Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

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My darling! 😆 I don't know if u know me I'm Liz! I love your fanfic because it is so in depth and SOOO HOT! LOL I love ur Maan and Geet, though the mystery behind them makes me very curious!

As you have written in the past, their hidden feelings, their slow realizations and the passion they invoke is amazing! 😉 It is awesome to read this!

This part was awesome and sorry for not commenting much!

Love

Liz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#432

"A DATE Goddammit!"

Poor Maan.😆

"Had he made a fool of himself? "

OMFG NO! 😲

"For the first time Maan had no issues with the signals or the slow moving traffic. "

When i had read this at first, i had thought the signals of his brain and the slow moving traffic = slow moving neurons. ROFL! 🤣

"Just as she was close to the exit, Maan grabbed her elbow and dragged her outside the parlour."

Can he not even let her have her ice cream in peace? 😆

"The intensity in his eyes and the passion in his voice"

*drools thinking* 😍

"Alarmed, Maan immediately looked behind while Geet took an opportunity and ducked. "Sorry. But I need to go" she said as she escaped him."

Shaitan Geet! 😈

"Slowing down in his stride, he frowned and cautiously moved forward. As he neared them and the pillar no longer obstructed his view he was left astounded. His eyes widened and his shoulders slumped. "WAS HE HER DATE? THAT BOY, THAT KID, WHO COULD BARELY REACH HIS WAIST, WAS HER DATE?" he closed his eyes momentarily and felt like banging his head now. Was there anything with her that was predictable? He felt foolish... foolish beyond words!"

i just died laughing imagining Maan's expressions! 🤣

"It was Maan's turn now to squint his eyes at the little boy as he sarcastically said, "Why don't you find someone your age? A first or a second grader probably?""

Is Maan jealous of a six year old? lol 😆

""Right! Ek hotel toh sambhala nahi jata... aur karenge bhi kya aap" Naintara mocked at Dev and stormed out of the room."

Churail tara is a BIATCH! 😡

""Agar is baar bhi phone disconnect kiya toh health insurance toh zaroor karva lena"." 🤣

"She was already contemplating from which side she shall join in. Dance in her Veerji's Baraat or be at Geet's side and welcome the baraat? Should hide her Veerji's shoes from ladkiwale or steal them herself and demand a handsome shagun from her Veerji? Must say, A Very Very Tricky situation! "

YES! very tricky! 🤣

"Standing by the window, she pulled the curtains and let the cool breeze and the moonlight fill into her room as the most serene emotion of love filled her heart. Yes it was wonderful to be in love. She didn't know the fate of her love story but she smiled as she thanked Babaji for letting her feel this emotion."

AWWWWWW! ❤️

"Chuppa Rustam!"

Maan. such a chhuppa rustam!

i fell in love with this update. and i'm just relishing the new found emotion! 😆

loved it. muah. update soon Soniaaa-h! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#433

AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! Thanks for updating so quickly and sorry for responding so late....it was a crazy blizzard last night and the power went out!! But I'm back and so uber happy!!!

OMFG!!! I love the phone conversation between Anu and Geet....life insurance...so cute!!! The girls talking about geet's feelings are super chweet! And I love how even Maan wants to confess, but doesn't know how!

I see NT and her insecurities will end up separating Maneet! I guess she's the devil...can't wait to see what the future holds for them both!!!

Thanks a bunch....your updates feel so short b/c I never ever want it to end and hopes it goes on and on forever!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#434

anu is too cute in this ff

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: smj1977

Anu raised her eyebrow as she let the news sink in and then rolled her eyes at the apparent cause behind this trip, that too on a Sunday; her Veerji was certainly turning out to be a Chuppa Rustam!
amazing

Thanks dearie... glad you enjoyed it😃

Originally posted by: Shalve
awesome update....loved it...

Thanks sweetie😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: princess_xaini
that was owsme..

luved it..

continue soon..

Thanks dearie....

glad you enjoyed it... will try and update soon😳

Originally posted by: cutee987
lovely , amazing update
thanks for pm.

Thanks a ton cutie 😃

glad you enjoyed it

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Posted: 14 years ago

#437

Originally posted by: .muskaan
My sis is hell scared of me but only when mommy is not at home or when she flunks in a test..😆. I wait for her maths test every 2 weeks as that is one thing I get to shout at her otherwise chote hone ka pura faida uthathi hai😭... room ko bigarthi wo hai n I have to clean😭...
My practical was good overlooking my handwriting😆... I did not break any test tube, did not spoil my jean, did not mess with acids, written exam was correct so yeah it was good😃... BUT... I had my physical education practical today n my body is paining like anything😭... obviously if you make a person as lazy as me run n jump what else will my poor body do... it has no option but to pain... n to top it all I got a big fat lecture from my teacher as my notebook was covered with a plain cellophane sheet n she wanted me to decorate it... com on its not like she is going to give it a second look after today... it will anyway be dumped na... so what's the fun decorating it😡... she refused to take my viva😡 until I get it decorated so I had to go the art centre search for decoration stuff n do it... it took me half hour to finish the nonsense I want to kill her😡 ... in short I had a very bad day so thank u sooooooo much for making me smile through the update😳🤗...

Coming to the update... it was cho chweet...😳

Her date was a kid😆... I was like what😲, that was unexpected but so cute😃... maan was being sarcastic with a kid... god... he needs to grow up... 😆

Finally hamari geet darling ki dimag ki batti jal gayi...

she called anu at 1:30 haha poor anu but the phone convo cracked me... I'm still laughing🤣... while reading this I did not realise dadi was staring at me n when she asked me why am I laughing it was then it hit me I was laughing like a lunatic... the expression on her face was worth seeing... she was like meri poti def pagal ho gayi hai n I was no nothing just like that...😆

anu is a sweetheart... she is adorable... luv her...😳

I can see a confession coming soon...😉

ok... I'm sleepy now🥱 after all the running so good night😊 though its good evening here but anyway I'm gonna sleep so goodnight😆...

Hey Muskiii.... Hope you had a pleasant night sleep yesterday😳

Ahhh so good to know i have someone to share my dukh with... these younger sibblings i tell u know very well when to put on their adorable sides! His test papers and all even he gets scared of me... and since he stays in a hostel he's completely projected his elder sister there as some nasty dictator😳... can u imagine that? whenever he wants his roomies to keep their hands off his expensive gadgets he tells it belongs to my sis and no one dares to touch it then😆 and at home though younger he misses no opportunity to boss over me!!! such contrast😆

Physical Education🤢... oh don't remind me... i was worst at it.... my teachers and my friends have had great deal of laugh over me... i could never manage to throw a throw ball beyond 10 feet🤢!

coming to update... thanks a ton deariee 😳 i m cho cho happy u enjoyed it

ha ha... i know Maan needs to keep hold of himself... but then he's the MSK na... who can order him around😉😆... Oh my ur Dadi thinks u hv lost it😆... I hope u have well recovered now😆... well anyways wat u expect when u call someone while they are in their deep slumber and especially Anu😆

thank you once again🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: princess163

LOVED IT.....

LOVED IT.....

LOVED IT!

WELL, THE KIDDY PART WAS HILLARIOUS. I MUST SAY THAT I GUESSED SOMETHING SIMILAR, BUT, THE WAY YOU PUT IT WAS AWESOME.....

AND MAAN, OMG, HIS BEHAVIOUR WAS MUCH MORE KIDDISH THAN THAT LI'L KIDDO😆😆😆😆

BUT, AS THEY SAY, LOVE MAKES YOU DO WIERD STUFF, ABSOLUTELY CORRECT IN HIS CASE.....

WOW, GEET'S REALISATION WAS QUICK...I MEAN I EXPECTED HER TO BE A TYPICAL TUBELIGHT FOR QUITE SOMETIME, BUT, SONIA, YOU KEEP ON GIVING ME PLEASANT SURPRISES.....

MAAN'S PLANS FOR THE WEEKEND, HMMMM....HE IS TRULY A CHUPA RUSTAM...

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER DEAR.....

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART.....

CONTINUE JALDI SE.......

LOADSSSS OF LOVE AND A BIG THANKS FOR THIS FF..

SWATI

Hey Swatii🤗

well i always stressed about the date that its gonna be an innocent little thing😆... or annoying thing as far as Maan was concerned😉😆

Well i always feel that Love brings out the best in people... and so here follows for Maan, he's living his carefree side here and with a person like Geet... Life can never be anything less, right? I also wanted to take the realization scene a part or two ahead but didn't intend to drag it... so it came a little sooner😳

Thank a ton for the lovely comments Swati... I'm honoured by the comments and so happy that the narration and the story is appreciated. trust me its the appreciation and encouragement that drives me to give it my best shot😳

Thanks once again... I'll try to update soon😃

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#439

Originally posted by: esha143
Hey Sonia...I thoroughly enjoyed this update.....I loved the encounter between THE Maan Singh Khurana and THE Date of Geet,Rohan 😆..and I'm loving all the antics that Maan is conjuring to be alone with Geet.....Now I'm looking forward to their Noida trip....hmm...it'll be interesting for sure....but romantic...that only u can tell 😉😆...so update sooooonnnnnnn.............😛

Hey Esha... Thanks a ton buddy😃

loved the way you put this - THE Maan Singh Khurana and THE Date of Geet,Rohan 😆😆

Ha ha ha... Maan Singh Khurana ko papad belne pad rahe hai😆... hmm Noida trip... don't worry i m trying to make it a mix of all... as i usually do... but just keeping my fingers crossed so that it turns out the way i want it project😳

will try to update soon😳