posted by: namita25

hey Sonia .....loved the update to the core....
awwwww Maan has defo lost it....he followed Geet ....lolz...bechaara aur karta bhi kya......😆
loved Geet 's date with bachcha party....n that Rohan is so cuteeeeeeeeeeee ....muahas to him......
finally apni kudi has realised that she is in love........wow...der se aaye durust aaye......😆
continue soon yaar........can't wait for the next part......😳

I know... knowing Geet is going on a date what else could be expected of him😆... his stalker abilities had to be showcased somewhere at least, right?😉😆 and that took him to ice-cream parlour😆... glad you liked Rohan

Thanks a ton for the lovely comments

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

gr8 update

Originally posted by: lovepari

loved the update

hope they confess their love soon

looking forward to noida trip

so plz update soon

Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

My darling! 😆 I don't know if u know me I'm Liz! I love your fanfic because it is so in depth and SOOO HOT! LOL I love ur Maan and Geet, though the mystery behind them makes me very curious!

As you have written in the past, their hidden feelings, their slow realizations and the passion they invoke is amazing! 😉 It is awesome to read this!

This part was awesome and sorry for not commenting much!

Love

Liz

Originally posted by: SapphireFlames

"A DATE Goddammit!"

Poor Maan.😆

"Had he made a fool of himself? "

OMFG NO! 😲

"For the first time Maan had no issues with the signals or the slow moving traffic. "

When i had read this at first, i had thought the signals of his brain and the slow moving traffic = slow moving neurons. ROFL! 🤣

"Just as she was close to the exit, Maan grabbed her elbow and dragged her outside the parlour."

Can he not even let her have her ice cream in peace? 😆

"The intensity in his eyes and the passion in his voice"

*drools thinking* 😍

"Alarmed, Maan immediately looked behind while Geet took an opportunity and ducked. "Sorry. But I need to go" she said as she escaped him."

Shaitan Geet! 😈

"Slowing down in his stride, he frowned and cautiously moved forward. As he neared them and the pillar no longer obstructed his view he was left astounded. His eyes widened and his shoulders slumped. "WAS HE HER DATE? THAT BOY, THAT KID, WHO COULD BARELY REACH HIS WAIST, WAS HER DATE?" he closed his eyes momentarily and felt like banging his head now. Was there anything with her that was predictable? He felt foolish... foolish beyond words!"

i just died laughing imagining Maan's expressions! 🤣

"It was Maan's turn now to squint his eyes at the little boy as he sarcastically said, "Why don't you find someone your age? A first or a second grader probably?""

Is Maan jealous of a six year old? lol 😆

""Right! Ek hotel toh sambhala nahi jata... aur karenge bhi kya aap" Naintara mocked at Dev and stormed out of the room."

Churail tara is a BIATCH! 😡

""Agar is baar bhi phone disconnect kiya toh health insurance toh zaroor karva lena"." 🤣

"She was already contemplating from which side she shall join in. Dance in her Veerji's Baraat or be at Geet's side and welcome the baraat? Should hide her Veerji's shoes from ladkiwale or steal them herself and demand a handsome shagun from her Veerji? Must say, A Very Very Tricky situation! "

YES! very tricky! 🤣

"Standing by the window, she pulled the curtains and let the cool breeze and the moonlight fill into her room as the most serene emotion of love filled her heart. Yes it was wonderful to be in love. She didn't know the fate of her love story but she smiled as she thanked Babaji for letting her feel this emotion."

AWWWWWW! ❤️

"Chuppa Rustam!"

Maan. such a chhuppa rustam!

i fell in love with this update. and i'm just relishing the new found emotion! 😆

loved it. muah. update soon Soniaaa-h! 😆

Originally posted by: sweet coco

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Thanks for updating so quickly and sorry for responding so late....it was a crazy blizzard last night and the power went out!! But I'm back and so uber happy!!!

OMFG!!! I love the phone conversation between Anu and Geet....life insurance...so cute!!! The girls talking about geet's feelings are super chweet! And I love how even Maan wants to confess, but doesn't know how!

I see NT and her insecurities will end up separating Maneet! I guess she's the devil...can't wait to see what the future holds for them both!!!

Thanks a bunch....your updates feel so short b/c I never ever want it to end and hopes it goes on and on forever!!!

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

anu is too cute in this ff

Hey di..😃. I had a good sleep yesterday😃... slept for more than 10 hrs BUT there is always but... I had to get up coz my baby sis missed her school bus again😡 n I was forced to drive her to school... n this Amritsar traffic my god I hate traffic jams... the first 7 km's drive was easy.. no problem at all I covered it all in 3 minutes or so.... yeah I drive fast but only when mom is not with me😆... but the last 200 mts they were soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long😳... it took me ten minutes there... these r the tyms I miss dad😔... next tym if she misses her bus I will not drive her😡... I always say this but I have to drop her anywayz😭...

I wish I was the younger one😭... for seven yrs I was the youngest in my family n I was pampered by everyone my parents my cousins my dadi😃 ... n now I have to pamper her😭...so irritating😡... nah I luv my sis😳 only hate the fact that she is younger n hence always gets out scot free...

Abt who can order MSK around😳... well our sherni can not only order him but can also make him do things he would never do otherwise...

Phy edu... same is the case with me... I was given three chances in long jump n guess what all of them were fouls😆... ab what can I do if my legs refuse to land together🤔... is it my fault🤔...no na😆... I should have opted for fine arts but then my drawing is well apne muh se apni badai karna is a bad thing so I wont😎... actually I made a blunder by taking non med😔😆... but now I have no option...I know I'm a complain box😆

Take care...🤗

A new guess just hit me😲... NT is fed up of dev so maybe you know she will start getting envious of geet as maan is far better wayyyyyyyyy better than moron dev😆 (sry got carried away I hate anyone with the name dev although he hasn't done anything yet in the FF for me to call him a moron... I can't help it😳) n she did something (which I am yet to guess) wait a min🤔... geet said that maan told her he doesn't want her in his life may be NT lied to geet n manipulated the situation to her own benefit... ok😕... next abt HP I will wait for sometime as you have disclosed close to nothing abt it so what am I to guess when I'm clueless abt stuff😆...but still I will make an attempt no matter... but later😆... for now I'm done*phew*... I gotta go pick up my sis from school in half an hour n if I'll be a min late she will literally eat my brain n to stop her from doing that I'll have to bribe her which is something I don't want to do considering I m in no mood of spending money on chocolates😆...

btw Can u tell me all the soaps u watched in your 8 yrs experience... it will help me guess u see... so pweez *making a puppy dog face* pweez😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Omg I just realised something😲... just three more months n m free... well I'm dying to go to hostel provided it is not in Delhi😆...

Originally posted by: .muskaan

A new guess just hit me😲... NT is fed up of dev so maybe you know she will start getting envious of geet as maan is far better wayyyyyyyyy better than moron dev😆 (sry got carried away I hate anyone with the name dev although he hasn't done anything yet in the FF for me to call him a moron... I can't help it😳) n she did something (which I am yet to guess) wait a min🤔... geet said that maan told her he doesn't want her in his life may be NT lied to geet n manipulated the situation to her own benefit... ok😕... next abt HP I will wait for sometime as you have disclosed close to nothing abt it so what am I to guess when I'm clueless abt stuff😆...but still I will make an attempt no matter... but later😆... for now I'm done*phew*... I gotta go pick up my sis from school in half an hour n if I'll be a min late she will literally eat my brain n to stop her from doing that I'll have to bribe her which is something I don't want to do considering I m in no mood of spending money on chocolates😆...

btw Can u tell me all the soaps u watched in your 8 yrs experience... it will help me guess u see... so pweez *making a puppy dog face* pweez😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

Omg I just realised something😲... just three more months n m free... well I'm dying to go to hostel provided it is not in Delhi😆...