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Hey ash! I hope ur exams were fine, it has been 2 wks now, wil u update soon? Waitin eagerly to read more.
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@ Ashleydevlin it's so nice to know that u r back and fine. hopefully u'll update soon. i love both of u'r ff's. they r very different from each other. i wish there was a real life movie after"laws of love". i think it would been cool to c such array of emotions on maan and geet's faces that they had to portray. even maanmeet is very hot. may be u can sell u'r stories to some producer. when u were gone i read that sentence over & over when sam said to maan...something like..."it's only fair...as to how u've substituted so many girls for geet."... u get such a strong sense of hidden luv in it. the luv that maan may always had in him but didn't put a finger on it.

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A/N sorry for being late but had loadshadding ....

….......Morning..............


Maan woke up at 6 a.m., she was not in the room, not that he cared where she was, he told himself. On the bedside table as usual flowers were present. He didn't want to touch them. He went out to do his routine exercise.


….later......


Geet came in with his favourite breakfast and put it on table. Then, slid back into the blankets and waited.

Maan came out of shower and started dressing for office. He saw her watching him getting ready but ignored. It was geet's favourite pass time watching him. He checked his briefcase, then started toward the door.


Geet,'' good morning, I made breakfast for you.'' she pointed toward the table.''


Maan looked toward it and then, replied,'' don't ever stop me when I am going out and I do my breakfast with my family in the dining room, not in my room. And even if I did, I will never eat anything you made, so just stop this ''I am really innocent and caring wife routine.'' he banged the door shut behind him.


…....dining room.....


After the breakfast was done, dadi ma asked Maan about the wedding plans.


Maan,''i don't believe in this marriage, I did it only for dar ji. I don't want to relive the situation a second time.''


Dadi ma,''but we have to properly introduce her as your wife. What will society say?''


Maan,''then, don't introduce her as my wife, in fact don't introduce her to anyone anyway.''


dadi ma,''that is really childish attitud. Now, that geet is your wife, let the old thing be gone.''


Maan,''fine but not right now, I am really busy in a new project and I don't want a wedding reception now. I will tell you when I am ready. '' he got up and kissed dadi ma on cheek and said,''good bye and don't worry over it o.k''


dadi ma nodded.


Maan moved toward his car, the driver was already in and car was started, his gaze suddenly wandered toward the balcony where geet was standing, he got into his car and it spread away down the drive way.


…..................................................1 week later....................................................................................

Evening


Geet was sitting on her bed while meera was selecting clothes for her to wear for college.


Meera,''hmmm, this shawar suit will do but I think you need new clothes. We will go for shopping on weekend.


Geet,'' are you sure, maan will like me going to college?''


Meera straight face,''of course, he will, why would he object and anyway you need to have a life beside hanging on balcony waiting for him to come back home.''


geet flushed a little. It had become a routine, to get up early bring him flowers, watch him do his exercise, then watch him getting ready and then, watch him go to office and so on....the word ''watch'' was prominent in her love story, geet thought sadly. It would be appropriate if he looked back at me once but no, his nose was always in air and when he spoke it was like they were in a battle field and she was the enemy.


Meera,'' in fact, I am sure, it will help your relationship.''


geet,how?''


Meera,'' well, you can impress him with your academic brilliance.''


Geet,'' I am going to study art.''


Meera,''soo?''


Geet sighed. I don't know how I will be able to settle in at college. I have never been to school.


Meera, '' you are very adaptable and you will manage perfectly.''


geet nodded looking like a cute doll. She was wearing punjabi dressing. Red colour shalwar suit, red bangles, sindoor and bindi along with mangulsutar proclaiming her a bride from every angle. Her long straight silky hairs were open around her shoulder. But it was the innocence in her eyes which made her look something beyond beautiful.


Meera thought how can maan resist her? And more important hurt her. When she looked at meera with her big sad eyes, it was impossible for her to stop herself from comforting her. Why was maan so cold towards her. Or was it his hatred which was wrapped around his eyes tightly making it impossible for him to see geet properly. But it was his loss. She will do anything for geet to get independent in her life and realize her own self worth and for that..


Meera,'' I think you have to make a sacrifice geet, if you want to get maan's approval.''


geet looked at her in question.


Meera,'' you know how maan is? He put a condition on your going to college, he asked that you won't tell anyone that you are married to him. He absolutely hates favourtism and if people came to know you are his wife then, they will try to get favours from him through you.''


geet looked incomprehensibly.


Meera,'' you can't wear all that sindoor and mangulsutar stuff to college. Its not allowed in college anyway and on top of it maan don't like such bhartiya nari stuff.'


meera prayed in her heart that her lies won't come into open. She had not spoken to maan about college admission at all and as for her bridal accessories, she knew maan would like them as he was traditional. However, she doubt maan would care that geet wore them or not. But if geet wore them to college everyone will know that she was engaged and there will no chance to find some good guy for geet who really loved her as she deserved.


Geet,'' no I won't take them off. She got off bed. They are sign of my husband, I cant take them off.''


meera sighed, geet was sometime a bit melodramatic.''oh come on geet, you want maan to love you nah? So try to mould yourself into his views. You decide yourself, who is more important to you? Maan or these bridal accessories?....................


…....................................................................................................


Morning


maan was getting ready for his office. He was brushing his hair, when geet came out of dressing room, she was wearing a white colour dress, her hairs were done in half pony and she was totally simple. Something was missing in her get up but he could not think what. She sat on bed gloomly and watched him getting ready as usual.


He went down to do breakfast, she never joined them for breakfast or dinner knowing maan didn't want her there.


As usual, she was standing on balcony while he went out.


Geet watched him go with rising panic. She was really nervous about going to college and to top it off, she was not wearing her mangulsutar or sindoor. She had got ready for college early, so that maan would see her and hope fully, she had thought he would be angry at her for not wearing them.


…....................college..............................


meera dropped her off at college. She even showed her around college as she had studied here as well. Then, got her the time table. She introduced her to pari who was her friends sister and told pari that geet was a relative who was here to study.


Then, meera had gone.


Pari was really out spoken and spoke at a speed of ten miles per second. She jumped from one topic to other within seconds.


They were sitting at cafe when pari asked her about Maan.


Pari,''so you have known khauranas all your life?''


Geet,''yeah.''


pari,'' so you must know a lot about mr. dreamy?''


Geet,'' dreamy??''


Pari,''Maan singh khaurana.''


Geet,''ohh.''


Pari,''so how does it feel to live in same house with him. He is so gorgeous.''


Geet not liking her interest in maan but didn't know how to change the topic. ''I don't know.''


Pari thought that this girl look really shy and old fashioned, may be she didn't even talk to him. And anyway he was so modern, good looking and rich, he wouldn't have time for girls like geet even they stayed in same house.'' alright. But you know what we have a Mr. dreamy no. 2 here at the campus.''


geet wanting to get away from the topic of Maan tried to show interest,''really who?''


Pari,'' he is a senior med-student, but he is really hot.''


geet thinking what was hot??,''really.''


Pari,'' yeah, all girls go and stand outside his department.'' at that time an alarm went off on pari's mobile. She turned it off and got up from table. Come on his class is about to finish in 30 min. we have to go there early to get a nice spot to see him.


Geet thinking this was really weird,'' no I am fine, I wanted to go and see the library. I need to get the library card.''


Pari,''are you sure? You don't know what you are missing?


Geet,'' no you go.''


Pari went off while geet made her way toward the library thinking how could pari think about some one else after Maan.


She decided to take the short cut to library which meera had told her. She was going up the stairs, many guys and girls were sitting on the staircases. She saw an old man coming down stairs. He was walking slowly with difficulty. on the one side of railing a couple was sitting and geet was walking beside the wall. Geet moved away from the wall so that old man get down with taking the support of wall. The old man smiled at geet and said,'' May Allah bless you.'' geet felt her face redden at compliment, she was doing just what was in her nature. At that time, a guy came jumping down the stairs.'' grand pa, I told you I was coming.''


he held the old man's hand and helped him down the stairs, the old man said something to him and turned to look back at geet.


Geet quickly started climbing stairs again.


…..........................................2 weeks later..................................................................


Maan was really busy in his project, so now he came home late, around 8 or 9. dadima had told him about geet joining the college. He had been annoyed that no body told him but let the matter rest, dadi ma was already angry at him because he was not agreeing for wedding reception. He didn't want another quarrel. He came back to his room, as usual geet was busy in studying and practising the different face angles given in her drawing anatomy book.


She said,hi which he ignored and went to change his room. He got a call from his client wanting some changes in plans. He got out his lap top and started working on it.

Geet looked at time, it was 12. she had a test tomorrow. Her body was stiff due to sitting in same posture and drawing. She decided to take a warm shower and then, sleep. She took bath and then, came out and blew dried her hairs as meera had taught her.


Maan looked up at the noise. It was 12:30, he saved data and swithed off the lap top. He stretched and then, got into the bed. His eyes wandered to geet. She had blow dried the hair, they looked really soft, somehow he could n't look away. She put the machine down and brushed her hairs once again. Then, she turned and saw maan looking at her.


Maan quickly said,'' turn off the light. I can't sleep with all that noise and light on.''


geet turnrd the light off and slid into the bed.


….sometime later...


maan felt something silky move across his face, he opened his eyes and touched it. Geet's hair were sliding on his face. He looked at her, she appeared sleep. He moved them off his face, and could not stop himself from caressing one long lock. It was as soft as it looked.


He closed his eyes again. Geet in sleep moved toward him and hugged him. Maan felt like hot fire started to run through his veins. He was already finding it difficult to sleep. He tried to move away but her hairs they were all over him again.


Suddenly, It was all too much, impossible to move away from her. He bent his face down and took her lips in a kiss. Her eyes flew open, they were slightly pink from sleep. He deepened the kiss, his tongue entering her mouth which had opened automatically for him. He traced her bottom lip from inside while his hands grabbed those silky taressess which were tormenting him. Their breaths mingled. He started placing hungry kisses on her face then down her neck while she panted, turning and twisting with each kiss who felt like bolts of desire running through her. There toes rubbed along each other, the action unbearably intimate. Maa threw blankets off them and took off her qameez. Then, opened her bra clasp with his teeth. Then , he was kissing her everywhere. Geet held his hairs tight. …....he took off his own clothes and divested her off hers....then, he was in her...the friction too much....geet started moaning... he cut off her pleasure cry when their orgasm hit them with his mouth. After it was over, they still kept kissing each other unable to part.


…...............................................................................

Morning


geet hurriedly got ready, she was late very late for college, she looked at Maan who was still sleeping. Yesterday night scenes still moved in front of her eyes. She wanted to go away before he got up because she knew he will blame her for everything. She was feeling so happy that she didn't want to burst her happy bubble. She went out of the room.

…......................................................................................


Maan came down the stairs at 1, he was really angry, he had important meeting with the client but he had missed it. He spoke to his secretary and tried to rearrange the meeting.


Dadi ma looked at him. Geet had told her before leaving that maan had slept really late, so not to wake him up.


Dadi ma,'' I am going out with my friend at her farm house on a party for her grandson's engagement. Do you want to come?''

Maan,'' no I am bit busy.''


dadima,''ok, dev and meera are going with me. I wish you would let me introduce geet.''


Maan,''not now dadi ma, I am already really late for a meeting and I don't want to talk about this topic.''


dadi ma,''okay, come eat something before going out.''


Maan,''no, I will eat something at office.''


he went out.


…..................................................................................


Geet was waiting for the driver for past 1hour. Pari had already gone home. Geet was getting really worried. She didn't know how to get home. In fact, she didn't know her home address. She looked up, dark clouds were rolling in the sky, it seemed like it was about to rain. Most people were gone.


She saw a black mercedes coming toward her and felt the tension drain out of her.at that moment the rain coming down heavily. The car stopped near her. She opened the door and got in. the car started moving. Geet realized she had sat on the front seat in a hurry, she turned toward the driver why was he late, when realization hit her that it was not her car and more importantly, she was travelling with a stranger.


He smiled at her and said,''hi I am Dr. Armaan''


geet just stared.


Armaan,'' I actually wanted to thank you for helping my grand pa other day. So, when I saw you standing here for past 2 hours, I thought to give you lift home.''


geet,''aahh I am sorry, I thought this was my car, same colour and everything.''


armaan,''oh thats why you got in. but never mind, I was going to ask you anyway.''


he put the car on main road.


Armaan,'' so what is your name?''


geet,''geet khaurana.''


armaan,'' nice name. So where is your home?''


geet,'' Hoshiyaarpur.''


Armaan, ''I mean where do you live in delhi?''


Geet,''i don't know.''


Armaan looked at her,''you dont know your adress?''


Geet innocently,''no I come with driver.''


Armaan,''phone number?''


Geet,''no.''


Armaan,''where is your mobile?''


Geet,'' I don't have one.''

…..............................................


shah10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome..love it.
cant wait to how geet reachs home...
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Glad to see Geet going to college....and very interesting to meet the hot Dr. Armaan😉

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