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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
that was sweet
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for liking

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Posted: 14 years ago
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raj and naina were immersed in their romance when they heard a knock on their door by hearing the knock naina separated herself from raj and signal him to open the door raj jo ke aapne is romance ko thore der aur continue karna chahata tha ab naina ke kahene par aapne romantic thoughts ko aapne dil mein he dabbate hue baare muskil se jaake darwaja kholta haai aur darwaja kholte he uske din aur mood ko aur kharab karne ke liye tia khare hote haai tia jo ke raj ke liye subhe se bhookhe pyaare baithte hue the ab aapne sammne aapne bhaiya ko dekhte he us par gusse se chillate hue kahete haai"bhaiya main yahaan aap ke laambe umar ke liye subhe se bhookh pyaasi baithte hue hoo aur aap haai ke aap ko mere koi fikar he nahin" tia ke baatein sun ke raj feels really bad woh tia se maaffe maagne ke liye sorry kaheta haai par tia not in a mood to listen anything woh gusse mein neecche chali jaate haai

raj jo ke tia se bohot pyaar karta haai jis ke aakhon mein woh kabhie ek boond aasu tak dekh nahin sakta tha aaj naa chahate hue bhi usse ke baaja se uske sab se pyaari bahen jo uske sahe bahen naa hote hue bhi hamesha ek sage bahen se zada usse pyaar kiya haai uske laabe umar ke liye har saal varth rakhte haai uske haathele par rakhi badhte haai aaase gusse mein dekh ke raj ko aapne aap mein he bohot gussa aata haai woh aapne aap ko bar bar kosne laagta haai

naina jo ke abhie tak ek silient audience ke tara khare hue the ab usse aur raha nahin jaata usse yeh pata tha ke raj ke liye tia kitne imp the lekin agar woh abhi raj ko softly samjhayege toh raj ke yeh guilt uske mann mein rahe jaayega isliye to bring out raj from his guilt she goes near raj aur uske haath pe aapna haath rakhte hue bolte haai"raj plz aapne aap ko kosna bandh karo aur jaao jaake tia se aapne bhai dujh ka tikaa lee loo kunki agar tum aase he yahaan upset hote rahoge naa toh naa toh tia aapna varth tor paayege aur naa he main aapne alekh bhaiya se milne jaa paayunga isliye aapna yeh udhas bhaare chahere par ek muskaan laao aur chal ke sab ke saath bhai dujh maanao" raj jo ke hamesha naina mein ek soft emotional rote hue aurat ko dekhte the aaj aachanaak ek practical naina ko dekh ke sach mein usse bohot he aaccha laagta haai woh naina ke aor dekhte hue aapna sar haan mein hillate hue kaheta haai"hmm tum sahe bol rahe hoo" raj ko relieved dekh ke naina ko bhi aacha laagta haai woh is atmosphere ko thora aur light karne ke liye bilkul raj ke andaz mein kahete haai"u see i am always right" naina ko aapne andaz mein bolte hue sunke raj dont wants to miss the chance of teasing her woh naina ke ek dam kareeb aa jaate hue kaheta haai"are wah madam aapne toh mera andaz ko ek dam aapna liya not bad not bad" naina knew that raj is trying to tease her but she was also ready to ans him back so with her full attitude she says "kya kaare saangat ka aasar u see " par raj is raj usse koi aaj tak na toh jeet paaya haai aur naa he paayega he caught this point of naina aur aapne naughty tone mein naina ke aor dekhte hue kaheta haai"waise agar saangat ka aasar ho he gaya haai toh kuch dekha bhi doo jaise kee " yeh bolte he raj aapna lips naina ke lips ke pass lee aata but before he could put his lips over her naina raj ko pushed karte hue kahete haai "i think mr raj shekhawat u are forgetting that ur sis is waiting for u isliye agar aapna aapna yeh programme bandh karke neeche jaane ke kashat karenge toh zada bahetaar hoga " naina ke baat sunke raj aapne hosh mein aata haai aur naina kw haatho ko aapne haatho mein leete hue kaheta haai"yes lets go"par naina raj ke haatho se aapne haath churate hue baare serious tone mein uske taraf dekhte hue kahete haai"nahin abhie hum neecche nahin jaa sakte aur khas karke tum toh bilkul he nahin" naina ke muh se achanaak yeh baat sun ke raj ko kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha tha naina jo ke abhie bhi usse ko yaad dilla rahe the ab khude aase kun bol rahe haai woh naina ke aor baare he haairaani se dekhte hue pucchta haai "kun ?"raj ko aase haairaan pareshan dekh ke naina ko sach mein bohot haase aa jaate woh aapne haase ko aur naa rokhte hue zor zor se haste hue aur raj ke cheeks ko pull karte hue kahete haai "ohhhhhh mere buddhu patiiii jee i was saying this bcoz aap ko sayed pata hoga ke abhie tak aapke dono bete aapne pyaare pyaare need se utthe nahin aur aap toh jaante he haai naa ke jab tak aap swayam jaake aapne bete ko unke need se nahin jaagayenge tab tak woh nahin uthenge isliye plz jao aur jaake aap baccho ko utthaoooooooooooo" naina baare he dramatically raj se kahete haai raj bhi naina ke baat sun ke haste hue aapne baccho ko utthane ke liye jaata haai and naina she just follows him behind

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj felt really bad and wanted to say sorry to Tia but Tia was not in a mood to listen!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj loves Tia a lot and cannot see a single tear in her eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is as usual blaming himself instead of going after Tia!!!!

Great to see Naina think practically and tell Raj to go after Tia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj also liked this practical side of Naina and Naina was happy to see Raj look so relieved!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina copied Raj perfectly and seeing this Raj teased her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina answered him back ke sangat ka asar hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is upto his tricks again but Naina reminded him that he had to go downstairs!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj was about to go when Naina in a serious tone told him that he cannot go yet!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj looks at Naina in surprise and is confused!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina laughs seeing him like this and pulls his cheeks!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina tells him that he has to go and wake his kids up who only wakes up when Raj comes to wake them up!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hearing Naina say this so dramatically, Raj laughs and goes to wake his kids up while Naina follows behind!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Nice part dear....I didnt knw Bhai dujh par behen vrat rakhti hai....however Raj to apni romance me Tia ke bare me bhul hi gaya.....and jab realize hua tab uske pichhe jane ke bajai khud ko kos raha tha....achha hua...Naina ne thodi practically sochi....and told Raj to go for her!! Loved the RN scenes yaar....love their understanding!! But still didnt find it long enough yaar....sirf font bada kar diya....Mana ki tarah cheating hai ye....hehe.

Chalo koi baat nahi....pichle part se to at least bada tha....kaam chala lenge....take care....continue soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Hi Ria
nice part...
Raj was so sad to see Tia like this and as usual he was blaming himself..Naina cheered him up pretty well.😃.she copied him perfecly😆😆😆
Pls continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
raj and naina were immersed in their romance when they heard a knock on their door by hearing the knock naina separated herself from raj .that's so desturbing. naina feels like laughing at raj's ondition.thats so funny.interesting update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
nice, lovely part.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
hey amazingggggggggg part sweety
do continue
love u
salina

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